Develop the World from One Person

The theme, story, and chosen world are okay, but does the author feel it's too ink? There's a lot of nonsense. Instead of writing about serious things, you can see the main character looking at the joke with a playful smile. What's the point of writing a lot of nonsense? It's not funny at all. It just feels like ink and water.

To be honest, I don't want to give any points. It's not that the subject matter is bad, on the contrary, the subject matter of traveling across the country is very novel. But the author's writing skills are too poor. The protagonist is in his 30s? Teenagers all know to be serious when they should be serious. After reading more than twenty chapters, the protagonist looked frizzy from beginning to end. The same goes for other characters, including Xing Zhe and others, who are also insiders, especially the torture officer. People who work in the intelligence department must be bold and careful. As a result, most people turned into grumpy old men. A character who is ready to cut with a knife? In the first different world, no matter who the other party is, just use words to criticize them and reveal their background in front of them. What does this mean? Just to make yourself happy? Definitely never died. Do you really think that your bodyguards are all invincible? Facing unknown powers, facing the entire alien world, there is no sense of awe. If you weren't the protagonist of such an offending person, you really wouldn't be able to live for more than a few days. To put it nicely, it means that newborn calves are not afraid of tigers, but to say it worse, it relies on the power of others. Everyone, yes, everyone's lines in the first twenty chapters have the character of a young boy. The only one who is better is Feng Baobao, because he only has a few lines.

We have to talk about Guo Yi. This idea is really avant-garde. He really wants to leave things like time travel to young people in their 20s, but why did he become him so early? This is really not good.

Such a stupid protagonist, who still cooperates with the state when he has no strength, is as right as a conspirator. If I were the main character, I wouldn't be so stupid. Even if you want to cooperate with the country, you have to wait until you have the invincible strength to ignore everything. Only then will they choose to cooperate with the country.

The protagonist's character is too exciting. Is a 30-year-old person so exciting?

How many people have survived Chapter 10, ah ah ah

The protagonist is really not well set up. The plot is okay. It's quite interesting to lead a country through time and establish the alliance of the heavens. But this protagonist... The character design is so rubbish! ! ! I can't watch it and it's all the protagonist's fault.

If the beginning is true, I think most people will give up.

I can't stand it after reading the first 5 chapters. The main character is here to disgust people.

What the hell? Unable to pass urine and feces, madness reduces intelligence,