
Naruto Training King
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Hinata Kiyomi: "What? Are you saying that it's all because of me that the gentle, sweet and lovely Miss Hinata is like this?" Hinata Kiyomi: "Fart! There is absolutely nothing wrong with my education methods! It is the ninja world that is wrong!" Interviewer: "So, does Miss Hinata Hinata have anything to say to Mr. Kiyomi about this?" Hyuga Hinata: "Uh-huh... I have given all my heart to you. If you fall in love with someone else, I will be very sad to death--" Hinata Kiyomi: "Look, Hinata's gentle and gentle appearance is definitely not the crazy big sister you talk about..." While Hinata Kiyomi was talking and trying to prove himself, he didn't notice that the girl standing behind him had changed her appearance. His blue and white eyes were shining with a strange light, he held his rosy cheeks in his hands, his voice was low and hoarse, and he continued to narrate the half-sentence that he had not finished just now. "But others will die before me!" ----------------------------------This book is also known as "Hokage Picking Up Girls", "Ultra-limited Naruto", "Please call me Konoha MVP", "My Naruto Story of Youth is really okay"
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Official(87)Scraped 22d ago
The protagonist's idiot is a bit serious
There is a caged bird that doesn't know how to be patient to accumulate strength. You fool just don't take it seriously. Hey, your life is tough, right?
What's the use of the free attribute points at the beginning? It's been over 50 chapters and I haven't seen the protagonist use it at all. I might as well not write it. Bad review.
There is no need to give Hinata hope and give him the feeling of despair. Either you don't give him hope. You make it seem very ambiguous. You make me feel like you are a**, you know?
Come back and write a book for me, you arrogant bastard
We've almost reached the decisive battle, can't we continue? [Emot=default,12/]
Damn it, the book reviews are all based on trust! I can't stand it at all
Shouldn't the main plot be about girls' development? Since you helped to decide Hinata, and you can't bind anyone else, why are there so many ambiguous female characters? You cultivated and improved yourself at the same time. As a result, you improved your bloodline twice and your soul twice, but you didn't even fart. Are you still vowing to release the caged bird?
Two words masterpiece
No one has written a long review yet, so I will write the first one. This is purely a personal opinion, if you don't like it, just write a long review yourself. Undoubtedly, this work is worthy of its current rating of 9.0 And is a rare masterpiece. I will use the following aspects to demonstrate my point of view. 1⃣️Writing Unlike the four-year-old Mangekyo and the five-year-old Susanata Daibutsu of the same type in Naruto, using outrageous numerical values and outrageous plots to attract readers is not the path this article is going to take. Excellent writing style is one of the important reasons why this book can retain many readers. Taking the characters as an example, in the author's writings, I saw a real Hinata. His father's sternness and expectations, his tribe's ridicule and discussions, the depression caused by his status as heir, and the pain caused by not having enough to eat. These negative emotions seemed to be destroying this budding seedling bit by bit. Sitting with knees bent, he was restrained by feudal ethics; training hard, he was pressed by the status of the clan. She is from the Zong family, but she is more like a caged bird than the family. But it was precisely the depression at this time that was exchanged for Hinata's joy when she awakened, and it also brought me a different kind of touch. 2⃣️Settings Unlike other systematic texts of the same type, the golden fingers in this book have no sense of existence. It would not be inconsistent if replaced by other similar adventures in caves and picking up peerless martial arts. Hahaha. Moreover, the author's setting of the plot made my eyes shine. There are very few scenes in the whole story where mechanical deities appear for unknown reasons (except for Quan). The motivations of almost every character's behavior are well-founded (except for Quan), which makes it very comfortable to read. Regarding character creation, the author did not fall into clichés. For example, the old wall lamp Sandaime Hokage, who must appear in the early stages of all Naruto stories, the author did not portray him as a black and white character, but arranged a reasonable ending for him. Different from the clichéd "decent death", the author's arrangement of the third generation can be said to have given the character a new soul. 3⃣️Fighting So happy, this is the first word that popped into my mind after reading this article. Although it is not the ceiling of the industry, it can always make you immersed in the situation. What impressed me most in this article were the death battle between the protagonist and Neji, and the death battle between the third generation and Obito. The latter is the one I want to talk more about. In this battle of the third generation, I saw the ninjutsu talent of a ninjutsu professor, the fighting IQ of a shadow-level warrior and the awareness of a ninja hero. The author's setting gave the third generation a soul, and the death battle at the end of his life gave him a body. The soul and body merged into one to form this unique third generation. 4⃣️Benefits I like Xiaonan, the anchor understands what I mean. In addition, the shortcomings of this book are not without, the protagonist's IQ occasionally drops, Uchiha Izumi's ambiguous recognition of his master, and I was speechless when I thought of such a sweet couple when I was only six years old. . . But in short, the flaws do not hide the advantages, and it is not a bad point, but it will also dissuade some people. Such an excellent book, I think it should not stop here. Let's go to a bigger stage! Best wishes! (Also, I like Xiao Nan and hope to have a role in the future) t
You can give up after more than 80 chapters.
