Tomb Robber: I, Chen Yulou, Am Dedicated to Cultivating Immortality

Since the background of the world is so powerful, how could Partridge Whistle be so ignorant and trash? In order to highlight its strength, Partridge Whistle is written as trash. It can only be said that the original writing is average. Since it is a world of spiritual practice, if you don't practice immortality well, you write yourself as a stallion, which is even more rubbish and worthless.

Let's talk about it again, if you can get everyone to cultivate immortality and Kunlun Partridge whistles at them, then you can have a plot about seven emotions and six desires. After all, everyone will live forever together. If not, then don't write about seven emotions and six desires. Instead, write about you robbing tombs and cultivating immortals. You should know that Xianfan has other meanings. I don't want the protagonist to cultivate immortality in the end, but there is no one around him. There is a person. After all, everyone clicked on this book because of the title of your book. Don't robbing tombs, cultivating immortals, and falling in love with stallions. It's all nondescript. The most important thing is to clearly distinguish the priorities. The most important thing is that if you can't write emotional scenes well, try not to write them, or leave them to the supporting characters. Otherwise, it will be hard to write and it will be very abrupt.

Tomb robbers want to become immortals? If you do such an immoral thing, God won't accept you? Can those immortals and ancestors tolerate you?

1 point for the writing style and 1 point for the subject matter. The content is watery, there are few stories, the characters are not three-dimensional, and the sense of personality created by the accumulation of labels is obvious.

After reading this, the author is not going to write about a ruthless monk. I feel like I don't want to read anymore.

It's a stupid story. If you want to fight or get something good, the supporting character will look unclear, and then the protagonist will be forced to do nothing, and there will be a lot of narration to show that the protagonist is awesome. Looks like I'm mentally retarded, thank you

You don't even know how to cultivate immortality and yet you write about robbing tombs and cultivating immortality. If you have so many resources, is it still the protagonist's turn? Give so many resources to others.

The plot is too bland. Since it is a second creation, why can't we add some bosses that don't appear in the original or have less plot on the original basis?

Take my penguin out for a walk

This author doesn't know how to describe people's expressions. He always describes Leng Jun's face, and his smile is Leng Jun's smile. It's really weird. This was written by Xiaobai many years ago. Is it still available now? What's special is that the author doesn't understand anything and just writes wildly and wildly. Wild boars are hard to eat, right? There's also a strange smell that's particularly unpalatable. There is also a group of people who have stayed in Pingshan for so many days and have not washed their faces. They are definitely not good-looking. You, the author, describe a group of people who are cold, handsome and fierce. It is very strange. You don't know how to write about demeanor and have common sense. You don't have to write about these, but you have to keep talking about the protagonist's demeanor, or these women blush when they see the protagonist.