
The Crow is Journeying to the West, Evolving from the Plunder Entry
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(A group of book friends: 1013587739, welcome to remind you to update) Yu Qiye came to the world of Journey to the West and became a crow spirit, and even opened the destiny entry. Control the wind - control the wind - control the strong wind - control the storm... Devouring flesh and blood - refining flesh and blood - absorbing flesh and blood - evolving flesh and blood... Eat iron - eat gold - swallow gold to refine body - swallow gold to refine qi... ... The world only knows about the Monkey King in Huaguo Mountain, but who knows that there is another monster in Huaguo Mountain. This demon only wants to live forever. If the earth dares to block it, it will be shattered. If the sky dares to stop it, the sky will be split apart! Nezha: "If I am cruel, he will be more cruel, and if I am cruel, he will be even more cruel." Yang Jian: "I'm not afraid of monkeys, but the crow on his shoulder gives me a headache." Yu Qiye: "You could call me Crow Spirit in the previous life, and I won't excuse you, but in this life, what should you call me?"
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Official(99)Scraped 4d ago
Read Chapter 12 to persuade you to quit
I have been a little bit patient in the past and am mainly looking forward to how the plot will advance later. The entries in Chapter 12 can be disgusting to others at will, and I don't want to worry about the subsequent plot. Let's talk about the little poisonous point of doubt. Is 1 robbing or copying? If you rob someone else, does the other party still have it? 2. Since defeating can trigger the entry to capture the word, does the deer have to be killed because it was said to be a child? Also give a colored entry, can one target only be plundered once? I started to think that there was no problem in killing the deer. The problem was that there was no reasonable burial place and the fox was left unkilled. It was disgusting. 3The same entry behaves differently in different races. Can humans be good at water and fish be good at water the same? At least it is different initially and requires further training to make it work. . . These three poisonous points can be skipped before, and give others entries to persuade them to quit.
This book doesn't deserve 9 out of 100 points. It's just a mindless and cool piece of writing.
The author's writing is too demonic. It is understandable that the weak eat the strong, but I can't understand the intention to kill for no reason. Is Tang San reincarnated? Don't be evil for small things. Have you ever learned this? If you haven't learned it, crawl back and learn.
This book really doesn't score so high
At first I saw that the woman couldn't walk. Second, the author treats The Ancient World as a novel about cultivating immortals on the market? Third, I just saw Chapter 7 and didn't want to read it anymore.
I can't feel the level of nine points. It's normal for the weak to prey on the strong. If you kill, you will be killed. But if you act harshly, you will become a clown. The protagonist is also a bit mature and independent. He develops steadily and challenges a boss from time to time. This novel is very good and excellent. There is no need to write emotional lines. Don't deliberately express something through the actions of the protagonist. If you can't write well, you will become a clown. Be natural, use appropriate descriptions for appropriate scenes, and you don't ask when you kill others. The problem is that the protagonist can't stand it when others tease him a little and starts to say harsh words. As a result, the protagonist becomes insidious and uses all his strength when others are tired of teasing. To be honest, he is a very villain. To put it bluntly, it is Tang San's behavior. If a person is not good enough, he will not be able to enter the elegant hall. In The image of Voldemort is usually the one in the story. I hope the author can portray it better, or at least match it well. If you want to kill, just kill with a bit more grandeur, like the three demons of Shituoling. Why are you cowering all day long? Are you afraid of Buddha when you see others committing crimes? What great things can be accomplished by writing so cowardly?
The monkey is disgusting at the beginning. He is a key figure in the game between the East and the West. I don't know how many big shots are staring at you. You go around other people's houses every day and hang out with them. Do you think those who hang out with monkeys will have a happy ending?
Come on, there are still too few updates. More updates will attract people to watch.
After looking at the resume, it should be a monkey and a dog! Otherwise why stand on the shoulders of monkeys! I hate the mindless monkey licking in Journey to the West! I don't know why Journey to the West just can't get out of this plot! Where are the good people and monsters in the mythical world?
I don't know its cause, I can't achieve its cause, I don't know its effect.
The beginning of the story Doesn't have to be perfect But Then again Who can guarantee The story is as you wish But it is One after another people stood up One after another people fall Create the world in our hearts If you don't kneel down, how can you represent my success? Without comparison, it won't make you wiser. You... Thought I was really Monkey King, Monkey King In the end, it wasn't Guaguai's achievement. Fighting Buddha A carrot and a pit 🕳️ You only know there is a pit but don't know it The tip of the iceberg and the tip of the heaven How similar reincarnation TM likes variables but doesn't like variables Even TM himself wants to be this variable Or Look at its appearance learn its shape covered with skin Turn into bones Go your own way Travel through time and space. . . . . Is there really an invisible big hand in this world that is manipulating all of this? I am just waiting to be on the road to enlightenment through crowdfunding. To cultivate one's own way through all sentient beings Who came up with the name Pangu? No one can be perfect in this life, there will always be a lack of talents So what am I saying why do I leave these questions? Is it true that I want to stay, or is someone lending me a hand to stay? What do you see in the picture What did you understand?
