Journey to the West: People Are in Fangcun Mountain, Join the Chat Group

The author should go and start a new book. You have written very well about Taoist cultivation methods, but the plot is really bad. It is more important for a novel to write the plot well than anything else. For novels like this kind of chat group, I prefer the protagonist to look at people from other worlds with a sense of awe, and regard the group friends as a group of like-minded Taoists, absorbing the wisdom of other worlds and growing together, rather than stepping on them one by one, like Zhetian, breaking the limits on one path, and finally achieving a method with Daluo characteristics. Even the Immortal Method is worthy of reference. Just like the prehistoric world, although the moral level of the underworld is low, in the end it is not as eternal as the heart of heaven, and the mortal world is still the same endless time and space in the end. Yitian world can also stand at the top of its world and extend its life span for decades, close to the limit of mortals. Fighting against the world of the sky, one can also break the bondage of the original world and ascend, becoming the supreme being in one life.

In the final analysis, I don't understand the two cores of Buddhist and Taoist culture and Journey to the West. It's a white-knuckle article boasting about combat power, and there are a lot of logical problems.

Collect some information and keep debating in the novel. The plot is just like boiled water. Why are you writing a novel? You can just participate in the debate competition. Linghu Chong is very jealous of Yue Buqun, just wash your feathers, a street gangster and a hypocrite talk so much nonsense, how can he not be a hypocrite after just one sentence? The whole story is just trying to prove that what I said is right. The protagonist is so pretentious that it makes people speechless. The plot basically doesn't advance, and it's not much fun. There are no interesting conversations in the chat group, there are no awesome people cultivating immortals, and even the most vulgar pretense and slap in the face are useless. I just kept trying to write reasonably and use the little vinegar I collected.

What the hell did you write? You wrote that Cang Qian Bang is the incarnation of the entire world, and you said that he only has spiritual power but not the Dao. Aren't you kidding? As long as it is a world, there will be earth, fire, and feng shui. These four basic elements make up the world. The Sky List is the incarnation of the world, but you are suppressing it with the laws of heaven and earth. Damn, you can really write. As a person in the world, you can't use the most basic laws of heaven and earth. You can use the laws of heaven and earth to suppress it. It's like you were in the prehistoric times and you used the laws of heaven and earth. Suppressing the Heavenly Dao and calling you to death with just a few slaps is pretty good. The Sky Ranking is equivalent to the Heavenly Dao allowing you to suppress it with the laws of heaven and earth, but you only cultivate your spiritual power. Why don't you say that the entire Great Overlord, the entire Dou Po, is a large martial arts world, only the martial arts world has endless laws, and does not cultivate the soul, which is the soul. Aren't you looking for scolding?

Isn't this still the prehistoric era? The streets in the prehistoric era are all in ruins. Brainless black Buddhism.

Is it true that the piracy world will become genuine after a long time? . . . The prehistoric people despise those who traveled to the west? ? ? Outrageous

I like this book very much. The settings of each world are extremely restored. Reading this book is like reading the sequels of many ancient masterpieces at the same time. The meaning is still unfinished. The plot is full of ups and downs. Everyone has a distinct personality. They are not ridiculous at all. The writing is excellent. , The naming style is unique, and the readers in the book reviews are so friendly. I opened this magical book in the evening, and saw that every page is crooked and full of "flowers blooming on the pen". Every chapter is a god, and it will definitely be able to be read by Liu Fang QQ for a hundred days. But after washing the "taste", I discovered that there is an extremely eye-catching giant light-colored character between the characters: Shi

The author refers to Taoist literature on inner alchemy and Taoism. In the end, the Taoist Five Immortals are used to divide realms. There are also Taoist literature on Zhang Sanfeng and Yue Buqun, two Taoist figures. Not to mention Yue Buqun, even if Zhang Sanfeng became a monk halfway, he is also a master of Buddhism and Taoism. The book is like a person who has never seen the world.

💩Similarly, if you catch people in a chat group, you can't stop drinking. There is basically no description of the text. This book will definitely hit the street.

The content is too watery, I keep writing about removing demons