First of all, the first 70 chapters of this work are all about laying out the emotional line with Hinata, but the sudden appearance of Yakumo gives people a sense of collapse that Chiyo swimsuit seduces Ohnoki and gives birth to an illegitimate child, Rasa, and then instructs Scorpion to kill the third Kazekage, and then it jumps directly out of the spring. Just... It is equivalent to a deceptive introduction. Secondly, this article occasionally includes some crappy scenes written by novice students and then adds one or two incomprehensible words. The viewing experience continues to decline. Finally, let's return to the emotional line with Hinata. I have to say that the author's description of the daily love line is excellent. However, the male protagonist is a 19-year-old man who time travels and knows some of Hinata's expressions and actions towards the person he has a crush on in the original work. When the atmosphere is ambiguous, he is still playing the piano to a cow. Generally speaking, you can read the first 80 chapters, but proceed with caution afterward.
The author is 11 days old. When will you come back? If you die, finish writing the ending and die again. If that doesn't work, I'll help you buy a coffin.
Everything else is fine, except for Yakumo's part which is a bit hard to comment on. There's nothing wrong with changing the story from a single heroine to a harem, but it's very abstract without a good link, so it's a little difficult. Also, can we add more Hinata scenes? I didn't care about it before, but now I can see it. Now Konan has many more plots than Hinata, and even Hanabi has more appearances than Hinata. I came to see Hinata.
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Official(87)Scraped 22d ago
The protagonist's idiot is a bit serious
There is a caged bird that doesn't know how to be patient to accumulate strength. You fool just don't take it seriously. Hey, your life is tough, right?
What's the use of the free attribute points at the beginning? It's been over 50 chapters and I haven't seen the protagonist use it at all. I might as well not write it. Bad review.
There is no need to give Hinata hope and give him the feeling of despair. Either you don't give him hope. You make it seem very ambiguous. You make me feel like you are a**, you know?
Come back and write a book for me, you arrogant bastard
We've almost reached the decisive battle, can't we continue? [Emot=default,12/]
Damn it, the book reviews are all based on trust! I can't stand it at all
Shouldn't the main plot be about girls' development? Since you helped to decide Hinata, and you can't bind anyone else, why are there so many ambiguous female characters? You cultivated and improved yourself at the same time. As a result, you improved your bloodline twice and your soul twice, but you didn't even fart. Are you still vowing to release the caged bird?
Two words masterpiece
No one has written a long review yet, so I will write the first one. This is purely a personal opinion, if you don't like it, just write a long review yourself. Undoubtedly, this work is worthy of its current rating of 9.0 And is a rare masterpiece. I will use the following aspects to demonstrate my point of view. 1⃣️Writing Unlike the four-year-old Mangekyo and the five-year-old Susanata Daibutsu of the same type in Naruto, using outrageous numerical values and outrageous plots to attract readers is not the path this article is going to take. Excellent writing style is one of the important reasons why this book can retain many readers. Taking the characters as an example, in the author's writings, I saw a real Hinata. His father's sternness and expectations, his tribe's ridicule and discussions, the depression caused by his status as heir, and the pain caused by not having enough to eat. These negative emotions seemed to be destroying this budding seedling bit by bit. Sitting with knees bent, he was restrained by feudal ethics; training hard, he was pressed by the status of the clan. She is from the Zong family, but she is more like a caged bird than the family. But it was precisely the depression at this time that was exchanged for Hinata's joy when she awakened, and it also brought me a different kind of touch. 