
The God of Mutants in American Comics
About This Novel
Traveling through the Marvel Universe, he awakened to the template system and became a mutant with the superpower of "plunder". [Plunder: Plunder the superpowers of those you kill with your own hands, which can be evolved] ... Sephiroth template: Eight Swords Flash, Heartless Angel, Declaration of Destiny, Winged Angel Form... Vergil's template: True Demon Form, Dimensional Slash, Dimensional Slash·Ze... Kaido template: Thunder Bagua, Fire Dragon Torch... Superboy Supreme template: heat vision, freezing breath, super strength, super physique... Darkseid template: Omega rays, anti-life equation... ... Magneto: "I can only control the magnetic field. He can not only control the magnetic field, but also gravity, subatoms, molecules, space, and time." Professor X: "His existence not only changed people's views on mutants, but also made people see the terror and danger of mutants." Odin: "He's the strongest mutant I've ever seen!"
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Official(35)Scraped 9d ago
Nice looking, to my liking
Don't treat the old beauty as a human being, don't be a hero, don't be a killer, don't be a virgin, kill whoever messes with the protagonist. They have all traveled through time, and the protagonist does not have to be a human being, just like the protagonist who got out of here. Power is everything.
Complain about it.
This setting is really funny! Plunder! Then, because I was afraid that the protagonist would die easily in the early stage, I added a template system! Then, as he writes, the author may also feel that he has grown too fast and is too strong. In only ten or twenty chapters, he only has a few alpha-level abilities! Just press! Suppressing combat power! Pressure on proficiency! Pressure fusion! Press hard! Write more plots, more chases and escapes! Get up? Shilipo Sword God? NO NO NO! Wherever you go, someone will find you! No matter how well you hide it, someone will always find it! Even if no one finds the protagonist, he can't be found! The protagonist will also take the initiative to show up for certain reasons! Anyway, the main theme is back and forth, pulling and pulling. Oh.
Let go of the need to help others and respect the fate of others
I was deceived by the factors. You can explain the key points in this article.
To be honest, from the beginning, I felt that there was something about the protagonist that made me feel uncomfortable. Later on, the plot took a big turn and the protagonist started to have a harem. He had a stamp collecting habit and slept with countless anonymous passers-by. If only Stallion could have said it right from the beginning, instead of saying that women affect the speed of drawing swords and then sleeping all over the world, they would have made it clear from the beginning that they would never click on this book. What attracted me at first was the comic + vest + killing some people easily, but the more I read, the more and more something is wrong. At first, I said that I didn't want to be a stallion, but I didn't know how much sleep I had, and then I just let it go. Then I started to say anything that made him unhappy and just kill him. Emm, to be honest, the author could have said it from the beginning, instead of saying at the beginning that no one will offend me and I will not offend others.
Are you a fool? It would be great if you slaughtered him. He collected supernatural powers from all over the world. From the beginning he said he was not looking for a woman, but later he found a woman. Moreover, it was a Chinese-style love process. The author is also a brainless and cool article.
an advice writer
The third and fourth abilities of the protagonist are recommended to be Accelerator's vector operation and Kakine Teito's Weiyuan Substance from the A Certain Magical Index. Vector manipulation is the ability to arbitrarily manipulate the directions of momentum, light, electromagnetic fields, and other vectors that are in contact with the surface of the body. A vector is a quantity with a direction, also known as a vector in mathematics. Vectors in physics are physical quantities with direction. Control: The so-called control, as the name suggests, means that all things in the available body can freely choose how to use them. Combining vectors and manipulation results in Accelerator's abilities. For example: water, electricity, air, particles and other subtle or invisible objects can be freely controlled. Common vectors include: force, torque, velocity, acceleration, momentum, displacement, magnetic field strength, etc. The opposite is a scalar quantity, that is, a quantity that has no direction but only size, such as length, temperature, mass, density, power, etc. Metamaterial: This ability creates substances that do not exist in this world, and sets the physical and chemical properties of the creation by itself. Metamatter can generate and control fundamental particles (and the matter produced by them) that do not originally exist in this world, as well as change their physical properties. When Teito Kakine activates his ability, six white angel-like wings will automatically spread out on his back, which can extend to more than twenty meters. He can also turn his wings into countless feathers and spread them out. He can fly, defend, strike, slash, gale, shock wave, light attack and other applications through his white wings. As long as light waves and electronic waves pass through the small gaps on his white wings, they will change their nature, twist into impossible vectors, and act according to their own laws. Although there is no blood in the Weiyuan substance, there are pulse signals similar to biological currents. Kakine Teitoku was also able to obtain the technology of constructing human cells using non-element matter in the life support device, and explored "new possibilities" such as restoring the body and manufacturing internal organs through non-element matter. These two abilities are very helpful for major technologies in Marvel. I hope you can give them to the protagonist.
I can only say that he is average, his ability is good, and his operation can stretch his hips.
