
The Whole World Thought I Was Dead
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I won't die! Introduction to the regular version: Everyone thought she was dead, but she survived and lived better than everyone else! Today is also the day when Dragon (Chang) Lives (vomits) Tiger (blood) is born (Sun). Introduction to the serious version: She is the jewel of the Qiu family, willful and domineering. She is from the Jiutian Divine Clan and has the bloodline of Kunpeng. It's okay for the world to deceive her, but don't take away her most precious thing. When the Qiu family is exterminated and she is the only one left in the world, then what is there to fear! Returning again, her hands stained with blood, she will not let go of any of those who betrayed her and bullied her!
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That's the best autumn chill!
"The cold autumn wind makes me feel discouraged." _ Her name is Qiu Yihan, and she is the most beloved little princess of the Qiu clan. She was born with a gift of intelligence, but she grew up under the pampering of her father and brother! But fate likes to play tricks on people. On that day, wildfires broke out, and the Qiu family, which was at the peak of cultivation and had top repair resources, was wiped out. _ And Qiu Yihan, who was once the proud son of heaven, has become the only bloodline left of the Qiu clan. Her meridians all over her body were completely disabled, and she was basically no more than a disabled person. The huge gap and the blood feud she carried on her body made it impossible for her to return to the pampered and wanton little princess she was before. _ Who would have guessed that the culprit who caused her to fall into hell and reach this stage was none other than Shen Ke, a direct descendant of the Shen family who was engaged to Qiu Yihan. His wolfish ambition was not seen through at first, and Qiu Yihan hated having such a wolf and leopard enter his house. The living ones are the ones who suffer the most. Whenever she thinks of her past and those relatives, her heart breaks. The memories of Qiu Yuan, Qiu Yao and those people are engraved in Qiu Yihan's bone marrow. Even if she falls into Hell forever, she will still make Shen Ke and the Shen family suffer eternal disaster and pay for their debt with blood. _ In those endless darkness, there was someone who understood her pain and pulled her forward. He would make an exception to accept a disciple for her, and would use all the mysterious treasures and precious elixirs on her. Try every means to make her happy because of her sorrow, and wish her to achieve her wish. He would also be helpless and angry, because his disciple always refused to let him worry, and it was even more distressing to see her already riddled body repeatedly injured. But what else can I do, just pamper her. _ He is the best master - Yanqing. His apprentice can be pampered and willful His disciples can act boldly He will always be her solid support A friend lamented that he had changed, and he knew that he had indeed changed. From the moment he fell in love with that woman, he would never be the same again. He would become stronger just to protect her better. In the name of the master, I will protect her from worries throughout her life. _ Qiu Yihan's road to revenge was difficult. When her identity was exposed, she had to change her name and go to a strange place. Starting from being an outer disciple step by step, I thought it was just to temporarily avoid enemies, and I didn't care about other people. But after all, she still has a soft heart, and she does everything based on her heart. Isn't it also based on her kindness? Along the way, there were Yanqing, Senior Sister, Qi Yuheng, Liu Yan... Slowly her closed heart was opened, and her life gained other brightness and color besides revenge. _ Personally, I prefer watching emotional dramas, so please try to update more.
She is cold in autumn, born noble and unwilling to be mediocre.
