Kunpeng Xiaoyao in the Prehistoric Times
by White Cat Who Loves Grilled Fish
About This Novel
Travel through the prehistoric times and become Kunpeng. In this life, I don't seek invincibility but seek freedom.
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Official(9)Scraped 5d ago
You don't understand prehistoric times, the author didn't write anything wrong at all
Although I know what you want to write, can you divide it into laws and principles? As for the laws, you can write the Law of Daluo, the Law of Hunyuan, the Law of Wuji, the Law of Wuji. The Wuji comes from behind. One body and two sides contain everything. This can transform into the Law. As for what is behind the Tao, ahem, the devil knows.
What are you writing about? Anticlimactic
Even if the realm is not good, don't write about the prehistoric times. Do you understand the prehistoric times?
The writing is mediocre and there are too many irrelevant words.
There are too many explanations in the book. Everything is written in the main text but there is a lot of nonsense. Everything has to be explained. Are you writing a book or a narration?
I've watched so many episodes that Kunpeng is dead and there was him in the front, but he seemed to have died in the back and disappeared.
The writing style is wrong, the novel is good, and some of the settings are reasonable.
I have forgotten the book, and also forgotten that the original intention is all about machinations. Is it worthy of the title of the book? I only read it based on the title of the book.
I have forgotten the book, and also forgotten that the original intention is all about machinations. Is it worthy of the title of the book? I only read the book based on its title. It made me feel upset and carefree.
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Official(9)Scraped 5d ago
You don't understand prehistoric times, the author didn't write anything wrong at all
Although I know what you want to write, can you divide it into laws and principles? As for the laws, you can write the Law of Daluo, the Law of Hunyuan, the Law of Wuji, the Law of Wuji. The Wuji comes from behind. One body and two sides contain everything. This can transform into the Law. As for what is behind the Tao, ahem, the devil knows.
What are you writing about? Anticlimactic
Even if the realm is not good, don't write about the prehistoric times. Do you understand the prehistoric times?
The writing is mediocre and there are too many irrelevant words.
There are too many explanations in the book. Everything is written in the main text but there is a lot of nonsense. Everything has to be explained. Are you writing a book or a narration?
I've watched so many episodes that Kunpeng is dead and there was him in the front, but he seemed to have died in the back and disappeared.
The writing style is wrong, the novel is good, and some of the settings are reasonable.
I have forgotten the book, and also forgotten that the original intention is all about machinations. Is it worthy of the title of the book? I only read it based on the title of the book.
I have forgotten the book, and also forgotten that the original intention is all about machinations. Is it worthy of the title of the book? I only read the book based on its title. It made me feel upset and carefree.
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