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Stupid humans. I have become a god, don't you want to travel across the universe? The world is full of wonders. It was said in the comment area that 666 will get a time travel opportunity and a system.

A friend just wrote a comment about the part where the protagonist's white cross guns turn into battle threads. The original words are Doflamingo. I was stunned for a moment because I had never watched One Piece, but I knew Doflamingo's name and that he was a maverick Draco. Then I searched for pictures and found that Good Guy is almost the same as the protagonist except that Brother Ming likes to wear a big coat. They all have a villain-like style, wearing orange glasses and using silk threads! ! ! Σ(っ °Д °;)っ PS, in fact, the prototype of the protagonist comes from the three main characters in the Royal National Knights OVA. The battle thread used by the protagonist comes from the overall image of the protagonist, the strongest human Death Butler. He uses two powerful pistols, and the glasses on his eyes are the protagonist Akkado, the King of Vampires. The protagonist's big trench coat and reflective lenses come from Father Anderson of Thorns. The three merged together to form the image of the protagonist. Unexpectedly, the three merged together to form an alien version of Doflamingo. (๑ʘ̅ д ʘ̅๑)!!!

In the early stage, I felt that the author mixed a lot of things in the book. Including reincarnation paradise Actually, to be honest, I just saw the introduction of this book, which is somewhat similar to Samsara Paradise, so I chose to read it. At first I thought it was okay He kills decisively and so on, and has good things that are all his own. I think this kind of protagonist is great. Whatever you do, put yourself first Not the Holy Mother And I also said that I would try my best not to describe those cruel old children who don't kill. The protagonist has a bottom line, this is okay I thought the early description was pretty good. But why did it continue from more than 40 to 61? Empire and Alliance armistice The protagonist is assigned a mission to protect a princess Do I want to say that this novel is a novel about knights and princesses? ? ? ? ? You can protect him in his mission But don't describe too many supporting characters, okay? For this kind of princess, you just have to do the mission Just protect her Describe a little about the protagonist's abilities, mess and various protections I think this is enough. There is no need to describe what the princess likes to do or what kind of books she likes. Knowing that someone might be assassinated, he still went to crowded places such as movie theaters, books, libraries, etc. If it is possible to suspect someone of assassination in the early stage, But later on it was obvious that they came to your house and assassinated someone like this. Still stupid. Go to crowded places and go to school. I feel like this is a very big failure. I feel like you shouldn't write about other worlds in this novel, don't write about the protagonist's abilities, just describe them directly. Just a story about a knight and a princess You should not have descriptions of main gods, tasks such as space, and items. Just write the story of the princess and the knight There are more than 40 pictures all the way up to 61. I really can't stand it anymore. I admit that the protagonist is pretty good as an assassin. But you describe the supporting character too much, that is, the so-called broken princess Novels like this that focus on the divine space For everyone to see. It's probably all about the protagonist completing tasks, acquiring abilities and items, and then upgrading them, etc. Of course, if you describe the life trajectory of a supporting character, like a master like Old Monkey, you can even make people cry. But this is not just a mission to protect a princess There are more than twenty pictures describing him going there, but they are of no use. Do you sell mutton with a dog's head? I'm really speechless. This is a huge failure. I quite like this kind of Lord God novels and the like There aren't many suitable ones, and Samsara Paradise is updated so slowly. I finally found one that wrote a good description of the main character in the early stage. As a result, after more than 40 pictures, you started subtitles Of course, I haven't reached the chapters where I spent money, so I can't say that you have watery subtitles. But there is really no need to go for the one where there are more princesses than the protagonist. Really speechless I also read the comments specifically Just over forty comments All have five-star reviews or one negative review or three-star rating if you ask questions. None of them have four-star rating. I don't know if the protagonist deleted it or if he really didn't comment like this. I'll only comment to this point, it's a failure.

