My Restaurant Connects to Another World

The protagonist was threatened and even kidnapped in the first chapter. Who would still be interested in reading? Without some tricks, a villain would come in and he wouldn't be afraid of being beaten to death. Anyway, as soon as he saw the protagonist being kidnapped, he stopped reading. It's probably because of the high rating it was written like this. Not to mention that the protagonist is invincible in the store, you should at least make sure that the people who come in cannot harm the protagonist.

The theme of the novel is good, similar to an anime, and it also randomly travels through a different world in a western restaurant. However, when I saw the protagonist's sister appear, I felt a little tired of reading it. The younger sister's attributes are too arrogant. Too much is too much, too arrogant is annoying, and as a younger sister, she clearly knows all of her brother's sisters, doesn't it feel a bit perverted? The need for control is too much. A girl doesn't give her brother some space to keep secrets and keeps making sarcastic comments. It's really not good. If I had a sister like this, I would give her a beating first. Loving your sister doesn't mean letting her bite your nose in your face, you have to be measured. The above is my personal opinion.

I saw someone in the comment section saying it doesn't look good, but I don't understand why it doesn't look good. It's just that he occasionally has some small loopholes. But no one is perfect, okay? Others say, ah, aren't you the protagonist? Why don't you spoil it? Why not let those guests exchange some skills? Come on, this is just a food novel, it's about daily life, not about passionate battles, okay? If you insist on spoiling the story and saying that skill is king, then please go read those novels that sell dog meat over sheep's heads. Some people also said that it was too boring to use any routines, too bland and not interesting at all. If you want to read routine articles, you should go to the hot-blooded articles or look at the rankings. They are all filled with routine articles. Don't come to harm us again. Others are saying that it's useless when the main character is kidnapped in the first chapter. Why is he so weak? Please, even if he is the protagonist, he was an ordinary person before, so he still needs a buffer, right? How can you be able to read and write from birth, or can you build cannons from birth? You are capable. If you want to read something like that, go read some cool articles. They are all accepted in an instant, and they become stronger in an instant. If there is anything that has not been mentioned, please add it in the comment section. Finally, I would like to say, please leave a comment after reading it. The comment area is for expressing your opinions, not just for you to comment blindly without reading it. That kind of behavior is very, very, very irresponsible behavior. Let me solemnly state that I am not a trustee, I am not a trustee, I am not a trustee! ! ! ! ! Some people always say that I am a caretaker. Hum╯^╰

From the passionate novels at the beginning to the farming novels and now the daily novels, I feel that after reading the books for a long time, I feel more numb. Maybe I prefer the daily novels.

It doesn't feel very good. First of all, the protagonist is too rubbish and is always being threatened. The golden finger is similar. There is no restriction system at all, such as limiting the abilities of people from other worlds. After all, it would be disgusting if someone came and threatened the protagonist.

The character creation is not very good (what the hell is a sister? Why did you add a sister?). Since you wrote that it is a link to a restaurant in another world, you should interact more with guests from other worlds and ignore people in real life. Also, write more about delicious food and don't cook difficult food right from the start (it seems from the front that the protagonist is a person who doesn't know how to cook). Do some simple things to gain proficiency and then cook them again. And why doesn't the protagonist order something that increases physical fitness? Or do some meditation to clear and speed up your thinking, so that you can spend more time practicing (it can be combined with the previous proficiency and learning skills).

I've read more than twenty chapters and can't stand it anymore! Seeing such a brother-sister relationship, I couldn't stop watching it. A sister who doesn't leave any privacy at all, and who beats her brother even when he's given a favor, what kind of sister is there? If you say she is a childhood sweetheart and future wife, this is fair enough, but if you say she is a younger sister, it is a bit too much, really!! Brothers and sisters can cheat on each other, but not to this extent. . . . . . . If you don't like the above personal opinions, please don't criticize them. The writing is pretty good except for the younger sister.

First of all, if the guests in your book are all daily characters, then I won't say anything. This is a good daily novel. But the recent guests in your book are all very powerful characters in Western fantasy novels. Then I have to say a few words. The protagonist in your book is a mortal, and even after more than 300 chapters, he is still a mortal. Even if the protagonist is protected by a magic circle, don't you think it looks useless? Of course, I'm not saying that I have to give spoilers, or pretend to be a slap in the face, or anything like that, but what is the real daily writing like? It's a group of people of similar strength chatting and fighting over there. If they are all ordinary people, then there is no problem if the protagonist is a mortal. But if the guests are not ordinary people, the protagonist does not need to be very strong, but he must have basic strength, right? At least it can't be too weak, right? But I see that all the extraordinary powers now have no connection with the protagonist. The only thing he has is a universal language arcana. The guests who come now seem to be chatting and laughing with the protagonist, but in fact? Most of the customers treat the protagonist as a clown. The protagonist's sister monitors the protagonist's every move. The protagonist gives his sister gifts, and his sister beats the protagonist (I have never seen such a sister). The only few supernatural power seeds he gave were either swallowed by the protagonist's sister or by the protagonist's shop assistant. After absorbing it, this is not a daily novel at all. This is a "masochistic life of the protagonist" or "the life of a tool man of the protagonist". Then the protagonist dies 100 years later (maybe he will not live 100 years), and then the restaurant continues to find the next tool man. Author, do you think this is really what readers want to read?

Today, when I couldn't wait to open this book and read today's two chapters, I felt confused. After the upgrade, shouldn't the plot advance suddenly? But the author hit me in the face with the ending on the spot. I always thought, author, why don't you follow the routine!? After all, there are really too few Zhutian Restaurant streams, and normally most Zhutian Restaurant streams are: nice! The restaurant has been upgraded! You can go and harm other worlds! Because most of the Zhutian Restaurant stream has this routine, but I suddenly realized that I can no longer write it because there is nothing to write in this book. After all, the protagonist does not have a very, very difficult goal to achieve. Without an urgent goal, there is no motivation to move forward. Moreover, the protagonist's final goal has also been achieved. Protagonist: Immortality? Because I have written everything that can be written in this book. Finally, I wish the author well. I don't know if there is a next book. Write to new heights, readers gather I wonder if there will be a new book next. Okay, no matter how hard I write this poem, I don't know what to write. After all, I think my poetry is very good. I won't tell you if there is a new book. (QMQ~)

In fact, it felt okay at the beginning and was quite interesting, but as soon as the younger sister appeared, something didn't feel right. Although I also have a younger sister, I can't accept the kind of younger sister who is a bit unreasonable and the older brother has no status at all. From the moment the younger sister appeared, I felt that the protagonist was over. They are all in a weak position, and I think that my younger sister, a student, knows everything as soon as she sees the protagonist, and she also directly sees the protagonist's golden finger. This makes me think that this younger sister will do something very naughty to end the protagonist. After all, this younger sister appears too early. If it were in the middle and later stages of the novel, and the protagonist had developed, I would still be able to accept it if he was accidentally broken up by his sister. Also, the protagonist feels like a migrant worker. When people from another world come, he is completely in a weak position. It's okay to meet polite people. But when you meet someone who is coquettish, capricious or unreasonable, it gives people the feeling of a weak character. Although this is in line with a normal person's way of coping, maybe it's because I usually lack this kind of character. I want to see a protagonist who is neither humble nor arrogant but has backbone. As a result, this kind of coping method appears on my sister. I don't even know if the protagonist is my sister. Moreover, all the money earned has been taken away by the system. Twenty chapters in, the protagonist has a golden finger and is weak, and he also has a strong sister who has no cultivation talent. It is too slow to get started.