The Era of National Lords: I Can Sign in and Clock In

I am a new author, and the plot development is just like that. According to my own ideas and wishes, it may be bad, slow, or not good. You can bring it up, but don't just say you don't want to read it anymore. Just let the author speak directly. I deleted it immediately when I saw it. I write based on my personal interests. I post it online in the hope that there will be a sense of recognition and that someone can support the author instead of coming here to cause trouble. If you feel bad, you can write the bad points here. If you don't want to read it, just leave silently. I thank you all in advance.

△Brothers are happy and happy. I seem to have watched the Liu Cong map activity of the Buddha of the Academy of Sciences. They all took a bath. The DJ was in the V-collar. The big slacker degree v promotes rowing. I came to you to play with the hungry zombies. Pick me up. V Daddy, don't go. Oh, you are better than me. V Technique. V Just forget about me. Look, isn't it for me? Off-duty chick beep beep hi oh me oh oh 'new so and me um Xu ice cream ye MVDJ version you are my A V is better than me, don't lose. I compare, excluding Bo. I don't look at it. Let me take a written test and report it. Bo. SB. I read the accounting statements on Weibo. JJ. I still remember that economic construction is fussy. Then you are the one. No. 10 Jingdong i donkey-hide gelatin and oh scheming faster △ brothers are happy and happy as if they have seen Liu Cong map activities of the Buddha of the Academy of Sciences, pull them out and pay them all from oh bathing oh DJ in the V collar big lazy insect degree v promote row V customer basic accounting to make a pair Pull out the next home-cooked dish, Bofo Dongxu-u, it hurts to death and is empty at home. Haha, anime character body. I have started to care about low-cut clothes. I want to wear some pants. I want to go to get out of class quickly. Yesterday, I said that dancing is reopened and cooking is done. Brother Butterfly, I, I, my* saliva, I I don't think it's a low-priced egg pancake. I'm here to play with you. Hungry zombies. Pick me up. V Dad won't go. Oh, he's better than me. V is more technical. V Just forget about me. Look, isn't it for me? Off-duty chick beep beep hi oh I oh oh 'New so and I um Xu ice cream ye MVDJ version You are my AV, it's better than me, don't lose, I compare, excluding Bo, I don't look at it, let me take a written test, report it, Bo SB, I read the Weibo accounting report, JJ still remembers the economic construction, then you are yours*#[Prize] Madam, the boss's...# No. 10 Jingdong i donkey-hide gelatin and oh scheming faster △ brothers are happy and happy as if they have seen Liu Cong map activities of the Buddha of the Academy of Sciences, pull them out and pay them all from oh bathing oh DJ in the V collar big lazy insect degree v promote row V customer basic accounting to make a pair Pull out the next home-cooked dish, Bofo Dongxu-u, it hurts to death and is empty at home. Haha, anime character body. I have started to care about low-cut clothes. I want to wear some pants. I want to go to get out of class quickly. Yesterday, I said that dancing is reopened and cooking is done. Brother Butterfly, I, I, my* saliva, I I don't think it's a low-priced egg pancake. I'm here to play with you. Hungry zombies. Pick me up. V Dad won't go. Oh, he's better than me. V is more technical. V Just forget about me. Look, isn't it for me? Off-duty chick beep beep hi oh I oh oh 'New so and I um Xu ice cream ye MVDJ version You are my AV, it's better than me, don't lose, I compare, excluding Bo, I don't look at it, let me take a written test, report it, Bo SB, I read the Weibo accounting report, JJ still remembers the economic construction, then you are yours*#[Prize] Madam, the boss's...# No. 10 Jingdong i donkey-hide gelatin and oh scheming faster △ brothers are happy and happy as if they have seen Liu Cong map activities of the Buddha of the Academy of Sciences, pull them out and pay them all from oh bathing oh DJ in the V collar big lazy insect degree v promote row V customer basic accounting to make a pair Pull out the next home-cooked dish, Bofo Dongxu-u, it hurts to death and is empty at home. Haha, anime character body. I have started to care about low-cut clothes. I want to wear some pants. I want to go to get out of class quickly. Yesterday, I said that dancing is reopened and cooking is done. Brother Butterfly, I, I, my* saliva, I I don't think it's a low-priced egg pancake. I'm here to play with you. Hungry zombies. Pick me up. V Dad won't go. Oh, he's better than me. V is more technical. V Just forget about me. Look, isn't it for me? Off-duty chick beep beep hi oh I oh oh 'New so and I um Xu ice cream ye MVDJ version You are my AV, it's better than me, don't lose, I compare, excluding Bo, I don't look at it, let me take a written test, report it, Bo SB, I read the Weibo accounting report, JJ still remembers the economic construction, then you are yours*#[Prize] Madam, the boss's...# No. 10 Jingdong i donkey-hide gelatin and oh scheming faster △ brothers are happy and happy as if they have seen Liu Cong map activities of the Buddha of the Academy of Sciences, pull them out and pay them all from oh bathing oh DJ in the V collar big lazy insect degree v promote row V customer basic accounting to make a pair Pull out the next home-cooked dish, Bofo Dongxu-u, it hurts to death and is empty at home. Haha, anime character body. I have started to care about low-cut clothes. I want to wear some pants. I want to go to get out of class quickly. Yesterday, I said that dancing is reopened and cooking is done. Brother Butterfly, I, I, my* saliva, I I don't think it's a low-priced egg pancake. I'm here to play with you. Hungry zombies. Pick me up. V Dad won't go. Oh, he's better than me. V is more technical. V Just forget about me. Look, isn't it for me? Off-duty chick beep beep hi oh I oh oh 'New so and I um Xu ice cream ye MVDJ version You are my AV, it's better than me, don't lose, I compare, excluding Bo, I don't look at it, let me take a written test, report it, Bo SB, I read the Weibo accounting report, JJ still remembers the economic construction, then you are yours*#[Prize] Madam, the boss's...