Crazy Primitive Society

As of now, I don't know how many people have actually read the fish cage book. The more I check the information, the more confused I become. According to records, Emperor Yan Shennong and Huang Emperor Xuanyuan are brothers, but when Huang Emperor tried to unify, Emperor Yan was already the sixth generation. This time does not match up. Also, the East China Sea is now It refers to the Yellow Sea, but Emperor Yan was also in Shaanxi recently. How did his youngest daughter Jingwei go to the Yellow Sea to reclaim the sea? Yu? Chi You's surname was Jiang, and Shen Nong's surname was also Jiang. I wouldn't believe it if you said it didn't matter, but how did Chi You end up in Shandong? Qiang Liang and Kua Fu both live in Dahuang. Why does one live in Tiangui, North Pole, and the other in Fengtian, Chengdu? Huangdi's minister Fenghou was named Feng, and he was obviously from the same clan as Fuxi. How could he be found on the beach? Don't you know if you don't check this? This investigation... Why was China so chaotic during the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors era? This is really amazing. The chaos all over the world came together, especially Qiang Liang. It is also said that he lived near the Bering Strait, which is bordered by Indian mythology. This... Let me write it! I beg you for specific historical facts... This area is so chaotic that I'm scratching my head! ! ! !

The protagonist's brainwashing is too light. There are still people who betray him. There are still people in the tribe who resist him. I suggest that the witch be killed or married. Also, there must be military training. Modern military training will definitely scorn people from the primitive era. The protagonist is too weak. You don't want the protagonist to become stronger. At least let him train a little bit, right?

The timeline at the beginning was an era before the Stone Age even happened. . . Some people may think that maybe this tribe does not know how to make stone tools, but Xuanyuan appears later. When mentioning Xuanyuan, it is easy to think of Xuanyuan Sword. We already have swords, and it is already the Bronze Age. However, there is a tribe not far away that does not even have stone tools, nor pottery. . . At the beginning, the author described the situation as if the dominance of Homo sapiens had just evolved, and the one holding a certain animal tooth was the boss. . . I mentioned at the beginning that I had been looking for fire for a long time, but how could I find any stone tools? Later, a child was bitten to death by a poisonous snake, and more than a hundred people followed him. More than twenty people were poisoned to death along the way and left the cave to find flat ground? ? ? Sorry, I laughed at the comment, but when I got to the plain, I burned the grass on fire? ? ? It turns out that it's late autumn, will the grass grow on its own without wind? ? ? Are you sure the grass is moving? Have you ever heard of cows and sheep being seen in the wind? I don't know how many years it has not been pruned. It's good if you can look straight at it. You can see it from an 800-meter-high tree. Burning grass in the back is like the autumn solstice. Then burn the grass, take over the grass and build a house? ? ? It's autumn and winter is coming soon. How can we survive after building a house? The house is leaking. . . The fur is hard, and the stone tools don't have the oil you can expect them to scrape on the skin? That thing can be used as a wooden board. . . Although it is indeed quite bad, after all, you can charge for writing 90 chapters. Compared with writing for a fee for 30 chapters, the author still has a conscience. Maybe he doesn't have enough money and writes less. After all, most high-quality novels with good reputations charge more than 100 chapters. However, there are rumors in the society that college students work for illiterate bosses, and the novels are garbage and charge early. I can't comment on this. This thing is like buying vegetables. Other stalls sell it for one dollar, and that stall sells it for one and a half. You have to know half of it and think in your heart, do you have a good conscience?