Everyone in the world called her a "waste", but they never thought about the rough fate and injustice this woman had to bear. She is the most noble little princess of the Qiu family, willful and domineering. The Qiu family is the number one family in the world of cultivating immortals. They are the Nine Heavens God Clan and bear the bloodline of Kunpeng. With such a noble status, how could he be willing to become a so-called "trash"? / The whole world thought she was dead. But she decided to survive, and she lived better than anyone else! Qiu Yihan carries the indomitable spirit of the Qiu family in her bones. Have you ever heard of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger? The world can deceive her, but they just want to take her most precious thing, no! / A bloody feud that wiped out a family triggered a conspiracy that shocked the world of immortality. Ten years have been enough for them to forget the existence of the Qiu family. All the major families want to sit on the top throne. Isn't it ridiculous? Shen family, Shen Ke, these two words are engraved in her bones. The memory of hatred is blood red, and the heart-gnawing pain is the hatred that Qiu Yihan will never forget in her life. / At the wedding banquet, the five-hundred-year-old cold wine had already formed a sharp contrast with the thousand-year-old cold wine that had been used to help people advance on Yunmeng Mountain. Ten years ago, all you wanted was this Qingqiu Jueying lamp. Ten years later, I will give it to you and it will be up to you whether you want it or not. Blood debts can only be repaid with blood. So what if she needs to sacrifice? When Yunmeng Mountain is extinguished, the lamp remains on. When the Shen family is alive, the lamp is extinguished. What she did in Qiu Yihan was just to give everything back to his Shen family. The only blame is that he shouldn't have provoked her ten years ago, and he shouldn't have let the Qiu family end up like this. What did Shen Ke get in exchange for her trust in him? The Qiu family is extinct, and there will be no blood from now on? A fire extinguished the first half of her life, and the only one who survived was Qiu Yihan with revenge. / "My Yanqing's disciple, what's wrong with being a little pampered?" After all, he wanted to protect her. Perhaps the fate between them started from that apprenticeship ceremony. From then on, the blue spring went up to the yellow spring, and the master and the disciples were of the same mind and never gave up on each other. Therefore, Yanqing would always appear in Qiu Yihan's life-or-death moments, and he would always protect her! He thought, "Even if she kills someone to take revenge, and the fire and blood flow like a river, he will protect her after all." Even though every time she hurt herself, Yanqing always said that he would not save her next time. But when? Didn't he go? Master × Disciple! I'm dead set! The author must write an emotional line! Such a good master must be left to our Qiuqiu! Otherwise, it will definitely be difficult to calm down! Although I have to focus on my career, I can also talk about sweet love in my spare time! Mainly, we love to watch hehe. / Not all decent people are good people. They are just for the so-called "right path", and each of them wants Qiu Yihan to die. Thanks to the master, he gave his disciple enough treasures, otherwise they would not be enough for her to make. Generally speaking, Qiu Yihan is not an ordinary heroine, she is very strong and a completely independent strong woman. She manages everything, buying people who treat her well and useful people to do things for her. Qiuqiu, who is so focused on her career, is really charming. The writing is excellent, the author just follows his own ideas when writing! It's been a long time since I've updated. Please update me! / Perhaps her former identity was too shining and nourishing, and fate dictated that the fairy descended to earth to experience calamity. Only years of pampering can produce such a temperament, as if you were born to be aloof and have never fallen into the dust. Qiuqiu always has a temperament that makes people want to get close to her. If others treat her well, she will treat them better. Rusu is an upright person, completely different from her master, and is a person worthy of her close friendship. Qi Yuheng and Liu Yanjue will be her right-hand assistants later. Shen Ke, Yunmeng Mountain, is just the first step. Over the years, she has also been secretly cultivating power. This time she changed her name and appearance just to better penetrate the inside and prevent the Shen family from noticing. Wait... The moment she wakes up, everyone who owes her will have to pay the price! 1331 Words That's all
✨I have never changed, I just buried my former self with my own hands...🌈
✨I completely thought that I would never be able to rely on you ✨There is only one person in the world ✨Everyone in front of the courtyard is indifferent ✨I don't know the hatred in her heart ✨It's not easy to survive in this world ✨To avenge the family ✨I would like to live a humble life ✨The death is not yet over, Jin Hantan enters ✨So calm and thoughtful 🍃/A blood feud turned a willful girl who was held in the palm of her hand since she was a child into a girl who was indifferent to everything. What happened during this period? The whole world thought she was dead, but she survived in the end. When the Qiu family was exterminated, it seemed that she was the only one in the world. At that moment, she seemed to understand something, and she gradually became indifferent and ignored everything. This may be because she wanted to hide the pain in her heart. This time she would get back everything she owed her, but after all, the girl's heart was as pure as white paper. No one who hurt her would be let go, everyone who helped her would remember it, and no one who loved her would be let down. A disaster forced her to understand so much... 