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When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses Exhibition is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise starts to sound, and the dead numbers are collected. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voice of praise will The sound became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the scholar's debate was deafening, and his tolerant attitude was deafening. The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are twenty, the bookworm's memories have a place for you, that is, Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark traces. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them The problem all comes from insufficient updates.

After reading ten chapters, Chapter Seven boasted about how awesome Cthulhu is, and Chapter Eight said that because of fear, the protagonist of Cthulhu would visit relatives and friends to search for Taiyi, the secret method of enlightenment. Chapter 9 and Chapter 10 are the author's personal understanding of Journey to the West.

The Three Steps are nothing like Cthulhu. What is power? What is controlled by oneself is power, what is not controlled is bomb.

Shui is inconsistent. One moment he says that Zhu Bajie values ​​emotion and righteousness, and the next moment he says that Zhu Bajie is ruthless and unrighteous. There are also a bunch of inexplicable ideological descriptions, a bunch of conspiracy theories, and he also says he doesn't think too much. Isn't it just fun to read a novel? There are many of these.

The whole story is about what the protagonist thinks and what the supporting characters think. They are all ideological activities. I can think of several chapters at a time.

My first feeling was that I was forcing myself to perform a one-man show, which was all talking to myself, and I couldn't stand it.

The essence of a novel is a story. If there is no story, what you write here can be summarized in one sentence, Tieshan, I will go around, 120 years have passed. A story of a dozen words uses tens of thousands of words of foot-binding cloth.

A bunch of boring private goods, no plot, no fun

I don't check the information at all and rely on my own imagination to write about the world of the group members.

I just read Chapter 9. The plot is just a hodgepodge, some from the original, some from the second, and some from the third. In order to keep myself down, I crazily praise Cthulhu and Outer God. I can't stand it anymore.