My Comic Empire

There are too many typos, and the heroine has no sense of presence. The plot was unclear and I passed it by. I didn't even know what the heroine's role was. She was just mediocre. To have dog food but not dog food, it would be better not to have a heroine at the beginning. It looks more like a lover than a friend (except for a kiss at the beginning, everything else is too bland, not even a few words of love). What I want to complain about the most are the sick sentences and the broken sentences. The wrong sentences are not bad at all, but they are really much worse. The broken sentences are awkward. Every time I look at them, a comma or a period is added in the middle for no reason. Okay, I'm done complaining, I'm tired of watching, so I left.