The description of the war is pretty good, but it's not fair to the protagonist. It just seems to make it more difficult for the protagonist. For example, the Huaxia tribe lost two battles, and countless thousands of people died, but in the end, hundreds of thousands more people came out in the fight with the protagonist. Oh my god, there are so many people fighting Jiuli, tens of thousands of people each time, it's not like playing. Jiuli attacked tens of thousands of people every time, and after almost all of them died, they attacked tens of thousands more the next time. For example, tens of thousands of people were attacked by Gongsun Shaodian, and a lot of them died, and a lot of people were killed when they joined forces to attack Huaxia, and then they were almost killed when they attacked Shennong, but in the end, thousands of people were randomly pulled out. These piles can add up to over 100,000 yuan, but why are there always tens of thousands of people fighting in front of them? And the protagonist likes to make weapons and give them away when he has nothing to do. Doesn't he know the importance of plundering the population? Moreover, the number of troops has never been increased. It's ridiculous. Why don't the people who were fused by Huaxia and Jiuli have any revenge? The protagonist has someone who wants to avenge his tribe every three days. Moreover, like Emperor Yan, Chi You, and Shen Nong casually killed subordinate clan leaders. This is unreasonable. How come the clan members who were killed did not take revenge?

In such a dangerous world, since the male protagonist leads the tribesmen to build houses on the plains, I feel that the male protagonist is particularly stupid. He is talking about animals in some primitive era. The animals are very big. Many of them are more than ten meters in size. There are also many poisonous plants and giant insects. The houses built by the male bishop's tribesmen are not strong and sturdy. There are no high walls and towers outside, and no manpower is arranged to guard the tribe at night. Everyone is sleeping. Can the inferior houses of their tribe keep out the danger? I don't know if they are still hiding on the plain openly. Looking at their stupidity is like a piece of fat to other tribes, and it is also a piece of fat to other animals. Other tribes know that they should hide when their own tribe is not strong, but the male protagonist is stupidly exposed and becomes the target of public criticism. He is not telling other tribes. Luo, come and attack us. Aren't you telling other animals to come and eat us? The knowledge he knows that modern people must build houses on the plains is only suitable for modern people and not suitable for tribal people in the primitive era. The primitive era was too dangerous and there were not many people in their tribe. They only had more than a hundred people and were not suitable to live in the plains. They were small and lived in such a wide place. When danger came, there was no danger in hiding. The male protagonist's IQ is not up to par, he doesn't have modern knowledge, and he doesn't remember much, nor does he have enough force value.

I am a newbie to Yucong, and I have been adjusting my outline while writing. Recently, I finally adjusted part of it, so I can spend more time coding. Thanks to everyone's continued support of recommendation votes, I am thinking about adding updates appropriately. The rules are as follows: Within a week, one chapter will be added for every 100 recommendation votes. Thank you all.

If you don't know how to write, write rubbish.

Pig's trotters are still too kind, not decisive enough in killing, and lack courage.

That witch tribe is so cruel and yet they don't kill all of you. If you don't kill them all, let it go. At least kill the leader. You actually let such a cruel person join, otherwise they would have the chance to kill you all. To assimilate, you must also choose some moderate tribes. Such a cruel person can only kill all the slaves, but if there are too many people to watch, the leading few should be killed.

As a time-travel-themed, primitive-style farming novel, this book falls apart from the beginning. There are too many problems with character creation, especially the protagonist. People created by modern society can be thousands of times more effective if they are thrown into a primitive society and are safe and have sufficient manpower. It is not as simple as 1+1. With the development of society and the progress of science and technology, modern people's minds can no longer be measured by common sense. However, the biggest failure in the process of shaping the protagonist of this book is that the character is not modern enough, giving people the impression that the protagonist may not be a modern person, but a person from the 1940s and 1950s. With such an illusion, has the crisis awareness of modern people degenerated? , No, on the contrary, modern people, the more developed the city, the stronger the human sense of crisis. There are many factors involved, and one of them is survival. From the beginning of the book, it is mentioned that the protagonist belongs to a working class and is still running for a living. So after time travel, the protagonist seems to have lost this due sense of crisis, and completely There is no awareness and measures to prevent safety hazards in the new environment. I don't know what the author was thinking at the time. Maybe the author himself did not realize that the protagonist has returned to the primitive era and has not yet removed himself from the modern city. When he realizes this, his thoughts of being self-centered and invested in primitive society will be completely different.