The Reborn Wife is a Bit Sweet

The plot design is very interesting, which made me enjoy watching it with endless aftertaste. Although I just took a casual look at it at first, I was completely attracted by it later.

I like this kind of novel where the style of describing the protagonist is particularly to my liking, and some of the descriptions really speak to my heart. I think the writing is so good that I just can't help but support it.

This novel written by the author seems to have concise language, fresh writing style, ups and downs of the plot, and the character creation is also very appropriate. It must be supported!

The heroine is really both charming and intelligent, and she's stupid as hell. I really don't know where she went in her last life. I don't expect the heroine to become a strong woman, but don't become so stupid! ! !

Let me ask you a question: do you believe there is pure friendship between men and women?

Do you like pampering or abuse, do you like the heroine to be powerful or domineering or ordinary, do you like cute animals and plants... If you have any comments, please feel free to leave a message, Hongdou will consider it carefully

The plot is so boring that one thing can be said in just a few sentences. The least you can do is write a chapter. For example, how many words did you write in this paragraph? You can succinctly and concisely write a paragraph that is so long. Originally you could have said, 'Originally Mrs. Bai didn't like her. Her favorite was her late daughter-in-law Yang Baihe'. You have added too many words, and the reading is awkward and convoluted. At the end of the section about Yang Baihe's illness, you can write, "Yang Baihe lost her health after giving birth to a child, and then she got a serious illness, and she passed away like that." It's also clearer than your original sentence. Your entire article is full of bad sentences. I won't go into detail below. Hope it can be changed. Today's rebirth literature is not very interesting, especially those who were reborn in the 1970s or 1960s. If you want to write, please go through the files from that time. One more thing, the heroine's name is too vulgar.

I thought it was pretty good before, but now I feel a little disgusted. I don't agree with the heroine's attitude towards her grandfather and the hero. I don't talk about the plot with the hero in her previous life, but just say that the hero has been good to her in this life, and she shouldn't treat him like this. It's a bit unfair, and she feels so wronged to the hero! The same goes for her grandfather, who didn't show any kindness in raising her. He made all kinds of demands as soon as he recognized her. I want to ask him how he has the nerve to take care of the heroine. He relies on his old age to support her. He thinks it's all for the heroine's good and doesn't ask other people's opinions. Many people hate this kind of old man! As a result, the heroine is still in a dilemma. What is there to be embarrassed about? Shouldn't it be for the hero to express his position more firmly? As long as she really makes it clear to her grandfather, there will be no big problem. What is written now is all nonsense, irritability, and personal opinions. If you don't like it, don't comment!

The female protagonist feels more pretentious. She is worried about this and that. She wants to impose her own ideas on others. She wants to bring the male protagonist into contact with others. She also wants to hug the male protagonist's lap. She also has a lot of worries so that he can lead the male protagonist in the future. He interferes in the middle. As a result, the female protagonist likes the male protagonist. The male protagonist had previously tolerated other girls because of her. Finally, he confessed to her after he couldn't bear it any more. Then the female protagonist was shocked. Knowing that the male protagonist would like her, she refused to be with him. She felt sorry for the girl she matched, and she felt that she was not worthy of the male protagonist, so she acted in various ways. As a result, the male protagonist went to the girl to tell her that he liked the female protagonist, and the girl sadly quit. In the end, the female protagonist played various chase and hide games with the male protagonist, and they ended up happily together

The heroine's parents have already appeared. I think the heroine's mother is Mr. Qin's daughter, and her father is probably that Principal Wei. Principal Wei must be a scumbag, right? This book is worth at least 3,000 yuan, and 5,000 yuan would not be surprising.