The Fog Descends and Infinite Evolution Starts from Scratch
About This Novel
[Finished, new book in preparation...] Ji Ling is an ordinary office worker. After learning Morse code out of boredom, she accidentally heard the sound of rain reminding her to run quickly. However, before she had time to react, a disaster struck, and the crisis hidden under the red mist was endless. Only from mutated monsters, as well as people's hearts devoured by desire... The warning message in the sound of rain, the survival rules of the doomsday, and the secrets hidden behind the mutations gradually surfaced with the exploration of the protagonist group... (No CP, no golden fingers in the early stage, and the protagonist's friendship group.)
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 12d ago
The first person perspective greatly affects the sense of immersion! ! !
I don't know if it's because of your writing habits or because you have to write the foreshadowing in a narrative way, but if I add one to every sentence, I can't substitute it! Just like reading someone else's diary, I looked at the time and directly wrote and looked at the time. Wouldn't it be better this way? Have you tried reading the article you wrote? It's really strange!
Rating
Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 12d ago
The first person perspective greatly affects the sense of immersion! ! !
I don't know if it's because of your writing habits or because you have to write the foreshadowing in a narrative way, but if I add one to every sentence, I can't substitute it! Just like reading someone else's diary, I looked at the time and directly wrote and looked at the time. Wouldn't it be better this way? Have you tried reading the article you wrote? It's really strange!
