
Perfect Goddess Training System
by Lovely Apple
About This Novel
Hao Kaitai unexpectedly became a missionary and was going to save the world!
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Official(3)Scraped 6d ago
Overall, it's okay, and the rating is five stars among new authors.
There is too much nonsense. You can put the introduction of the characters in the comment area. It is recommended not to stay in one world for too long. People will get bored if you watch too much. It is recommended not to switch channels in multiple worlds unless you are confident in writing well. I can't blame you if the results are not good. After all, this is a debut novel. Some people's writing is almost the same as stand-alone. It is recommended that the weapons given to the protagonist should not be too abnormal, otherwise the combat power will easily collapse in the later stage. Don't forget which character in the writing. It will be difficult to write if the system has emotions. If you are willing, you can design an accident to erase the system's emotions. As a new author, I will not force you. The IQ of the supporting characters is online. (To be added) --Advice from someone with many years of reading experience
Apprenticeship or not
Become a teacher, not be a teacher, be a teacher, be a teacher, be a teacher, not be a teacher,
Is it on the shelves?
Is it on the shelves? My suggestion is not to put the first few books on the shelves until you have perfected your writing skills before putting them on the shelves.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 6d ago
Overall, it's okay, and the rating is five stars among new authors.
There is too much nonsense. You can put the introduction of the characters in the comment area. It is recommended not to stay in one world for too long. People will get bored if you watch too much. It is recommended not to switch channels in multiple worlds unless you are confident in writing well. I can't blame you if the results are not good. After all, this is a debut novel. Some people's writing is almost the same as stand-alone. It is recommended that the weapons given to the protagonist should not be too abnormal, otherwise the combat power will easily collapse in the later stage. Don't forget which character in the writing. It will be difficult to write if the system has emotions. If you are willing, you can design an accident to erase the system's emotions. As a new author, I will not force you. The IQ of the supporting characters is online. (To be added) --Advice from someone with many years of reading experience
Apprenticeship or not
Become a teacher, not be a teacher, be a teacher, be a teacher, be a teacher, not be a teacher,
Is it on the shelves?
Is it on the shelves? My suggestion is not to put the first few books on the shelves until you have perfected your writing skills before putting them on the shelves.






