Pirates of Eternal Evil

This is so fucking messy that I can't understand it? Author, please don't write l

Appearing on the New World Island, there must be monsters running rampant, right? After 3 years of training and 4 years on Whitebeard's ship, you still vomit blood after fighting a colonel? A colonel shouldn't be qualified to be in the new world! The characters are too confusing, the practice is incomprehensible, and the system is too complicated. Hope to improve

I hope you don't use the first person pronoun

A lot of speechless nonsense

The first few chapters are still in third person, but later on they become first person! Either it's always in the first person, or it's always in the third person

Why is there no punctuation after reading a little bit? It's very tiring to watch the characters talk.

I hope you don't use the first person pronoun

I read Chapter 5 and didn't understand. I really don't know what's going on.

To be honest, I thought this book was a bit dark at first, and I was looking forward to many subsequent chapters. But after more than ten chapters, I started talking nonsense, about husky salted fish, and I feel like the protagonist is a bit of a shemale. I'm not saying anything bad about you.

Okay, great,,,,,,,,