2⃣️Settings Unlike other systematic texts of the same type, the golden fingers in this book have no sense of existence. It would not be inconsistent if replaced by other similar adventures in caves and picking up peerless martial arts. Hahaha. Moreover, the author's setting of the plot made my eyes shine. There are very few scenes in the whole story where mechanical deities appear for unknown reasons (except for Quan). The motivations of almost every character's behavior are well-founded (except for Quan), which makes it very comfortable to read. Regarding character creation, the author did not fall into clichés. For example, the old wall lamp Sandaime Hokage, who must appear in the early stages of all Naruto stories, the author did not portray him as a black and white character, but arranged a reasonable ending for him. Different from the clichéd "decent death", the author's arrangement of the third generation can be said to have given the character a new soul. 3⃣️Fighting So happy, this is the first word that popped into my mind after reading this article. Although it is not the ceiling of the industry, it can always make you immersed in the situation. What impressed me most in this article were the death battle between the protagonist and Neji, and the death battle between the third generation and Obito. The latter is the one I want to talk more about. In this battle of the third generation, I saw the ninjutsu talent of a ninjutsu professor, the fighting IQ of a shadow-level warrior and the awareness of a ninja hero. The author's setting gave the third generation a soul, and the death battle at the end of his life gave him a body. The soul and body merged into one to form this unique third generation. 4⃣️Benefits I like Xiaonan, the anchor understands what I mean. In addition, the shortcomings of this book are not without, the protagonist's IQ occasionally drops, Uchiha Izumi's ambiguous recognition of his master, and I was speechless when I thought of such a sweet couple when I was only six years old. . . But in short, the flaws do not hide the advantages, and it is not a bad point, but it will also dissuade some people. Such an excellent book, I think it should not stop here. Let's go to a bigger stage! Best wishes! (Also, I like Xiao Nan and hope to have a role in the future) t
You can give up after more than 80 chapters.
First of all, the first 70 chapters of this work are all about laying out the emotional line with Hinata, but the sudden appearance of Yakumo gives people a sense of collapse that Chiyo swimsuit seduces Ohnoki and gives birth to an illegitimate child, Rasa, and then instructs Scorpion to kill the third Kazekage, and then it jumps directly out of the spring. Just... It is equivalent to a deceptive introduction. Secondly, this article occasionally includes some crappy scenes written by novice students and then adds one or two incomprehensible words. The viewing experience continues to decline. Finally, let's return to the emotional line with Hinata. I have to say that the author's description of the daily love line is excellent. However, the male protagonist is a 19-year-old man who time travels and knows some of Hinata's expressions and actions towards the person he has a crush on in the original work. When the atmosphere is ambiguous, he is still playing the piano to a cow. Generally speaking, you can read the first 80 chapters, but proceed with caution afterward.
The author is 11 days old. When will you come back? If you die, finish writing the ending and die again. If that doesn't work, I'll help you buy a coffin.
Everything else is fine, except for Yakumo's part which is a bit hard to comment on. There's nothing wrong with changing the story from a single heroine to a harem, but it's very abstract without a good link, so it's a little difficult. Also, can we add more Hinata scenes? I didn't care about it before, but now I can see it. Now Konan has many more plots than Hinata, and even Hanabi has more appearances than Hinata. I came to see Hinata.
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★★☆☆☆ A slow but passable fic. But regardless of how it is written, can anyone really replace a kid who is twelve or thirteen years old as his girlfriend?




Hinata Qinghai: "What? You said that it's all because of me that the gentle, elegant and cute Miss Hinata is like this?" Hinata Kiyomi: "Fart! There is absolutely nothing wrong with my education methods! It is this ninja world that is wrong!" Interviewer: "So, does Ms. Hinata Hinata have anything to say to Mr. Kiyomi about this? Hinata Hinata: "Naru... I give my heart to you. If you fall in love with someone else, I will be sad to death." Hinata Qinghai: "Look, Hinata's gentle and gentle appearance is definitely not the crazy big sister you talk about..." Just when Hinata Kiyoshi was talking and trying to prove himself, he didn't notice that the girl standing behind him had changed her appearance. His blue and white eyes were shining with a strange light, he held his rosy cheeks in his hands, his voice was low and hoarse, and he continued to narrate the half-sentence that he had not finished just now. "But others will die before me! This book is also known as "The King of Hokage's Picking Up Girls", "Unrestricted Naruto", "Please Call Me Konoha MVP", "My Naruto Story of Youth is Surely OK"




★★★★☆ Damn it, if you don't know how to write an introduction, don't write it.













