The City's Reborn Miracle Doctor

Her name is Ling Tian, she has Emperor Wushang Her name is Mu Xiaohuan, and she has Gu Xijue Her name is Qian Luo, and she has Gu Jingshi Her name is Bi Xia, and she has Qin Zhan Her name is Lin Youyou, and she has Luo Hanyu Her name is Su Luo, and she has Nangong Liuyun Her name is Yunlan, she has a history as a noble Her name is Qin Yi, and she has Yun Huan Her name is Fu Jiu, and she has Qin Mo Her name is Gong Mumu, she has the ability to resist the early cold Her name is Bai Zhixue, and she has Long Shaojue Her name is Jiang Yao, and she has Lu Xingzhi Her name is Mu Qianxun, and she has Ou Zun Her name is Qiao Xiaran, and she has Si Limo Her name is Liu Yuhuang, and she has dark nights Her name is Jing Jiaren, and she has Ximen Longting Her name is Jian Zhixi, and she has Cang Ling Her name is Shen Xiaoxiao, and she has Lu Yuchen

The heroine wants to let the whole world know that she is a cultivator, she is drunk! ! !

This book gave me the feeling that the female protagonist is too holy. Is she really so awesome? She leads her whole family to become immortals. If that's true, not everyone can become immortals. Also, the male protagonist is written too much. . . Does the hero's personality change when he meets the heroine? This is too fast. Everything has its own adaptability. It is impossible to accept it so quickly. Doesn't the heroine doubt the male protagonist's intentions? Doesn't she also doubt whether the male protagonist is a bad person? Didn't the events in her previous life make her realize that these people are selfish? It can't be like this, right? The above are all personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like it, thank you

The plot is too fast. The heroine used to be a cultivator and was betrayed to death. How could she trust others so quickly?

The heroine only met the hero a few times and she fell in love with him. Have a late laugh! ! ! !

I can't even write the main character's name clearly and it's very embarrassing. Is it Yan Huan'er or Lin Su Ying?

I suggest the author not to have a male protagonist in his next book. After reading two of his books, I found that every time a male protagonist appeared, it ruined my outlook on life. It was so inconsistent with normal people's psychological expectations. In my opinion, the female protagonist is very good and comfortable when there is no male protagonist. But once the male protagonist appears, it becomes unspeakable and strange. It would be better to write a story without a male protagonist and focus on cultivating immortality and becoming rich.

Dear author, your article is generally good, but some parts are too straightforward. For example, in Chapter 92, the heroine tells the hero so easily that she is a cultivator, but the two have only met three times, and their relationship progresses too quickly. The content is straightforward, and you can buy foreshadowing in many places, which can highlight the plot more. The writing is good, keep up the good work

All the irrationality is experienced in this book. The male protagonist really doesn't like it. He kisses the female protagonist for the first time. It's inexplicable that the female protagonist enjoys it and is speechless. In the world of cultivation, it is because of her alchemy skills that others are attacking her. Even in modern times, she is not taboo and dares to reveal any skills. Anyway, it's not very comfortable to watch.

It's strange that the heroine is obviously Yan Huan'er, but she appears to be someone else. . . . . .