I Return from the Sea of ​​stars

Apart from anything else, let me give you a five-star review first. Why don't you finish writing "The Big World"?

At the beginning, I couldn't do five chapters a day.

It turns out that Yue Heng did not belong to the previous era. Due to the decision he made, he accidentally returned to his original world. This time, he should not be tired of his original world.

It's so sad that no one sees such a good thing.

It's interesting, the writing style is much improved compared to the previous book, and it's very exciting.

Yue Heng's reflexes are really good. The people who sneak attack are nothing to him. They are easily defeated by him, but he still has to be vigilant at all times and not take it lightly.

It's a good book, but when I saw the agreement, I was speechless. Isn't this obviously raising the enemy? During this period, the other party cannot be harmed. The key is that when the other party has the ability to leave the earth, the agreement will become invalid. Give the other party time to grow, and the agreement will still be invalid after the growth is completed. Is this trying to reproduce the tragedy of the previous life? It's really outrageous. This really feels like forced intelligence. If this is not modified, when this book becomes popular, a large group of people will complain about this.

Based on the emotional line issue, I can only give 3 stars. The emotional line is too abrupt, and the previous narration is not enough. It is like a sudden violence interspersed with it. The previous article said that the male protagonist died once, traveled once, and was reborn once. He has been a human being for three generations. He can't handle himself well. What's more, I want to talk about the heroine. The next few chapters are written around the heroine. However, I didn't expect the abruptness of the previous emotional line, making it difficult for readers to understand this behavior. It's like Tang San lost his wife and found a reincarnated wife in the blink of an eye. Please, how old is the male protagonist? Even if he didn't have a relationship in those lifetimes, he wouldn't be like this, not to mention that he had a relationship

I saw the protagonist say that going to college is the protagonist's dream in his first life, so it seems very unrealistic and unreasonable for the protagonist to fulfill his dream. If the protagonist does not have the life experience of the second life and the protagonist's prediction of the future, going to college is the only way for every ordinary person to change his destiny. But the protagonist is not the case. Dreams will continue to change as people grow older and expand their experience and horizons. For example, the dream of many teenagers in the 1990s was to grow up to be a gangster gangster. Why? It depends on your vision and environment, because back then the Young and Dangerous series, Chen Haonan Pheasant, etc. Were the idols of many young people. They followed suit. Just like when I was in junior high school, all the small groups in the school formed gangs and so on. Is this childish? Very childish, would you do it again? I'm sure 99% of people won't do this. That's why I say it's unreasonable. The protagonist's knowledge, vision, etc. Do not require the protagonist to waste time. Because it makes no sense

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