The Flowing Water and Falling Flowers Against the Destiny
About This Novel
She made a big mistake in her efforts to save her sister, and was demoted to the mortal world. She happened to meet Lu Li, the grandson of the Emperor of Heaven who was killed by the demons.
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Official(2)Scraped 1mo ago
Come on together
Let me collect my thoughts and think about what I want to say. ------ Well, I saw you from Writer's Assistant. After reading two chapters, some paragraphs may still be too long. . This is my personal opinion. Some paragraphs can be subdivided a little, maybe because I read in larger fonts, and reading large paragraphs is always uncomfortable. There's nothing you can do about the length of the dialogue, but if you can, I'll break it up. The above are all personal opinions and do not represent everyone. I guess you are one of those people who rushes to the shelves without a recommendation, just like me. It can be considered that we are in sympathy with each other. Just take a look at my suggestions. The decision is in your hands. After all, I am just a very poor person. As long as you keep updating, I will give you recommendation votes from time to time in the future... If I remember ------ Come on together.
High-quality ancient fairy tales
It's been a long time since I've seen an antique fairy tale in ancient Chinese. Perhaps in the era of swords and swords, after the peach blossom debt has passed, I haven't encountered any amazing fairy tales in ancient Chinese. Although this book has some flaws, the basic literary skills are still sufficient. The heroine Xuan Jinyue is tough and not stupid. She is responsible and responsible. She is different from ordinary silly and sweet characters. The male protagonist Lu Li is deeply affectionate and calm, which is embarrassing. This book is sad, but it is not mindless sad, but the sadness of the protagonists being unable to stay together under the twists and turns of fate. The heroine abandons herself for the sake of justice, which is touching.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 1mo ago
Come on together
Let me collect my thoughts and think about what I want to say. ------ Well, I saw you from Writer's Assistant. After reading two chapters, some paragraphs may still be too long. . This is my personal opinion. Some paragraphs can be subdivided a little, maybe because I read in larger fonts, and reading large paragraphs is always uncomfortable. There's nothing you can do about the length of the dialogue, but if you can, I'll break it up. The above are all personal opinions and do not represent everyone. I guess you are one of those people who rushes to the shelves without a recommendation, just like me. It can be considered that we are in sympathy with each other. Just take a look at my suggestions. The decision is in your hands. After all, I am just a very poor person. As long as you keep updating, I will give you recommendation votes from time to time in the future... If I remember ------ Come on together.
High-quality ancient fairy tales
It's been a long time since I've seen an antique fairy tale in ancient Chinese. Perhaps in the era of swords and swords, after the peach blossom debt has passed, I haven't encountered any amazing fairy tales in ancient Chinese. Although this book has some flaws, the basic literary skills are still sufficient. The heroine Xuan Jinyue is tough and not stupid. She is responsible and responsible. She is different from ordinary silly and sweet characters. The male protagonist Lu Li is deeply affectionate and calm, which is embarrassing. This book is sad, but it is not mindless sad, but the sadness of the protagonists being unable to stay together under the twists and turns of fate. The heroine abandons herself for the sake of justice, which is touching.
