Call Me Master

Come on, the writing is really good. The content and characters are both good. It's much better than the current invincible text like Long Aotian or something like that.

Author: Why don't you come back yet?

This is indeed a good book, which makes me unforgettable. Unfortunately, it has been so long. I came back to read it and there is still no update. I would like to ask if the author can send some razors or something.

God *********Xu Xiake, I really don't think I have read Xu Xiake's travel notes! Is this a joke? I'm just too lazy to think about the characters!

1. The problem is not outstanding enough. Although writing novels is based on an imaginary world, many things must be based on reality, otherwise it will be chaotic. 2 The article written by the author first needs to give readers a certain sense of imagination, a sense of scene, and a sense of immersion. Your sense of immersion in the first few paragraphs is not very strong, but it is slightly insufficient to attract a certain sense of suspense. But you still need to pay more attention to this shortcoming. 3. Use simple and obvious expressions. The expression should not be too long and must be precise, otherwise readers will be conflicted and annoyed. 4. If possible, add more subtle descriptions, because the key to determining how to portray a character lies in the v part, which can make the character more vivid. 5. If possible, use more psychological descriptions, because this will make the article more immersive. 6. The plot moves too quickly. Pay attention to the ups and downs of the plot, because if it is too fast, it will dilute the reader's sense of involvement. 7. Each scene must clearly explain the protagonist and what he wants to express in this scene, and there must be clear logic. The literature review is as above Personal comment: I personally think this book is good, and the subject matter is relatively novel, but there are still some problems, which I feel are a pity, so I pointed them out to you. If possible, I can improve them and make them better. Come on.

The subject matter is very attractive, mainly because the content is interesting There are also people who ask about realm and read books carefully. 1. Qi Sea Realm 2. Cave Realm 3. Divine Palace Realm 4. Human Immortal (if the divine palace fails to attack the earthly immortal, there are two possibilities, one is that the divine palace is broken and falls back to the cave, the other is that the divine palace remains and is called human immortal) 5. Earthly Immortal. Let the author tell you what realm there is later. I don't know either.

Looking at the apprentice, she is the heroine!

It's a very interesting book. I always hope that it can be turned into a good domestic animation. It will definitely be very popular when I read it.

Keep updating! Otherwise, I won't vote for recommendations every day. The number of stars is also 4 stars

Single heroine! ! ! ! ?