My Daily Evolution Game

The book is pretty good, keep up the good work. Make up the word count joke↓ Yesterday I went to buy cigarettes. I bought a pack of 20 cigarettes. I gave the boss 50 and gave me 40. I pretended not to know, put it in my pocket and left. Before I had gone far, the boss called me: You didn't take your cigarettes! I shed tears of emotion and took out ten yuan and gave it to the boss: You gave me ten yuan more. The boss was also moved to tears: Young man, bring me the cigarettes and I'll give you a pack of them. Smoking the new cigarette that the boss gave me, the pure taste couldn't help but moved me again: Boss, bring me the 50 cigarette just now and I'll change it for you! The boss took the 50 and was moved again: Young man, give me the money you asked for just now, and I will change it for you. After receiving the money from my boss, I was moved again and took out a mobile phone from my pocket: Boss, please return the mobile phone to you. With tears in his eyes, the boss tremblingly took out a wallet: "Young man, return your wallet to you."

The writing is very good and the sentences are fluent, which is worthy of recognition. The plot has no poisonous points for the time being and develops normally. However, after watching it for so long, I found a problem. I am unhappy. The plot is funny and relaxed, more everyday, but not exciting, and a bit dull. I hope the author will pay attention. Finally, I wish the author a happy new year and good luck in writing the book.

Shenhao adds a system to let other players play how they want! ! Damn, didn't you see it, Tang Ying, you actually have such a conscientious side, haha, I suddenly felt like you were a tall person (but shi) hehe

I don't believe this flashback was written by a new author.

The identity of the protagonist was not revealed until the end of the co-authored book. With more than 500 photos, the heroine is almost falling in love with the male protagonist's other identity. Isn't there the embarrassment of being a tauren? Think about it for yourself. From the heroine's perspective, the two identities of the protagonist are unknown. One is Minister Tang, the great hero who saves Shenzhou, and the other is Tang Ying, the childhood sweetheart and high school student. These two identities are different people from the heroine's perspective. The protagonist has always appeared in the heroine's perspective as a high school student, but now the heroine already likes Minister Tang's identity, so what is the plot? The mother of the latter two families is urging the marriage. The female protagonist has a crush on the male protagonist, but she has not reached the point where she can get married. It is probably because she has a knot in her heart about Minister Tang. I would like to see how you write it. Also, the IQ of the people around you is written too low. Do you really think that you can hide all the high-tech equipment and all the awesome people of a world's top power by just disguising your face? Another point is that the protagonist takes the initiative to hide his identity. He thinks that if he exposes his identity to the heroine, the heroine will not work hard, but have you ever thought about it. If you don't expose your identity, the two identities will be mixed together in the future. What kind of mentality do you think the heroine will have towards the male protagonist? What's even more awesome is that when you wrote it, you clearly wrote it from the perspective of the male protagonist. Your identity as Minister Tang attracted the female protagonist so much, and you didn't tell others. If you have a clone, in other words, you are the clone, and you have betrayed your own body. I really, I don't know what to think.

For example, if someone's TV is not working, or the crops in the field are damaged by diseases and insect pests, you must ask Tang Ying for all these things. Oh, I really didn't see it. So you are so almighty? Therefore, the life of cheating is different!

At the beginning, the young man at the epidemic prevention station talks to his teacher, and then the protagonist is forced to pretend. Will the people at the epidemic prevention station talk nonsense? In government departments, all civil servants, talking nonsense will not end well. Don't you know, an old man in his decades doesn't even understand these? If he really didn't understand, he would be dead long ago

The author brings too much of his own views on various phenomena into the description, and the character of the protagonist is often too arrogant. If the protagonist of King Spare His Life is skinned once or a few times, then this book is skinned tens of thousands of times. As we all know, skinny tens of thousands is really annoying and very rewarding, so it is necessary to stop the description.

The slowest 50-meter dash for people after entering junior high school is only about 10 seconds, which is 5 meters per second. You are just in the first chapter, and it is only 5 meters per second after upgrading. Does this mean that you were a special disabled before?

I can't stand it anymore. The main character is written like a mentally retarded person. He is the stupid son of a landlord. This book is poisonous.