Kaleidoscope Opens the Door

How could there be such a rubbish novel? How to travel through time is not mentioned at all. How many ninjutsu have you learned? It wasn't made clear at the beginning, why do you have Wood Escape? Isn't Wood Release exclusive to the First Hokage? You mentioned the grandson of the Second Hokage, where did the Wood Release come from? I haven't explained anything clearly, and where is your Sharingan? Besides your grandfather, your grandmother, your father, who is your mother? Where did the other you come from? The writing style is not too bad (?0?7△｀)

I don't know what you are writing about... If you write about having no desires and desires, then you still write about chicken drumsticks! Just eat and sleep at home

I seem to remember that the 2nd Hokage didn't even marry a wife, so he didn't even have a son, and he didn't even have a grandson.

How much stimulation does a three- or four-year-old child need to have a kaleidoscope?

The author is great and the books are very beautiful. I like reading very much, but my family is not rich and I don't have any extra money to spend. I can only have books sometimes and read them. Sorry!

?9?9 I just look at you like this, and I keep looking at you. Until I see you can't write anymore

The author is a novice, but this book is very creative. Bookworms who are hungry for books can take a look.

I don't know what the author wants to do by adding these two jars of poison.

Received Dong Xiang, the author is great

Probably here to practice writing. The characterization is pretty good, but there's something a little off at the beginning.