I Asked You to Repair the Mecha, but You Made the Giant God Gundam with Your Hands?
by Ling Chen Little Pen Master
About This Novel
SSS-level talent, changing job to a screw-driving [Mechanic]? Lin Feng was abandoned by everyone on the spot. [Bite! The only hidden profession detected, the god-level mechanic system is activated! ][Ability 1: Analysis of all things, see through the advantages, disadvantages and fatal flaws of all mechas at a glance! ][Ability 2: Blueprint creation, give me a pile of scrap metal, and I'll give you a god-level mecha in return! ][Ability Three: Exclusive Arms, the mecha I built, only I can control it, the synchronization rate is 100%! ]When Bingshan school beauty Xia Qingqing was in desperate situation because her mecha was scrapped and her mission failed, Lin Feng slowly walked out with a wrench. Xia Qingqing: "My mecha... Can it still be saved?" Lin Feng glanced at it: "The design is rubbish, the materials are rubbish, and the structure is a fighter jet among rubbish. But... I can make it ten times stronger." At first, no one believed it. Until Lin Feng drove the "ghost" mecha he made out of scrap metal, strolled among the beasts, and stabbed a giant void beast, the whole world went crazy! Major chaebols: "Master Lin, please design a mecha for us, and you can use it on whatever terms you want!" The Imperial Military: "As long as Mr. Lin Feng joins, I can give you the highest command!"
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Official(5)Scraped 19d ago
Important notice! ! ! A must read! ! !
This book has officially entered the testing waters. Readers who like it can save it. All readers have worked hard to read it these days so that this book can get better data and promotion. This will give the author greater motivation to continue updating. You can rest assured that this book has a detailed outline and manuscript, and the book will not be cut midway, so you can continue reading with confidence. In addition, I have received inquiries from some readers about whether the author is a studio or a manuscript developer. The author would like to explain that because the author needs to mail the contract to complete the signing, and in order to save the mailing costs, he can only collect the book first and then publish the book.
Comments on minor issues
Much better than last time However, there are some problems with the emotional expression in the two recently updated chapters. Most of these problems are problems with the expression of punctuation marks. The problems in these two chapters are mainly caused by the overuse of ellipsis. Placing ellipsis in places that should not be placed will cause ambiguity and errors in emotional expression. It will read very strangely. For example, the sentence "longing for... Rebirth" is reasonable when read alone, but after adding the context, it feels overly artificial. The sense of exaggeration in the description of the characters and plot is gone, but the sense of emotional exaggeration is reflected. You can pay attention to it when writing. In addition, thank you for considering my opinions. I encourage you to slowly revise and improve your novel and enter the top ten on the membership list after completion
Why is there only 3 book reviews after everything is finished? ? ? ?
If you like watching a logistician become a soldier, watch it
Some modification suggestions for the author
Well... There are too many rhetorical techniques, for example: metaphors, exaggeration and over-description of characters' expressions, such as the protagonist's eyes, which give people a sense of nonsense. You can make some adjustments appropriately, and then appropriately reduce the exaggerated descriptions. For example, "there is something incomparable in so-and-so's eyes" and you can directly remove the incomparable; online novels do not need too many rhetorical techniques, only a small amount of rhetoric is enough. Appropriate exaggeration can give readers a general idea of the things in the article, and appropriate description of character expressions can make the characters vivid. However, if excessive use of rhetorical techniques may make readers feel awkward or bored, they may not want to continue reading. It is to add some foreshadowing to pave the way for the follow-up to stimulate readers' interest
Rating
Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 19d ago
Important notice! ! ! A must read! ! !
This book has officially entered the testing waters. Readers who like it can save it. All readers have worked hard to read it these days so that this book can get better data and promotion. This will give the author greater motivation to continue updating. You can rest assured that this book has a detailed outline and manuscript, and the book will not be cut midway, so you can continue reading with confidence. In addition, I have received inquiries from some readers about whether the author is a studio or a manuscript developer. The author would like to explain that because the author needs to mail the contract to complete the signing, and in order to save the mailing costs, he can only collect the book first and then publish the book.
Comments on minor issues
Much better than last time However, there are some problems with the emotional expression in the two recently updated chapters. Most of these problems are problems with the expression of punctuation marks. The problems in these two chapters are mainly caused by the overuse of ellipsis. Placing ellipsis in places that should not be placed will cause ambiguity and errors in emotional expression. It will read very strangely. For example, the sentence "longing for... Rebirth" is reasonable when read alone, but after adding the context, it feels overly artificial. The sense of exaggeration in the description of the characters and plot is gone, but the sense of emotional exaggeration is reflected. You can pay attention to it when writing. In addition, thank you for considering my opinions. I encourage you to slowly revise and improve your novel and enter the top ten on the membership list after completion
Why is there only 3 book reviews after everything is finished? ? ? ?
If you like watching a logistician become a soldier, watch it
Some modification suggestions for the author
Well... There are too many rhetorical techniques, for example: metaphors, exaggeration and over-description of characters' expressions, such as the protagonist's eyes, which give people a sense of nonsense. You can make some adjustments appropriately, and then appropriately reduce the exaggerated descriptions. For example, "there is something incomparable in so-and-so's eyes" and you can directly remove the incomparable; online novels do not need too many rhetorical techniques, only a small amount of rhetoric is enough. Appropriate exaggeration can give readers a general idea of the things in the article, and appropriate description of character expressions can make the characters vivid. However, if excessive use of rhetorical techniques may make readers feel awkward or bored, they may not want to continue reading. It is to add some foreshadowing to pave the way for the follow-up to stimulate readers' interest
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