The Witch God Chronicles

1. After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I feel so suffocated and panicked! The protagonist's whole family was abused! ! Interesting? I don't mean to read the invincible article either! ! I just feel that even if the protagonist has setbacks, he shouldn't be too cowardly, right? 2. When the protagonist kills someone, the killing scene is poorly described! Especially the result, even though I knew I was dead! But it always feels awkward! 3. The protagonist has lived in another world for more than ten years. He didn't trade with the old man early in exchange for the "Match the Sky", and he had to wait until it was urgent to change! ! Is it stupid? ? And Bu Tian Jue is so abnormal, as long as he keeps eating it, it will be fine! But when the protagonist heard the old man say that he could eat the body of a great witch at the peak of his powers, he suddenly asked how much he would have to eat! ! Damn it, you can become stronger just by eating, but he still dislikes it! I don't know what's good or bad! ! Moreover, the protagonist has never actively hunted! It was his father who brought it back to him! The protagonist is too unmotivated! Just look up at the sky in the morning and at night! Interesting? ? It didn't say that he absorbed the purple energy and became stronger! Finally, it made people think that the protagonist was smart for once. He asked the tree demon and stone demon for help! I tricked Jiang Yao and the others, but they didn't kill anyone twice! What's the use? ? ! 4. After the seal is lifted, the protagonist has the peak body of Xiao Wu! But when a barbarian from the early stage of Little Witch comes to sneak attack, the protagonist is having a hard time! ! Do you want to make the protagonist so weak? ? 4. The protagonist was a 30-year-old soul in his previous life, but he didn't act like a time traveler! And how handsome he was in his previous life! ! As a result, after traveling through time, I felt like a country boy from a backward tribe! ! Where has that Qinglong's grace gone? ? To sum up, the protagonist is surprisingly weak! And it's very frustrating! ! I feel angry! And the protagonist's counterattack is too weak! ! I've written so much, but I'm not afraid of bloody fans criticizing me! ! Don't say things like whether you like it or not, or whether you'd like to write it or not! ! I am a reader! I have the right to express my opinion about a book! ! If you have any ideas, please comment below! ! I will answer seriously! ! Anyone who has the same views as me is welcome! !

