The Sword of the Heavens Emerges from the Blue Clouds

I haven't read it yet, but I guess it's not that good because the reviews are all 5 stars, so I'll probably delete them.

To be honest, this book is one of the better among the Zhu Xian fanfics I have read. The only bad point is the emotional line of the protagonist. It doesn't matter that the heroine is the Suzaku Messenger. It is also written inexplicably. The protagonist likes her for no reason. The woman is also amazing. She originally liked Wan Jianyi, but suddenly she fell in love with the protagonist. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just don't write them. What you write is too poisonous.

Your relationship line is a little bit serious. Others have lived for decades and fell in love all at once. And others have been hurt once, so how can you be so easy to get emotional? Will you believe in love after being hurt once?

I really feel sorry for the money spent. The main character is a hypocrite, even more disgusting than Tang San. Pretending to be superior, self-righteous, extremely hypocritical, really disgusting.

It was said that he was a genius for one year, but he never rose to the ninth level of Jade Clear Realm.

It was so embarrassing to read the chapter about the Dripping Cave.

Please, please don't make the world of fairy tales modern, otherwise it won't have a fairy flavor! After all, it is a novel based on Zhu Xian, so at least respect the Xianxia worldview~_~.

I hate Lu Xueqi for blocking the road. I feel worthless for Baguio. It's not worth 10 years of unrequited love when you stand in front of him

What did you write? , The two books written are the same, which makes me uncomfortable to read. I was deleted and banned without even rating it. Is it funny? You don't know how to listen to readers' opinions and you just write blindly. You can't even write basic characters and plots well. Can't you learn some?

As long as the back doesn't collapse, it's definitely good grass.