Dnf Puppet Controller of American Comics

The plot outline is very compact, using a compact outline to cover up the details. This is nothing, and ordinary readers won't care about it. But sometimes the author doesn't forcefully change the plot outline when you don't have an idea. For example, by Chapter 60, it was so poisonous that I was directly persuaded to quit the hunter program you started. You have been developing the plot outline very compactly, which will lead to gaps in your subsequent plot outline. It is obvious that chapters 59 to 60 are a huge and poisonous gap. The book will be completed in no more than a million words at the end.

If the author writes about Marvel, he shouldn't cross over to DC. DC is originally much more messy than Marvel, and the plot is too tight. After reading more than 20 chapters, the protagonist has basically no time to talk about daily life. It would be good to have more daily routines. For DNF novels, I originally hope that the author can handle the plot better later. . . . . . . . . .

Could you please be more careful with the narration? The plot adds a lot of messy things.

The title of the book is American comics, not Marvel, which proves that American comics have missions, but it also leads to a messy plot with no obvious main line. The various effects caused by the combination of American comics are not seen anyway. Just see monsters and snake gods everywhere causing trouble, and no one cares about it.

When I look at The Flash, it feels like it was written by a different person. To be honest, I personally feel that the previous one is a masterpiece, but when I look at it later, I feel that calling it trash is being flattering.

Almost all of them are flash sales articles...

Although there are punctuation marks and chapters, it still gave me a feeling of being rushed together. The whole novel is very compact. Is there anything that forced you to finish it?

This book posed a big problem for itself when it came to the world structure at the beginning. Various worlds were thrown together in a mess without any logic, and I felt that I knew too little about the superhero universe (the collective name of superheroes such as Marvel and DC) or the apostles in DNF. Moreover, flashpoints and other things were really the beginning of a suicide attempt, and they even forced the apostles to become apostles (ー_ー)!!

By the way, the bald guy is the Ancient One?

I can't understand movies and comics that I haven't seen before, and I can't understand what's written at all.