🍃/The girl took the letter and said, "I agreed to the Li family's request." Everything seemed so natural, so calm and unconcerned, but there was so much pain hidden behind the seeming indifference. The hatred of genocide was irreconcilable. This time she would take back what she had suffered and what she owed... One by one. These should not belong to them, they all belong to Qiu Yihan! The whole world thought she was dead, and the whole world didn't care about her. After all, she was a homeless person whose clan had been wiped out. But who would have thought that there was still Yanqing in the world, and who would have thought that there would be someone who could be so kind to her? But in this world, she had to put her life aside. Even if he hides it and buries it deeply, "It doesn't matter if my Yanqing's disciple is more pampered!" Between the lines, the words are true, but in order to get revenge in this life, she can no longer indulge in it, and must start with indifference. The unruly and willful Qiu Yihan deep in her heart seems to be drifting away. 🍃/When I went down the mountain, I met a young man named Yun Luo. It seemed that I saw her in the past. She was proud and willful and didn't take anyone seriously. But after all, that one only existed in the past. There was a dull pain in her chest. 🍃/The barrier was broken, and she felt the first pain. She couldn't help but think of the fire that night. Everything she had that night was gone and lost... She would definitely live well! And live better than everyone else! 🍃/The meridians are completely destroyed and fall into the cold pool. Who would have thought that the most dignified person in the world of cultivation would beg for help because his disciple couldn't get up early! "A person like you is not worthy of being bullied by me", knowing that it would be spread by others, but she didn't care from then on, she didn't care about these, she didn't care about anything... Autumn blood grass, a grass watered with the blood of the Qiu family, disappeared with the demise of the Qiu family. However, I still felt a vague pain in my heart when I mentioned it. The superficial injury could be healed, but the inner injury could not be healed after all. The world owed her Qiu Yihan. 🍃/Inexplicable disappearance, who knew she would appear completely fine, but in the end she fell into Yan Qing's cold arms. After all, this master was somewhat special to her. The thousand-year-old lava thorn that penetrated her heart, the muscles and veins all over her body were destroyed, everything was just like her entire Qiu family... 🍃/When they met again, Shen Ke was shocked but didn't seem surprised. Shen Ke sneered at her, and she said, "Everything was ruined by you." Ten years ago, autumn lanterns. Ten years later, send the lamp. Shen Ke, I will definitely make you regret it! 🍃/After falling into the mortal world, when he mentioned his family again, he said calmly, "It's just a small, downtrodden family, and she's the only one left." Thousands of thoughts could not withstand the hatred accumulated in her heart. 🍃/After a few sips of wine, she said, "How long can I live? Now I'm just lingering." He picked her up and smelled a smell of blood. It turned out to be a murderer. If he can't find out, forget it... ... 🍀A fire destroyed a girl. The willful, proud and indulgent Qiu Yihan seems to have become a thing of the past. Now she is indifferent and indifferent to everything, not for anything else but revenge! She will personally collect everything she owes! The thousand-year-old lava thorn that penetrated her heart, the meridians all over her body were destroyed, and her family was wiped out overnight... All of this made Qiu Yihan have to change her former self into the past and bury it deeply. Now she is only indifferent. For revenge, she wants to live! My brother said that she should live and live well. But she will never survive in this world! She must take revenge! You must live better than everyone else! 🦄🦄🎉General: The author's writing style is good, the wording of the article is appropriate, there are not too many typos, the article depicts vivid images, is meticulous, and has a strong sense of substitution. The article is to the point, the ideas are novel, and the suspense is high, making people want to stop and get deeply involved. The plot of the article is natural, the storyline is vivid, the relationship between the characters is clear, and the writing is beautiful. It is a very well-written article that I have ever seen! Worth chasing after! 🌈
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The large-scale novel Shu Zi and Jian Qi are super attractive. The beginning also leaves enough suspense to attract attention. Let's catch the bug first. In some places in the article, I feel that the description is a bit too strong. For example, in the first chapter, "The pale gold eyes slowly painted an iceberg, and the corners of her bloody lips... It seemed like nothing had happened." It would be better if it were replaced with: there was a little coldness in the pale gold eyes. The corners of her lips were slightly raised, and the smile flashed away, as if nothing had happened." Some sentences really don't need much modification. It's better to use some words to encapsulate the entire meaning and briefly describe it. This will be better and not appear so complicated. Of course, the opening description of the characters is also very important. I thought Xiaoqiu and Xiao Shen were in a relationship, falling in love and killing each other. But... It's true that I'm still too young. Another point is that it is actually not good to use dividing lines to switch between plots. It is better to express it in words. I think it is better to change this habit. It is best to switch when