Water, very water, especially water. Remember to read this book. You will not be able to pass a single scene in Chapter 50.
water
In fact, unnecessary details can be mentioned in one stroke, and there are also some passers-by who appear on the scene. It is not necessary to describe so much from the front. One sentence is enough when describing the side. Writing everything down so clearly will not make readers feel that you are very attentive, it will only make people feel that you are very good at filling in the details. My suggestion is to retain the detailed description of the protagonist and streamline other aspects. The protagonist is also resolute and decisive in doing things, but your dragging narration really puts the protagonist back a bit.
Very few people write about the settings of Final Fantasy. You must follow them.
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Official(35)Scraped 9d ago
Nice looking, to my liking
Don't treat the old beauty as a human being, don't be a hero, don't be a killer, don't be a virgin, kill whoever messes with the protagonist. They have all traveled through time, and the protagonist does not have to be a human being, just like the protagonist who got out of here. Power is everything.
Complain about it.
This setting is really funny! Plunder! Then, because I was afraid that the protagonist would die easily in the early stage, I added a template system! Then, as he writes, the author may also feel that he has grown too fast and is too strong. In only ten or twenty chapters, he only has a few alpha-level abilities! Just press! Suppressing combat power! Pressure on proficiency! Pressure fusion! Press hard! Write more plots, more chases and escapes! Get up? Shilipo Sword God? NO NO NO! Wherever you go, someone will find you! No matter how well you hide it, someone will always find it! Even if no one finds the protagonist, he can't be found! The protagonist will also take the initiative to show up for certain reasons! Anyway, the main theme is back and forth, pulling and pulling. Oh.
Let go of the need to help others and respect the fate of others
I was deceived by the factors. You can explain the key points in this article.
To be honest, from the beginning, I felt that there was something about the protagonist that made me feel uncomfortable. Later on, the plot took a big turn and the protagonist started to have a harem. He had a stamp collecting habit and slept with countless anonymous passers-by. If only Stallion could have said it right from the beginning, instead of saying that women affect the speed of drawing swords and then sleeping all over the world, they would have made it clear from the beginning that they would never click on this book. What attracted me at first was the comic + vest + killing some people easily, but the more I read, the more and more something is wrong. At first, I said that I didn't want to be a stallion, but I didn't know how much sleep I had, and then I just let it go. Then I started to say anything that made him unhappy and just kill him. Emm, to be honest, the author could have said it from the beginning, instead of saying at the beginning that no one will offend me and I will not offend others.
Are you a fool? It would be great if you slaughtered him. He collected supernatural powers from all over the world. From the beginning he said he was not looking for a woman, but later he found a woman. Moreover, it was a Chinese-style love process. The author is also a brainless and cool article.
an advice writer
The third and fourth abilities of the protagonist are recommended to be Accelerator's vector operation and Kakine Teito's Weiyuan Substance from the A Certain Magical Index. Vector manipulation is the ability to arbitrarily manipulate the directions of momentum, light, electromagnetic fields, and other vectors that are in contact with the surface of the body. A vector is a quantity with a direction, also known as a vector in mathematics. Vectors in physics are physical quantities with direction. Control: The so-called control, as the name suggests, means that all things in the available body can freely choose how to use them. Combining vectors and manipulation results in Accelerator's abilities. For example: water, electricity, air, particles and other subtle or invisible objects can be freely controlled. Common vectors include: force, torque, velocity, acceleration, momentum, displacement, magnetic field strength, etc. The opposite is a scalar quantity, that is, a quantity that has no direction but only size, such as length, temperature, mass, density, power, etc. Metamaterial: This ability creates substances that do not exist in this world, and sets the physical and chemical properties of the creation by itself. Metamatter can generate and control fundamental particles (and the matter produced by them) that do not originally exist in this world, as well as change their physical properties. When Teito Kakine activates his ability, six white angel-like wings will automatically spread out on his back, which can extend to more than twenty meters. He can also turn his wings into countless feathers and spread them out. He can fly, defend, strike, slash, gale, shock wave, light attack and other applications through his white wings. As long as light waves and electronic waves pass through the small gaps on his white wings, they will change their nature, twist into impossible vectors, and act according to their own laws. Although there is no blood in the Weiyuan substance, there are pulse signals similar to biological currents. Kakine Teitoku was also able to obtain the technology of constructing human cells using non-element matter in the life support device, and explored "new possibilities" such as restoring the body and manufacturing internal organs through non-element matter. These two abilities are very helpful for major technologies in Marvel. I hope you can give them to the protagonist.
I can only say that he is average, his ability is good, and his operation can stretch his hips.
Water, very water, especially water. Remember to read this book. You will not be able to pass a single scene in Chapter 50.
water
In fact, unnecessary details can be mentioned in one stroke, and there are also some passers-by who appear on the scene. It is not necessary to describe so much from the front. One sentence is enough when describing the side. Writing everything down so clearly will not make readers feel that you are very attentive, it will only make people feel that you are very good at filling in the details. My suggestion is to retain the detailed description of the protagonist and streamline other aspects. The protagonist is also resolute and decisive in doing things, but your dragging narration really puts the protagonist back a bit.
Very few people write about the settings of Final Fantasy. You must follow them.









