
The Final Trial of Death
by There Are Two People Outside The Window
About This Novel
This is a trial ground for selecting divine generals, but all trialists call it the death trial ground. Here, failure means death. And success is out of reach. Travel through unknown worlds and use your life to complete trial tasks one after another until you die or pass the final trial.
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Official(5)Scraped 7d ago
Let me tell you my opinion. The subject matter of your book is very good, and the main plot is also good.
How should I put it, there is a woman in the first world, and the setting is more like a drag from the Virgin. Not necessarily a drag though. But it still looks disgusting. If you want to set up a female character, you can postpone the next few dozen pictures. If you start with a female character like this, the first few chapters are quite enjoyable. Once I see this, I don't want to read anymore. I know you want to set up a team even if I don't read on. But when you set up a team, you can also set up a male character. I'm not looking down on women. I just think it would look better if you don't set a female character in the first few dozen pictures. And you can also set the girl to transition to these two or three worlds and add them on, although I don't know about other old bookworms. Like it or not. I want to see more (Although I don't know whether your book is a dark novel or a saintly novel) The beginning of this meaning is the heroine or the second heroine, who usually has a harem or something. I don't want to read this kind of thing after reading too much. I started reading novels in 2013, ranging from urban, fairy tale, fantasy, games, military, science fiction and horror. Especially the infinite streams and apocalyptic ones, I watched them too much, and halfway through I realized that it was The Virgin, which was disgusting. Originally you were writing about darkness, right? Especially those who save this, save that and so on,
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I think this book called Death Trial should contain less trivia and the protagonist should be cold-blooded.
I want to ask how many heroines there are?
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Official(5)Scraped 7d ago
Let me tell you my opinion. The subject matter of your book is very good, and the main plot is also good.
How should I put it, there is a woman in the first world, and the setting is more like a drag from the Virgin. Not necessarily a drag though. But it still looks disgusting. If you want to set up a female character, you can postpone the next few dozen pictures. If you start with a female character like this, the first few chapters are quite enjoyable. Once I see this, I don't want to read anymore. I know you want to set up a team even if I don't read on. But when you set up a team, you can also set up a male character. I'm not looking down on women. I just think it would look better if you don't set a female character in the first few dozen pictures. And you can also set the girl to transition to these two or three worlds and add them on, although I don't know about other old bookworms. Like it or not. I want to see more (Although I don't know whether your book is a dark novel or a saintly novel) The beginning of this meaning is the heroine or the second heroine, who usually has a harem or something. I don't want to read this kind of thing after reading too much. I started reading novels in 2013, ranging from urban, fairy tale, fantasy, games, military, science fiction and horror. Especially the infinite streams and apocalyptic ones, I watched them too much, and halfway through I realized that it was The Virgin, which was disgusting. Originally you were writing about darkness, right? Especially those who save this, save that and so on,
Support, support
come on
Keep updated and persistent.
I think this book called Death Trial should contain less trivia and the protagonist should be cold-blooded.
I want to ask how many heroines there are?









