The Floating World of Xiyun Tower

A girl is like a hibiscus emerging from clear water, and the natural ornaments are removed A man is like jade to a stranger, and a young man is unparalleled in the world The author embodies the artistic conception of Chinese style and ink painting with his profound textual background. Just like the flowing water on a small bridge in the south of the Yangtze River, in the spring of March, the fragrance of light tea in the attic of the wooden house comes to life. Here are some humble opinions 1. Segmentation problem. It is recommended to avoid long paragraphs of narration, otherwise it will not only be visually unsightly, but also cause readers to ignore some details in the entire text when reading. 2. Pay attention to the coherence and logic of plot development. Although the author's description is meticulous, he must not ignore the details in the development of the plot. For example, how was Mo Yu's attention attracted by the woman's story at the beginning? Although he seemed careless at first, he hesitated for a moment, but for some reason he readily agreed to listen to the woman tell her story? I think these need to be described. Another example is when Liu Yanyu was blocked from meeting a woman and was carried home by a strong man. The plot was a bit pale. Tang Ziyuliu