The following are all personal thoughts! ! ! If it doesn't match the original work, please don't comment! ! ! Type: Infinite (probably based on the foreshadowing) Dark (emmm, I think it's more bloody) Background: Su Mo, who entered the paradise for no apparent reason, struggled to survive until the end of the mission, but malfunctioned and left him in this world. Plot: It's okay, the main plot has obviously improved significantly (it's quite true that you can't die without a beautiful girl) What should I say? It's okay. I've booked them all anyway. Spoilers below! ! ! 1. Plan B 2. Assassination 3. War 4. Escort (4.5, Dreaming)

I see that many people don't understand and think that the protagonist leaked the secrets of the Federation to the princess. Let me explain it here. ①The material of the manipulator is red-grained steel. Basically all the red-grained steel mines in the world are in the hands of the Empire and the Federation. Other small countries simply don't have the energy to engage in these things. Wouldn't it be better to use these red-grained steels to make more than a dozen red-grained guns? It would be more practical. ②The manipulator is a complete military-industrial system, and the Perpetual Motion Research Institute and the Federal Mechanical Institute are behind it. Moreover, the success rate of mechanical prosthetic transformation is so low that the protagonist succeeds only because of the protagonist's halo. The simple version on the Federation's side also requires the precious resource mercury blood, which only the Federation has. Even so, the success rate is low. If other countries take it, it will be of no use. ③The princess is the most advanced graduate student. The robot she made by herself is useless, it is just a simple mechanical pulley. If she could figure out the complete black plan just by looking at her arm, she would have become a god long ago. It would be useless for her to study it for 100 years. The various basic resources behind it could not keep up, and there was no group of talented scientists. The protagonist knows that she can't find anything through research. ④The drawing skills of the manipulator, various machine tools with extreme precision, red steel, mercury blood, and a group of skilled scientists are the reasons for the success of the black plan. ⑤The robot hand is not a secret at all. What's the use of copying a pile of scrap metal? There are also magic patterns on it, and the various depictions of the magic patterns almost failed. Not to mention the out-of-print Mercury's Blood. It didn't matter at all to show her. The iron-bodied troops went to the battlefield behind, and there were lots of corpses. All of them were taken care of by the empire. Even though the empire was so powerful, it didn't take care of them. (The source of the Dark Moon Empire's mechanical troops is not here. They rely on a Federation traitor and a perpetual heart.) ⑥Actually, the reason why I don't explain it in detail is because I'm afraid it will be too verbose. The previous tips are already there. The mercury blood alone has blocked the path. The princess is just a hobbyist. Just like you show a mass-produced rail gun to the African natives, only you have the necessary energy for the rail gun. What do you expect her to research? Here is an explanation, everyone is too impetuous now. I understand people want to have no heroine, but don't get too carried away. If you encounter something you don't like, just pass it by. There are also readers who like daily life. I can only try my best to take care of everyone's taste.

Leave your name on the fire tongs # Single is so cool # ~ (^_^) ~

Before the content is charged, the overall style is unified, the battle line runs through the entire text, the story is relatively weak, and the unparalleled opening is a bit fierce. Since the newcomer failed to return to the main world at the beginning, he has been stuck in the novice world for development. The primary goal has always been to become the strongest and escape from the world, because combat has become the first choice, and the content is relatively compact, with no irrelevant content, but the frequent introduction of the same items is suspicious of water. The daily content cannot be regarded as relatively small, almost non-existent. The progress of the main line is completed very seriously, and the full tough guy style text is already a bit aesthetically fatigued. The protagonist rushes to various mission points to fight and decapitate, and the supporting characters have a relatively weak sense of presence. A little softness under the cold and hard lines is the last content before charging. New mission, protect the fourth princess. The summary is that there are no major poisonous points, there is a general world framework, the supporting roles are not obvious, but there is no aura of intelligence reduction, the battle is very intensive, it can be said that it is always going on, and it exists as a weapon. If you like compact battles, you can read it. If you want to read more stories, you will find it boring (like me, hahahaha). There are no obvious shortcomings. Passionate young people can feel free to read it.

Don't throw your money into the lucky bag, the recommendation has already been discontinued in the round. If you don't invest in Sanjiang, you can definitely make money, really. (◔◡◔)

I don't know whether the poison is poisonous or not. I will test the poison first, and then the strong man will go!

I've tried it. It may be a bit weird for others, but it's still acceptable to me. It's much better than reading and writing this type of writing before.