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Official(99)Scraped 4d ago
Read Chapter 12 to persuade you to quit
I have been a little bit patient in the past and am mainly looking forward to how the plot will advance later. The entries in Chapter 12 can be disgusting to others at will, and I don't want to worry about the subsequent plot. Let's talk about the little poisonous point of doubt. Is 1 robbing or copying? If you rob someone else, does the other party still have it? 2. Since defeating can trigger the entry to capture the word, does the deer have to be killed because it was said to be a child? Also give a colored entry, can one target only be plundered once? I started to think that there was no problem in killing the deer. The problem was that there was no reasonable burial place and the fox was left unkilled. It was disgusting. 3The same entry behaves differently in different races. Can humans be good at water and fish be good at water the same? At least it is different initially and requires further training to make it work. . . These three poisonous points can be skipped before, and give others entries to persuade them to quit.
This book doesn't deserve 9 out of 100 points. It's just a mindless and cool piece of writing.
The author's writing is too demonic. It is understandable that the weak eat the strong, but I can't understand the intention to kill for no reason. Is Tang San reincarnated? Don't be evil for small things. Have you ever learned this? If you haven't learned it, crawl back and learn.
This book really doesn't score so high
At first I saw that the woman couldn't walk. Second, the author treats The Ancient World as a novel about cultivating immortals on the market? Third, I just saw Chapter 7 and didn't want to read it anymore.
I can't feel the level of nine points. It's normal for the weak to prey on the strong. If you kill, you will be killed. But if you act harshly, you will become a clown. The protagonist is also a bit mature and independent. He develops steadily and challenges a boss from time to time. This novel is very good and excellent. There is no need to write emotional lines. Don't deliberately express something through the actions of the protagonist. If you can't write well, you will become a clown. Be natural, use appropriate descriptions for appropriate scenes, and you don't ask when you kill others. The problem is that the protagonist can't stand it when others tease him a little and starts to say harsh words. As a result, the protagonist becomes insidious and uses all his strength when others are tired of teasing. To be honest, he is a very villain. To put it bluntly, it is Tang San's behavior. If a person is not good enough, he will not be able to enter the elegant hall. In The image of Voldemort is usually the one in the story. I hope the author can portray it better, or at least match it well. If you want to kill, just kill with a bit more grandeur, like the three demons of Shituoling. Why are you cowering all day long? Are you afraid of Buddha when you see others committing crimes? What great things can be accomplished by writing so cowardly?
The monkey is disgusting at the beginning. He is a key figure in the game between the East and the West. I don't know how many big shots are staring at you. You go around other people's houses every day and hang out with them. Do you think those who hang out with monkeys will have a happy ending?
Come on, there are still too few updates. More updates will attract people to watch.
After looking at the resume, it should be a monkey and a dog! Otherwise why stand on the shoulders of monkeys! I hate the mindless monkey licking in Journey to the West! I don't know why Journey to the West just can't get out of this plot! Where are the good people and monsters in the mythical world?
I don't know its cause, I can't achieve its cause, I don't know its effect.
The beginning of the story Doesn't have to be perfect But Then again Who can guarantee The story is as you wish But it is One after another people stood up One after another people fall Create the world in our hearts If you don't kneel down, how can you represent my success? Without comparison, it won't make you wiser. You... Thought I was really Monkey King, Monkey King In the end, it wasn't Guaguai's achievement. Fighting Buddha A carrot and a pit 🕳️ You only know there is a pit but don't know it The tip of the iceberg and the tip of the heaven How similar reincarnation TM likes variables but doesn't like variables Even TM himself wants to be this variable Or Look at its appearance learn its shape covered with skin Turn into bones Go your own way Travel through time and space. . . . . Is there really an invisible big hand in this world that is manipulating all of this? I am just waiting to be on the road to enlightenment through crowdfunding. To cultivate one's own way through all sentient beings Who came up with the name Pangu? No one can be perfect in this life, there will always be a lack of talents So what am I saying why do I leave these questions? Is it true that I want to stay, or is someone lending me a hand to stay? What do you see in the picture What did you understand?











