Interstellar Accident
About This Novel
"Classmate, your book fell off." "It's not mine." "Classmate, your hairband fell off." "It's not mine." "Classmate, your boyfriend fell off." "Where did I get my boyfriend?" "Isn't it right in front of you?" Si Nian looked at the man in front of him with a playful smile who kept making excuses, and he was immediately speechless. The man stepped forward and pinched Si Nian's nose, and said dotingly: "Who made me fall in love with you, a little bad guy?"
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Official(9)Scraped 11d ago
Personal pronouns are a big problem
The author's personal pronoun... You can think carefully about it. The third person is just the third person, and the first person is written in the first person to give a stronger sense of substitution. It makes the first person seem to have nothing to do with it. It's too strange. Don't switch back and forth between first person and third person, it's so confusing that I don't even want to finish it** I really want to highlight the future century. I'm so light-brained. I'm complaining about the melt gun of the 21st century. Instead, it feels deliberate.
First person is weird. . .
Personally, I think it seems a bit verbose.
Si Nian looked at a man in black clothes and a mask pulling her curtains. Si Nian used a little magic to recover a little. Then she let go of her hand in a hurry, and then sprinkled a packet of powder on the man in black.
It feels a bit confusing. The specific situation of the protagonist was not explained at the beginning, which makes people a little confused.
(´ . .̫ . `)
Why is there no rating?
Very pretty(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
Very interesting article, I have saved it a lot (*∇＼*)
Director Zhou took a group of people on a trip. This tour guide was very hard! After talking for a long time, the tourists didn't listen to him. This was the first time that the tour guide encountered such a thing, but the tourists didn't listen to the tour guide. Why!
Si Nian herself was not an ordinary person. She lay in the hospital for several days. Although she had quick-repair medicine in her hand, she could not use it because in order to prevent them from seizing her in the laboratory and using her as a test subject, she had no choice but to endure it!
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Community(0)
Official(9)Scraped 11d ago
Personal pronouns are a big problem
The author's personal pronoun... You can think carefully about it. The third person is just the third person, and the first person is written in the first person to give a stronger sense of substitution. It makes the first person seem to have nothing to do with it. It's too strange. Don't switch back and forth between first person and third person, it's so confusing that I don't even want to finish it** I really want to highlight the future century. I'm so light-brained. I'm complaining about the melt gun of the 21st century. Instead, it feels deliberate.
First person is weird. . .
Personally, I think it seems a bit verbose.
Si Nian looked at a man in black clothes and a mask pulling her curtains. Si Nian used a little magic to recover a little. Then she let go of her hand in a hurry, and then sprinkled a packet of powder on the man in black.
It feels a bit confusing. The specific situation of the protagonist was not explained at the beginning, which makes people a little confused.
(´ . .̫ . `)
Why is there no rating?
Very pretty(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
Very interesting article, I have saved it a lot (*∇＼*)
Director Zhou took a group of people on a trip. This tour guide was very hard! After talking for a long time, the tourists didn't listen to him. This was the first time that the tour guide encountered such a thing, but the tourists didn't listen to the tour guide. Why!
Si Nian herself was not an ordinary person. She lay in the hospital for several days. Although she had quick-repair medicine in her hand, she could not use it because in order to prevent them from seizing her in the laboratory and using her as a test subject, she had no choice but to endure it!
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