
Marvel's Saiyans
About This Novel
A meteor streaks across the sky in Brooklyn, USA. In the impact crater, the spherical aircraft slowly opened, and out came a boy with a weird hairstyle and wearing a combat uniform. If you look carefully, you can see a fluffy tail swaying from side to side behind the boy. "Dragon Balls, here I come!"
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Official(10)Scraped 20d ago
Battle book in the trash
In particular, it says that the combat power is 1, why don't you write that you are from Earth? What thoughts? What idea? I don't know any writing style, so Xiaobaishu is destined not to be popular.
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You are really good at writing. Even elementary school students are better than you.
Um😓Don't you think you made Saiyans weak?
Saiyans are very strong, but your performance is a bit insufficient.
Can I give you an opinion?
Super One doesn't change, you just become Super Blue. It's a bit ahead of its time, you have to eat the food one bite at a time. Isn't Captain America frozen? Here's the plot. How to develop? You are invincible in front of you, how can you have any expectations behind you?
Kill the postdoc.
Captain America wants to avenge the doctor. He rushes over, carries the protagonist on his back and lies on the ground. Then you can pretend to yell, "What a super soldier?" They are not enough to give me a fight. They have to have the tendency to lock me in others. Who else? If it doesn't work, it's over.
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Your title is great, it might become popular. Don't write a protagonist who is too boring, otherwise it will be boring.
I wish the pig's feet had the same bloodline as Broly, what a shame!
I wish the pig's feet had the same bloodline as Broly, what a shame!
sofa
If you dare to update, I will give you recommendation votes if you dare to read it.
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Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 20d ago
Battle book in the trash
In particular, it says that the combat power is 1, why don't you write that you are from Earth? What thoughts? What idea? I don't know any writing style, so Xiaobaishu is destined not to be popular.
6
You are really good at writing. Even elementary school students are better than you.
Um😓Don't you think you made Saiyans weak?
Saiyans are very strong, but your performance is a bit insufficient.
Can I give you an opinion?
Super One doesn't change, you just become Super Blue. It's a bit ahead of its time, you have to eat the food one bite at a time. Isn't Captain America frozen? Here's the plot. How to develop? You are invincible in front of you, how can you have any expectations behind you?
Kill the postdoc.
Captain America wants to avenge the doctor. He rushes over, carries the protagonist on his back and lies on the ground. Then you can pretend to yell, "What a super soldier?" They are not enough to give me a fight. They have to have the tendency to lock me in others. Who else? If it doesn't work, it's over.
Update
Your title is great, it might become popular. Don't write a protagonist who is too boring, otherwise it will be boring.
I wish the pig's feet had the same bloodline as Broly, what a shame!
I wish the pig's feet had the same bloodline as Broly, what a shame!
sofa
If you dare to update, I will give you recommendation votes if you dare to read it.















