
Passers-by in the Courtyard
About This Novel
Traveling through the Siheyuan, my wife is a dragon! Traveling through the Qinman Siheyuan, which is notorious and causing harm to the heavens, the protagonist has a blood feud. The story of a battle of wits and courage along the way, cheating and counterattack,
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Official(17)Scraped 23d ago
oral literature
After reading a few pictures, I feel like I am writing a self-narrative
I have already changed the chapter that you said was very poisonous.
Regarding the one you said is very congested, I have already changed it. I plan to change the other one tonight. If you think there are still problems, please tell me again and I will continue to change it.
About Chapter 40
What I wrote was a bit too bloody. When I first wrote it, I didn't notice anything was wrong. When I read it again later, I realized how bloody it was, and then it was blocked. I have changed it, and it may be posted in a few days.
The article seems to me to be just a statement without a sense of substitution, such as... (Writing is just copying, without any ideas of my own)
Running account... Has a sense of mindless beauty...
I'll give you two stars. The main character is already cultivating immortality. He acts like a fool every day. Do you know what cultivating immortality is? They are not on the same level as ordinary people. Seeing the protagonist being so stupid, I want to give you a lot of fun
It's surprising how many typos there are.
There are so many typos that it seems like a lot of effort! ! !
Damn it, the Four Birds book was really disgusting, and it was written like a nagging password
I have no desire to continue reading, so it's a straightforward story.
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Community(0)
Official(17)Scraped 23d ago
oral literature
After reading a few pictures, I feel like I am writing a self-narrative
I have already changed the chapter that you said was very poisonous.
Regarding the one you said is very congested, I have already changed it. I plan to change the other one tonight. If you think there are still problems, please tell me again and I will continue to change it.
About Chapter 40
What I wrote was a bit too bloody. When I first wrote it, I didn't notice anything was wrong. When I read it again later, I realized how bloody it was, and then it was blocked. I have changed it, and it may be posted in a few days.
The article seems to me to be just a statement without a sense of substitution, such as... (Writing is just copying, without any ideas of my own)
Running account... Has a sense of mindless beauty...
I'll give you two stars. The main character is already cultivating immortality. He acts like a fool every day. Do you know what cultivating immortality is? They are not on the same level as ordinary people. Seeing the protagonist being so stupid, I want to give you a lot of fun
It's surprising how many typos there are.
There are so many typos that it seems like a lot of effort! ! !
Damn it, the Four Birds book was really disgusting, and it was written like a nagging password
I have no desire to continue reading, so it's a straightforward story.









