Naruto: Black Zetsu Has a Younger Brother
by Xiaozhu
About This Novel
I don't know how many years ago, a person fell from the sky in this world-Kaguya Otsutsuki. She gave birth to two sons, Hamura and Hagoromo, and passed her chakra on to them. When Hamura and Hagoromo grew up, they were full of curiosity and went to the forbidden area mentioned by Kaguya - around the sacred tree. It was discovered that the villagers were being used as nourishment for the sacred tree, and Kaguya's plan was also discovered. She attempts to eat the chakra fruit of the Ten-Tails tree, the sacred tree, to gain powerful power. From then on, the two brothers decided to fight against Kaguya together. This process lasted for a long, long time. Finally one night, the two brothers used the Six Earth Explosive Sky Stars to seal Kaguya. But when sealing, two black things flew out from Kaguya's sleeves, one was Black Zetsu, and the other was Gray Zetsu. (Don't worry about the character's name, I am the author and I have the final say! Humph!)
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Official(8)Scraped 6d ago
Sorry, I think this book is very toxic.
The protagonist is obviously a person who has lived for thousands of years like Hei Zetsu, but the mentality of the protagonist feels like that of a child who has not yet grown up. And I feel like you didn't write Black Zetsu's character well. Black Jue will never trust anyone. Your protagonist and Black Zetsu have been separated for thousands of years. It's impossible for Hei Jue to be moved by the protagonist's call of "brother." And Black Zetsu is very stable, he will never let someone who may ruin his plan at any time. Just like in the original work, Yahiko is regarded as an uncontrollable pawn by Black Zetsu because he can influence Nagato's decision. Then he was tricked to death by Hanzo. So I think your blackness is definitely not that dark. The protagonist's character is also a bit indecisive. In short, the idea of your book is good, but many of the original characters in your book have been changed beyond recognition. Sorry for giving you such a low score
Break update
Your dear author has a stomachache, so there will be no updates today. Who knows what it feels like to wake up in the middle of the night to go to the toilet? Please give it a like and I will continue to update tomorrow ("T^T)
Something went wrong!
I found that I couldn't remember the specifics of the Great Ninja War at all. After a few days off from updating, I'll go read up on the Great Ninja War again!
Is the protagonist a good guy or a bad guy?
Is the protagonist a good guy or a villain............uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Entered the palace
No more, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey
The process is a bit too fast!
The writing is good, but it's very embarrassing when the author enters the palace.
Everything else is fine, but I'm not used to the curse seal.
Can you cut that piece off? Black Zetsu can survive even if he is cut open.
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Community(0)
Official(8)Scraped 6d ago
Sorry, I think this book is very toxic.
The protagonist is obviously a person who has lived for thousands of years like Hei Zetsu, but the mentality of the protagonist feels like that of a child who has not yet grown up. And I feel like you didn't write Black Zetsu's character well. Black Jue will never trust anyone. Your protagonist and Black Zetsu have been separated for thousands of years. It's impossible for Hei Jue to be moved by the protagonist's call of "brother." And Black Zetsu is very stable, he will never let someone who may ruin his plan at any time. Just like in the original work, Yahiko is regarded as an uncontrollable pawn by Black Zetsu because he can influence Nagato's decision. Then he was tricked to death by Hanzo. So I think your blackness is definitely not that dark. The protagonist's character is also a bit indecisive. In short, the idea of your book is good, but many of the original characters in your book have been changed beyond recognition. Sorry for giving you such a low score
Break update
Your dear author has a stomachache, so there will be no updates today. Who knows what it feels like to wake up in the middle of the night to go to the toilet? Please give it a like and I will continue to update tomorrow ("T^T)
Something went wrong!
I found that I couldn't remember the specifics of the Great Ninja War at all. After a few days off from updating, I'll go read up on the Great Ninja War again!
Is the protagonist a good guy or a bad guy?
Is the protagonist a good guy or a villain............uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Entered the palace
No more, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey
The process is a bit too fast!
The writing is good, but it's very embarrassing when the author enters the palace.
Everything else is fine, but I'm not used to the curse seal.
Can you cut that piece off? Black Zetsu can survive even if he is cut open.
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