The Ordinary Life of a Female Supporting Character Cultivating Immortality

Dear cuties, I hope there is a male protagonist! ! ! The author's mother is really confused

I saw that you are all discussing whether to have a male protagonist, and then I thought, you can have a male protagonist, but the strength should not be too strong. It is best to have a male protagonist who will progress together with the female protagonist and whose strength is similar to the female protagonist. And there should be no nonsense. The main plot is to cultivate immortality, and the male protagonist will be a foil to complete the plot. It is best to have a weak presence. Killing two birds with one stone, no one will say that the heroine is lonely and cold without anyone to accompany her, and no one will be bothered by those ridiculous plots and the cool and arrogant male protagonist. (The above are for reference only. They are all my personal opinions and opinions. We can discuss them. Please don't scold me. There is nothing specific. A group of jpg's with a strong desire to survive.)

Here, Susu would like to tell you about the specifics of this book. 1. Reasons for rating 9.1 Whether you believe it or not, this score is rated by every reader, and there is no question of asking others to rate it. Of course, I also admit that I rated it five stars on two accounts, one on QQ and one on WeChat, but this is human nature. You can also look at the book friend rankings. I did not reward myself. 2. Some loopholes in this book In fact, I am also an old bookworm. In my opinion, this book has many, very big loopholes. But sometimes, if I don't want to make up for it, it can make up for it. Sometimes, I skip a thing before it is explained clearly, because I am afraid that the delay in the plot will make you dislike it, but I did not expect that this problem will lead to the plot not being explained clearly. I understand now that because everyone's thoughts are different, this book has already become a world in my mind from the beginning. There are some things that I didn't write out because it was in my mind. I'm sorry about this. I only realized it now, so I will change it in the future. Everything must be explained clearly. 3. This book is my first book. In terms of plot, you said it is very similar to some books. Actually no, what I use is the world framework of the world of immortality. These things are based on imagination. It is also like this, but the plot is definitely different. Although it has 400,000 words, so far, it has not even reached half of it. The real highlight comes later. 4. I admit that I have a bit of a blind heart. As an author, it is my duty to think about the plot all night long. It is also my duty to revise the article all night long. It is also what I should do to resist the lack of support from my family. However, I thought, if I allow others to hate my books, don't I also allow myself to hate them? I am also a human being, and I also have emotions and desires. Others haven't even read a chapter, and their backhand is a low score. I will directly delete such comments that affect my mood. This will also be the case in the future. Everyone has different thoughts. If I make comments with low scores in the future, I will directly delete them because they affect my mood very much. I write novels not to judge people's faces, but to find common lovers. If anyone feels uncomfortable after reading this comment, I'm sorry! This is my voice as an author, and I think this is also the voice of every new author.

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It seems that "Jing hope's name is useless" but it is actually the author's choice of name. If you have any good and beautiful names, please give me some advice! ! !

1. I think it's best not to make your emotions too obvious from the beginning when writing about cultivating immortals. 2. When the male protagonist appears, don't describe it too deliberately. Otherwise, as soon as he appears, everyone will know that he is the male protagonist and that he has cheats. You don't need to identify the male protagonist or give too many hints, giving readers more room for speculation and adding a little motivation to continue reading. 3. However, it is impossible to write without feelings in the early stage. You can write more about the love between brothers and sisters in times of adversity. The relationship between the male and female protagonists can also be born from this. This will be more convincing. After all, how can you see true love without adversity? 4. Don't have too many emotional scenes for the male protagonist. If there are too many, there may be two bad possibilities: 1. It may be written as a romance novel cloaked in the cloak of cultivating immortals. 2. If the male and female protagonists do not handle it well, it may be written in a far-fetched and hateful way (you may not be able to hold back your feelings once they start, and if you do not explain clearly, you cannot continue. Remember, we are a novel about cultivating immortals). 5. I think the male protagonist in this article is inappropriate, because I have a feeling that this is the standard male protagonist in ordinary romance novels. I hope the author can change it later. Also, it is best to limit the cheat cat, or use it less, otherwise he will be invincible. . . It feels like there is less passion and excitement. The plot may not be so ups and downs. 6. I hope that the author will use more novel themes. For example, the author will get rid of the old jokes such as family fighting and the vicious cousin seeking power and usurping the throne. To be honest, I felt tired after seeing these and felt that the number of articles was being lowered. There are also old jokes such as the White Lotus that even made me feel that my IQ was insulted. This is an advantage of this article. Another good thing is that the teammates' IQs are not competing with each other online. This is also one of the things that attracts me. In fact, you can improve the opponent's IQ, draw them more carefully to give them emotions, and refuse to kill them without thinking. You can also add a little comedy to make Wenwen more energetic. 7. Finally, I hope that the author can make a good performance, write something that others have not, and find his own unique way! 8. The most important point I am short on books, can you recommend any good novels with more characteristics?