Recently, there was a girl named Yang in the city who was selling her body to bury her father. The prince passed by and bought her for a simple purpose - the family lacked a servant to sweep the house. As a result, less than a night later, the girl escaped during the night. Prince Wang couldn't figure it out: Why did she run away? Butler: Immortal dance, young master. Prince Wang: Is she a fairy? Butler: No, it means you were cheated. The girl had been cheated all the way by selling her body to bury her father, and she never failed. She escaped from the city and was about to go to the next city to play fairy dance. She was knocked unconscious within two steps of leaving the city gate. When she woke up, she returned to the Wang family. Prince Wang sat opposite her with a gentle expression: You... Before he could speak, the girl burst into tears: Master, I know I was wrong. I just want to show my father the cemetery... Prince Wang was embarrassed: That's it. Prince Wang was a good man and continued to let her stay and work. At night, Miss Yang planned to escape again. As she was trying to turn outwards, she saw Mr. Wang standing on the wall and thought she had seen a ghost. Miss Yang screamed and fell down, but was caught by him. Prince Wang: What? Didn't you see a satisfactory cemetery last night? Miss Yang knew she was meeting a master this time. Immediately, he knelt down and said, "I am blind and cannot recognize Mount Tai. It turns out that the young master is a Jianghu man!" Miss Yang is an orphan who has grown up struggling. In this world, there are not many options for orphans. They must either become a monk, become a maid, sell themselves, or do hard work. She wants to break into the world. So I relied on immortals to jump all the way to the south, hoping to go to Mount Emei. Prince Wang: Why do you want to go to Mount Emei to perform Immortal Dance? Housekeeper: Master, she means that she wants to become a female disciple of the Emei Sect. As for why it is the Emei sect, it is because the girl was saved by a master of the Emei sect when she was a child, and she has been yearning for him ever since. Relying on the immortal dance is not an option. Prince Wang said, how about you stay at my house as a sweeper, save up your wages, and then go to Emei when you have enough money. In this way, you don't have to lie to others or pretend to be a dead father. Wouldn't it be nice? Miss Yang was alert. She thought so at first, but the man who bought her revealed his true colors on the first night. Mr. Wang didn't know what to say: Forget it, you can do whatever you want... Girl: At this time, wouldn't you tell me "Don't be afraid, I'm a good person"? Mr. Wang: Good people generally don't emphasize that they are good people. But Miss Yang stayed. Working in the Wang family is not bad, every day is fine, and the prince behaves well. He lived a simple life, reading some miscellaneous books, sitting by the pool in a daze, and going out to discuss business. Miss Yang couldn't help but ask: You are so good at kung fu, don't you want to go out and make a career in the world? Prince Wang smiled: Is Jianghu fun? It's definitely more fun than begging for food on the street! The girl told him vividly and vividly about the stories she had heard about rivers and lakes, and she told him for most of the day. There are only a few people in the Wang family, and no one usually talks to the young master. It is rare that a lively Miss Yang comes here, and the house is not so boring. It was time to go out to discuss business, but Mr. Wang listened intently until Miss Yang finished speaking before going out. Late at night, Miss Yang was called up and told to "go help." When I went to the backyard, I saw blood on the ground. A man fell next to a dry well with his head dismembered. Mr. Wang was wiping the blood on the Tang knife in his hand. He was very embarrassed and said, "Please help me clean it up." Sorry, it usually doesn't happen like this... Miss Yang was confused. Prince Wang: Don't be afraid. We usually kill people for money. This person is a traitor in the house and was expelled just now. The Wang family is a life-buying family in the world. It is a black and white family. It is a private and official family. As long as they can afford it, they will do business for anyone. Miss Yang locked herself in the room and refused to come out again. The young master said outside her house, if you want to enter the world, killing someone is inevitable. There are vendettas, casualties, and life-buying. You can't break out of the world if you lock yourself in it. Miss Yang didn't open the door, so he stood for a while and then left. At night, she secretly pushed the door open, trying to get out and run away. Under the moonlight, the prince sat on the wall again. Miss Yang froze there, not daring to move. Prince Wang looked as gentle as ever: Just go. Girl: Are you going to keep silent? Mr. Wang: Everyone in the world knows that the Wang family is a family that buys lives, so there is nothing to keep silent about. Prince Wang smiled: It's okay if you leave. If you stay there for a long time, you will become trapped like me. Prince Wang gave her a hand and let her fly safely outside the mansion. He said, you go away and make your way into the world, taking my share with you. Later, the girl went to Emei. There are many disciples of the Emei sect, who practice Kung Fu and run errands every day. The girl recalled that the prince once listened to her tell stories about rivers and lakes. He knew from beginning to end that she was just making it up, but he listened to it all with a smile. She is the only one who can talk about the world with him, and he is the only one who likes the world she talks about. One night, the girl was sleeping soundly when someone suddenly covered her mouth. Prince Wang was by her side. Prince Wang: It's nothing. I was passing by and came to see you. Just take one look and leave. He's leaving. But Miss Yang always felt uneasy. She followed him to the mountain gate: What's wrong with you? Why did you come to see me suddenly? Prince Wang sat down on the stone steps of the mountain gate: I suddenly wanted to hear your story. The house was too stuffy and no one told me that. She was too embarrassed to tell any more nonsense: you already knew it was false. Prince Wang: But you are serious. His eyes were very bright and beautiful in the moonlight, and he looked at her with a smile. Miss Yang sat down next to him: At this time, you should tell me, "Don't go into the world, come with me"! Prince Wang smiled bitterly, wondering where she learned the words. Miss Yang: Tell me quickly! Prince Wang said this and she laughed. But he looked at her and said again: If you follow me, your world will be around me. Miss Yang stopped laughing: Really? Prince Wang: I lied to you. My world is a mountain of corpses and a sea of ​​blood. You can't follow me. The prince is gone. Miss Yang shouted at his back: If it is true, I will really go with you - I will not go into the world! Let's go to the sea together! After a few years, she was able to go down the mountain to practice, so she first went to Wang's house to find him. But the prince was gone, and the housekeeper accompanied another new head of the house to see her. --The prince was purged a few years ago. He took over the business of assassinating the head of the Emei sect, but he didn't do it. He came back to kill him himself. The body was thrown into the dry well according to the rules. The girl went to see him for the last time and looked at him for a long time at the mouth of the well. They couldn't figure out what she was looking at. Only she knew that she was looking at her world.

This is my first time to write a book review. I really think this book is very interesting. Compared with other fantasy novels, The Witch God Chronicles combines ancient Chinese legends and is particularly fascinating. It is not just about killing monsters and upgrading, nor is it about one person being invincible in the world. The plot has twists and turns and the characters are rich and diverse. Especially at the beginning, I was very amused by the words in the book many times.