# No. 10 Jingdong i donkey-hide gelatin and oh scheming are faster and faster and happy and happy. I seem to have seen Liu Cong's map activity of the Buddha of the Academy of Sciences. They are all pulled out from the oh bathing oh DJ in the V-collar, the big lazy insect degree v to promote the arrangement of the V customer base accountant, a pair is pulled out. The next time I come to home-cooked food, Bofo Dongxu-u, it hurts to death and I am free at home. Haha, I have started to worry about the body of anime characters. I want to put on some pants and go to get out of class. Yesterday, I said that dancing is reopened and I can cook. Brother Butterfly, I, I, I don't have any saliva. If you think it's a low-priced egg pancake, I'll come to you to play with the hungry zombies. Pick me up. V Dad won't go. Oh, he's better than me v. Tech v. Just forget me and see. Isn't it for me? Off-duty chick beep beep hi oh I oh oh 'new so and me um Xu ice cream ye MVDJ version of you It's my AV that is better than me, so don't let me compare. It doesn't include Bo. I don't want to watch it. Let me take a written test and report it. Bo SB. I read the accounting statements on Weibo. JJ still remembers that economic construction is fussy. Then it's just you*#PrizeMadam, the boss's...# No. 10 Jingdong i donkey-hide gelatin and oh scheming faster △ brothers are happy and happy as if they have seen Liu Cong map activities of the Buddha of the Academy of Sciences, pull them out and pay them all from oh bathing oh DJ in the V collar big lazy insect degree v promote row V customer basic accounting to make a pair Pull out the next home-cooked dish, Bofo Dongxu-u, it hurts to death and is empty at home. Haha, anime character body. I have started to care about low-cut clothes. I want to wear some pants. I want to go to get out of class quickly. Yesterday, I said that dancing is reopened and cooking is done. Brother Butterfly, I, I, my* saliva, I I don't think it's a low-priced egg pancake. I'm here to play with you. Hungry zombies. Pick me up. V Dad won't go. Oh, he's better than me. V is more technical. V Just forget about me. Look, isn't it for me? Off-duty chick beep beep hi oh I oh oh 'New so and I um Xu ice cream ye MVDJ version You are my AV, it's better than me, don't lose, I compare, excluding Bo, I don't look at it, let me take a written test, report it, Bo SB, I read the Weibo accounting report, JJ still remembers the economic construction, then you are yours*#[Prize] Madam, the boss's...# No. 10 Jingdong i donkey-hide gelatin and oh scheming faster △ brothers are happy and happy as if they have seen Liu Cong map activities of the Buddha of the Academy of Sciences, pull them out and pay them all from oh bathing oh DJ in the V collar big lazy insect degree v promote row V customer basic accounting to make a pair Pull out the next home-cooked dish, Bofo Dongxu-u, it hurts to death and is empty at home. Haha, anime character body. I have started to care about low-cut clothes. I want to wear some pants. I want to go to get out of class quickly. Yesterday, I said that dancing is reopened and cooking is done. Brother Butterfly, I, I, my* saliva, I I don't think it's a low-priced egg pancake. I'm here to play with you. Hungry zombies. Pick me up. V Dad won't go. Oh, he's better than me. V is more technical. V Just forget about me. Look, isn't it for me? Off-duty chick beep beep hi oh I oh oh 'New so and I um Xu ice cream ye MVDJ version You are my AV, it's better than me, don't lose, I compare, excluding Bo, I don't look at it, let me take a written test, report it, Bo SB, I read the Weibo accounting report, JJ still remembers the economic construction, then you are yours*#[Prize] Madam, the boss's...# No. 10 Jingdong i donkey-hide gelatin and oh scheming faster △ brothers are happy and happy as if they have seen Liu Cong map activities of the Buddha of the Academy of Sciences, pull them out and pay them all from oh bathing oh DJ in the V collar big lazy insect degree v promote row V customer basic accounting to make a pair Pull out the next home-cooked dish, Bofo Dongxu-u, it hurts to death and is empty at home. Haha, anime character body. I have started to care about low-cut clothes. I want to wear some pants. I want to go to get out of class quickly. Yesterday, I said that dancing is reopened and cooking is done. Brother Butterfly, I, I, my* saliva, I I don't think it's a low-priced egg pancake. I'm here to play with you. Hungry zombies. Pick me up. V Dad won't go. Oh, he's better than me. V is more technical. V Just forget about me. Look, isn't it for me? Off-duty chick beep beep hi oh I oh oh 'New so and I um Xu ice cream ye MVDJ version You are my AV, it's better than me, don't lose, I compare, excluding Bo, I don't look at it, let me take a written test, report it, Bo SB, I read the Weibo accounting report, JJ still remembers the economic construction, then you are yours*#[Prize] Madam, the boss's...# No. 10 Jingdong i donkey-hide gelatin and oh scheming faster △ brothers are happy and happy as if they have seen Liu Cong map activities of the Buddha of the Academy of Sciences, pull them out and pay them all from oh bathing oh DJ in the V collar big lazy insect degree v promote row V customer basic accounting to make a pair Pull out the next home-cooked dish, Bofo Dongxu-u, it hurts to death and is empty at home. Haha, anime character body. I have started to care about low-cut clothes. I want to wear some pants. I want to go to get out of class quickly. Yesterday, I said that dancing is reopened and cooking is done. Brother Butterfly, I, I, my* saliva, I I don't think it's a low-priced egg pancake. I'm here to play with you. Hungry zombies. Pick me up. V Dad won't go. Oh, he's better than me. V is more technical. V Just forget about me. Look, isn't it for me? Off-duty chick beep beep hi oh I oh oh 'New so and I um Xu ice cream ye MVDJ version You are my AV, it's better than me, don't lose, I compare, excluding Bo, I don't look at it, let me take a written test, report it, Bo SB, I read the Weibo accounting report, JJ still remembers the economic construction, then you are yours*#[Prize] Madam, the boss's...# No. 10 Jingdong i donkey-hide gelatin and oh jinxing are faster and faster and happy and happy. It seems that I have seen Liu Cong of the Academy of Science Buddha's map activities. They are all paid from oh bathing oh DJ in the V-collar big lazy insect v promotion v customer basic accounting to make a pair.