Many male protagonists of strong female characters are like this, as follows: As soon as the male protagonist comes out, the female protagonist becomes weak, very hypocritical, and often injured. The male protagonist has various treasures and various jade pendants. He will give them to the female protagonist and tell her to take them with her. The jade pendant will protect her. If she is in danger, she can contact him. . . He often shows off in front of the heroine, has a strong identity, is good-looking, and has a fiancée. . . Then various female supporting characters become obsessed with the male protagonist and cause trouble for the female protagonist, and the male protagonist comes out and kills those female supporting characters. . . . . . . Don't have too many plots like the one above. . The author is great, let me talk about my favorite male protagonist of Xiu Xian Nv Qiang. As soon as the male protagonist comes out, the female protagonist cannot be weak behind her. The female protagonist cannot be brainless and pretentious. He cannot steal the heroine's role or limelight. He cannot always act cool in front of the heroine. He cannot have a fiancée and cannot be loved by everyone. . . He can have strong strength, a strong background, and can show off in his own territory! The author is great, in short, I like that the male protagonist has less scenes! That's it, does anyone have anything to add?

Overall it's okay, but it always feels like it doesn't read quite right. The plot can be said to be very novel, especially since the heroine and the original heroine are twin sisters, and their parents are very mysterious. I guess something may have happened to the heroine and the original heroine when they were young that caused them to separate. But according to the memory of the original heroine, she believed that her current parents were her biological parents (this is also a mystery). I feel like the author has laid a lot of groundwork! ╭(╯Ε╰)╮The following plot will definitely require the two sisters to find their parents together. If this trend continues, they will be out of the world. Also, I think the emotional line of the heroine has begun to develop. The hero is undoubtedly Xuanyuan Yize, and the original heroine and Beichen Mohe are still a couple. Is it developing too fast? After all, it has just begun (there are only more than 200 chapters, which is too few, so update quickly ←_←.) There are still many small flaws. The article is relatively white and bland, which did not really attract me psychologically. For example, there has been too little contact between the heroine and the original heroine, and she has not confessed her identity until now; Xuanyuan Yize suddenly fell in love with the heroine, and the emotional line is abrupt; there are also inconsistencies in the article. Previously, it was written that Jing Zhenhai discovered that Jing Xi had established the tenth level of foundation building. Later, after the heroine formed a pill, she hid her cultivation to the first level of foundation building, and Jing Zhenhai really thought that it was the first level of foundation building (this is unreasonable); and the general background of the world and the development of the original world were not written (this is really super important!!!) I hope the author can revise it a little, but the writing is really good. Come on, author, and look forward to the next plot. I believe it will get better and better as it gets written! O(∩_∩)O

The book has such a high rating because it naturally has its own merits. Every book is like the author's child. If you don't like it, please don't hurt it. If you point out any mistakes, I will correct them immediately. For you, two hundred thousand words may not take you an hour or two, but it took me two months of hard work to write it. Sometimes it is inevitable that you will forget some details that you have written before. This is just a book, so I hope you don't take it too seriously. If you don't like it, you can just leave it alone. Don't get pleasure from hurting the author.

I read it in one sitting, although it was a quick read, but the plot is pretty good. The heroine has her own opportunities. The heroine in the original book also has her own opportunities. It's a very strange idea. The two are twins. I look forward to them finding their origins together.