Let's talk about the beginning first. The background setting in the first fifty chapters is pretty good. Although it didn't catch my eye, it's not unconventional. However, the setting and background of the combat power are too confusing. 1. Regarding combat power; first of all, there is the entanglement between the Yu tribe's slave-catching group and Zhu Rong Manman. Let's not talk about Di Luo's IQ, but just talk about the setting of "the most beloved daughter of Zhu Rong clan". The servant around him is not even the Witch King? (When he first entered Zhurong Palace, it was described that the great witch was an ordinary guard, and the food was at the level of the Witch King.) Then there was no description of the formation of the Yu clan. He just killed Manman's servant directly. Manman only had one token that exerted the power of the Witch King? Is she really the most beloved little daughter? Just trust such a servant to follow her? 2. The chaos and brutality of the high-level human race background; I assume that you want to describe the background of a human race struggling to survive and thrive in the wilderness era, but I didn't see this at all in the content of Chapter 230 (let alone the following chapters, there are too many points to persuade people to quit in Chapter 230, and I can't hold on anymore). There is nothing wrong with the weak and the strong, but what are the human races you encounter? (Our side: simple, kind, and honest at heart, and the enemy: lurking undercover, intrigues, and witty), and it's so desperate! ! Do you know? So desperate! Where does the unity come from? The two Zhu Rong brothers seem to be inseparable, so the four major regions in the southeast, northwest and northwest will target the protagonist? Except for teammates, everyone they meet will come up and ridicule the protagonist when they see him? In other words, unless you flatter yourself, you will die? The human race that I encountered were all motivated by wealth, and they would go hand in hand with whatever the enemy race had. If you ask me, the human race would have been exterminated or all become slaves a long time ago, as you wrote in Chapter 230. 3. The protagonist's combat power; first of all, the protagonist's grandpa's skills are completely useless in Chapter 230. He absorbs 1% of the energy eaten. So what were he doing when he was using the power of the human race in the Witch Palace? Eat a witch-level beast in one day? ? ? EXM? ? ? When he was in Zhu Rong, he was at the level of Witch King, but in the Witch Palace, he was a great wizard? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Your setting completely collapsed in the early stage. Either you can be an encyclopedia with peace of mind, or you can take off early. Is your rhythm interesting? After eating so much, he became a small witch and reached the peak of his physical body before entering the great witch for the first time? So all the Witch King's meat was eaten by dogs? ? ? 4. Resource settings are confusing Protagonist: I don't know why. When I first met the Earth Vein Essence Liquid, I thought it was a rare treasure. Then when I sat on the big turtle, I realized, isn't this a bad street? The purchasing power of currency is not described at all. When writing about other things, it is said to be rare and rare. There is no reference at all. When the protagonist discovers the best Chaos Witch Crystal, the protagonist: Oh, a very precious mineral. Protagonist team: Oh ~ a very precious mineral. Enemy: I want to kill people and seize treasures, and I also want to find a backer behind me, and then we will grow stronger hahahaha! ! ! ! Then the two emperors came came! ! ! ! ! ! [Emot=default,01/] What a unity, the human race. The protagonist also regards money as dirt. 6666 That's all for now. Oh, and also, can the scale of the battle scenes be controlled? Don't you have a little AC number for volumetric weight? If you don't know how to write a battle scene, just skip it as soon as possible, okay? A stone weighs millions of stones and can be blown dozens of miles away with one punch. Is it difficult to find a witch temple in an area of ​​millions of miles according to what you wrote? Is it a matter of minutes? Phew~ That's it, there are really too many poisonous points.

The outline layout is not bad, but I think the creation is a mess. A protagonist can only scream and scream. He is shocked here and there. He is also the most useless protagonist. He has no fighting power. He vomits blood every time and fights all rely on treasures. People who cannot defeat the disciples come out. There are also treasures that were hyped when they first came out. But after a few fights, it was useless. The combat power collapsed into a mess. The protagonist, the Witch King, relied solely on treasures. You can beat the Witch Emperor by fighting, but when you reach the level of the Witch Emperor, you still have to rely on treasures to beat the Witch Emperor. With great fortune, your master has a lot of treasures, which are said to increase your combat power hundreds of times, but you can only beat the Witch Emperor with the help of treasures. You don't understand the difference between not improving and being beaten to the point of vomiting blood by others of the same level without the treasures. You are just a scumbag. In other books, the protagonists not only have treasures but also have skills and moves. If your skills are useless, just forget them. , Only know one move to create something new, and don't use it once in ten thousand years, but still use it to torture people, beat the peak wizard emperor for a while, but can't defeat the ordinary wizard emperor for a while, and the supporting role of wizard god can't beat several wizard emperors teamed up, and was tortured. Furthermore, it is an exaggeration and confusion, and the damage level is exaggerated to death. In the early stage, the damage of a big wizard is hundreds of miles, but at the later level, it is only a few thousand miles. , And from time to time there is an extremely exaggerated one of tens of thousands of miles. A wizard god said that the monster of thousands of miles is too big and cannot be attacked. Just kidding. The final protagonist is Zhan Wuzhao who impulsively vomits blood and screams in shock. Without the treasure, he is nothing. Every time he sees a fight, he skips it and only looks at the outline

The more I read this book, the more confused I become. According to the author's thinking, the logic of the bad guys is completely reasonable, while the logic of the good guys is all kinds of compromise or helplessness. For example, in my own home, as the leader, a woman and her son came to the door and poisoned me. There are also foreigners who randomly come to the door and have nonsense conversations without being discovered. . . . Is this the most popular leader, or an ordinary person? A group of foreigners, a group of people, hehehehe, were assassinated in various ways, are they out of their minds? Lost your mind?

I am young and like to read novels. After reading this novel, I felt very good. I started to write about the invincible strength of pig's feet on the earth, and then was violently raped by a small weapon from another world, and then reborn. The description of the companions is very profound, very good, very organized, and the realm setting is also very good, especially the villain of the whole novel, who considers himself noble and has a different character from those natives. 8, And the descriptions of the moves are also very visual. Finally, do you have any recommendations for unlimited horror novels? I have been short of books recently.

No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no.

One moment he is invincible, and the next moment he becomes a ****.

I've read a few chapters but I can't understand it anyway.