I Have Nine Dragons

The first point is, you can't keep books! ! ! You can't keep books! ! You can't keep books! I saw several comments in the comments talking about raising books, but the author didn't even try to persuade them! ? Why can't you keep a book? [Pushing glasses] [Knocking on the blackboard... Listen up] First of all, this book must be on PK. Is it a recommendation vote if it is on PK? No, what I'm looking at is the following and ongoing reading! ! That's how many people watched the latest chapter! [Knocking on the blackboard] The second point is that the author's genre can be placed in fantasy, but I personally think it can be placed in the second dimension (just like the difference between ten people sharing a cake and a hundred people sharing a cake. There are definitely more recommendations for the second dimension than fantasy. After all, there are too many fantasy books) The third point is that the author should pay attention to the matching of the book title and the plot (a small suggestion is that the author can change the title of the book or change the introduction to be related to the title of the book). Such a seemingly drastic change will cause a decline in popularity, but it will be easier to attract readers later [pushing glasses] [knocking on the blackboard] Also, if this world is dominated by cards, you can write as little as possible about the rest! ---- Forget it, stop reading, I will keep watching you. Who knows if the author will be stupid...

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I just read a few chapters Disadvantages: The writing of this book is okay, and the outline setting is also good, but the plot is a bit vulgar. In fact, many people have written about this routine, but why is the author's rating so low? First of all, the author's writing style is more than a little better than this plot routine, and it is easy to create a contrast. Secondly, the plot of this book is too pale and lacks innovation. Then, the gap between the novel setting and delicate writing style and the plot is too big, which can easily lead others to think that this book is poor. Also, this book is positioned as a simple and refreshing article, but the writing style is not delicate enough. Advantages: The setting is novel. This kind of card flow is still relatively rare in Genesis. There are no particularly popular works, so the author's writing is not as easy to contrast with many popular books like other new books. In short, there is no better-looking card type to compare with, so as long as the plot is good, the writing is good, and the settings are good, the non-toxic points will definitely be popular. The writing style is delicate, which can be both a shortcoming and an advantage. According to the plot of this book, it should be delicate in the places where it should be delicate (I just discussed this with other writers in the group before.) Those small things do not need to be described in delicate writing. It's probably because the author is a woman, and the writing is more delicate. The rhythm must be controlled well, and the world view must be introduced appropriately. You can prepare in advance for changing the map in the future, so that it will not appear so abrupt (Zhai Zhu's lotus-style map writing method). ------ Occasionally summarize the author's style!

According to the format of Yaochen, write it down and I will select the best ones.

First. This book is still well written. A little creative. But the key is too complex. It's just that the author's logic is broken but not perfect. With this martial arts training, it is both a soul and a star card. The structure in between is very unclear, and the fundamental logic in this world cannot be seen. Second, too many emotional dramas are not a good thing. TV dramas in the past were good to watch without being laggy. There are almost no special effects or anything like that. Now it's all dragging on cliche emotional drama. Second, the protagonist's character is not obvious. I will repay you 10 times if you hurt my loved ones. I have seen too many such plots. And it doesn't look like either. Third, fighting method. What is the mainstream fighting method in this society? Star card or character duel. Which one is better? The author didn't explain it clearly at all. Writing star cards like this is a joke. If the star card is not powerful in combat, then there is no value in creating it. If it's strong, then it's a waste of time to fight alone.

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The author is cute, cute and easy to push down, and he will answer all questions.

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Who comes first? Quotations on earth, such as how to control him, and such as we are born free, who dares to be superior. These jokes from the world before the protagonist travels should not be said from the mouth of another world. It feels very awkward (at least to me). It is okay to say it from the mouth of the protagonist, so as not to be too boring. Occasionally a little funny bickering is okay, but if it is too funny, it will be a bit outweighed by the gain. After all, you are writing a fantasy novel from another world. I still need to work hard to write something that fits the atmosphere of another world. Finally, regarding star cards, anime character authors can consider Death, Naruto, Pirates, Fairy Tail, etc., Chinese comics Under One Man, Douluo Dalu, Wu Dong Qian Kun, Zhenhun Street, etc., Journey to the West, The List of Gods, the Three Kingdoms of Qin and Han, as well as the demons of the great world, and the protagonists and supporting roles in various great god novels. Having said so much, I hope the author can adopt it. The plot is good, keep up the good work.

I have ordered this book to be number one on the list. Who agrees? Who objects?