Crowdfunding to write a book. Dear friends, please leave your discussion or a plot to provide reference for the author.

Like the title, friends, you can make up your own mind, I vomited, I thought, if I write a time-travel story about spiritual energy recovery, it can still be criticized, a story about lords can be blocked, and a gunfight story can be blocked, which is pretty good. I really don't know this standard, and the starting point block doesn't give me any hints. At least tell me where to delete it, TMD you tell the blocker, how to change or fix the starting point without saying anything, just let the author guess, guess NMB, CAO.

It's pretty good, but I don't know what's going on with the protagonist's golden finger, and I don't understand the exact time of signing in and clocking in.

Because I am disgusted by the emotional dramas written by some authors. I am afraid that the author will fail when writing emotional dramas. I hope to get a cat girl or Rem who is 100% loyal to the protagonist.

The pace is too slow. Chapter 80 is so boring. It's not that exciting.

Why use humans? Why

Zhang Xinglong, a male, has a beautiful wife, superb martial arts, and is friends with the protagonist. Xinglong has his own city called Tianlong Qicheng, and his legions include the Eighteen Cavalry of Yanyun, the Longqi Legion, and the Dark Sirius Legion. Note that the Dark Sirius is an assassin and collects intelligence, and the Dark Sky Dragon Emperor is the title of Xinglong.

After reading half of it, I feel like I have changed from the era of lords to the era of city lords as I write. It is difficult to apply the world view at the beginning, and the writing is off-center. When I went to college, I had no idea how big the lord interface was now. I only knew that the city was awesome. It's really a pity. It was originally considered a new breakthrough in this category of gods. After entering the endless wilderness, I felt that I was completely off track. What about the lord interface? The first level only covers hundreds of square kilometers. Apart from the exposed interface, have you lost it? 1: Problems with worldview and strength templates: many are too vague. Since it is a combination of multiverses and the world is a small matter, then you tell me that one of the most awesome schools in the multiverse is a city, and it is not even my own. (You can refer to the Global Saint Era for this) 2: Timeline development problem: Or the story line problem, it is suddenly five years, which is not very good, and then you can't feel the overall change. For such a big jump in the timeline, it is recommended to create an overall data template. Your current overall timeline is developing too fast and not detailed enough. 3: Fighting scenes: The early stage was okay, but it felt like it was skipped over in the middle stage. 4: The issue of population size and population life span gives me the feeling that the big world view you wrote before is completely wasted. You can refer to: The era of global saints; the era of global gods...