using person narration. Don't always use one person, which is uncomfortable and rushed, which brings some negative effects to the article but does not add much beauty. (I know what you want to express is that kind of effect, but it seems to be counterproductive.) I used to describe it this way, and then I discovered this problem after reading other people's articles. Now I am not good enough to switch freely, but I always feel that it is much worse in terms of description. (In the past, characters could not be described, just like painting, which could only be copied, not created.) Writing skills are slowly accumulated bit by bit, and this cannot be rushed, just like the practice in writing. There is genius, but genius also needs to be polished, right? Seeing that there is a place in the article that is directly derived from a psychological description, I suggest that it is better to divide it into paragraphs, and do not divide it into too few parts. Also, I found that the heroine is a little cute👀, when she is with senior sister Rusu. Is that Senior Sister Rusu the CP of another peak disciple? That man is very nice😣. He is worried that his senior sister will be taken advantage of and has been silently cleaning up her social circle. I have been wondering who the male protagonist of our Xiaoqiu is? Mr. Shen No. 1 Was locked up in a dark room within a few minutes of his appearance. Master No. 2 Was very warm, but um... Something didn't seem right there. The blood-sucking place made me think😗... I was excited for a long time🤗. As for the boy No. 3, I feel that this boy may fall in love with the heroine in the future, or he may be very kind to the heroine and repay his kindness. In terms of setting up the plot, it is really unexpected that the master did not join the Xuan Sect! I thought he wanted to cede territory and pay compensation to save the heroine! I thought glass shards were going to be scattered, so I was nervous for a long time😕. I don't know if the heroine can still practice in the future, and I look forward to her return😷. Now I understand what the big title of the book means. When I first saw it, I thought it was the Qiu family that had lost that point. Who knows, something could happen~🤡 This point has to mention the Jueying Lantern. When I mentioned the Jueying Lantern, I suddenly wanted to see the prototype. If the lamp comes out again in the future, I can give a close-up! Ah! I want to watch it, and I'm really looking forward to it, because in the video I saw so many young ladies wearing Hanfu and holding lanterns that look so beautiful! 😈 Actually, I quite like Number Two paired with the female lead, mainly because I still don't understand who the male lead is... The chances of Number Two being matched up are very high. After entering the main plot, I felt very happy, and the plot was also very attractive! Looking forward to the next chapter~ Come on ^0^~!
/ rustling like autumn and knowing the chill /
Hello, this is Tangli. The fire is raging and the bones are piled up. Qiu Yihan was originally the apple of the Qiu family's eye, and the one her brother Qiu Yao cherished and loved. However, due to a conspiracy, everything she cherished was destroyed by her trust in her fiancé Shen Ke. Just when everyone thought she was dead, she miraculously survived, although her meridians were completely destroyed and she was no different from a disabled person. It's a pity that such willful and proud Qiu Yihan is gone forever. She shouldered the mission of avenging the Qiu family, and that scene of blood and blood appeared many times late at night, becoming a nightmare that made it difficult for her to sleep, but it also supported her firm belief to continue moving forward. Fortunately, she has Yanqing, a master who loves her, protects her and lets her do whatever she wants, and pulls her from endless darkness to light. Yanqing didn't allow anyone to say anything bad about her or hurt her, giving her an upright sense of security and preference. Maybe Yanqing is the strong support for Yihan to survive. So she joined forces with Li Shujun of the Li family to give Shen Ke a wonderful surprise at his wedding banquet. The last ray of light in the sky reflected the fire all over the mountains and plains. Except for Shen Ke who escaped by chance, no one who came to the wedding banquet survived. The Shen family that caused her to be wiped out was also beyond redemption. With her identity almost exposed, Qiu Yihan had to change her name, change her appearance, use a new identity to embark on the road of revenge, and had to leave Yanqing temporarily. This time she was goal-oriented and determined. She knew exactly what she wanted and how to do it. Maybe she was facing the pain of surviving alone when all her relatives died, maybe her heart ached a little every time she thought of the beautiful memories with Qiu Yao Qiuyuan, but she was not afraid or flinched, after all, there were still many beautiful people in the world waiting for her-- Ru Su is the top disciple of the Xuan Sect, and can also be said to be Yi Han's senior sister. She is sincere and kind to others, and takes care of Yihan like the paper man in every possible way. She treats her as her own sister and has her own principles and principles in her heart. While embarking on the road to enter the Xuan Sect under the pseudonym Yaoyu, Yihan also met Liu Yanjue and Qi Yuheng. Although he didn't know how much of this was true and how of use, he still hoped that Yihan could turn danger into safety and do what he wanted. The author's writing style is very immersive, and it can be seen that a certain amount of effort has been spent on setting up the background of cultivation. The environment and character descriptions are deeply rooted in people's hearts, and the characters are vivid and vivid on the page. I personally think that the plot progress is a bit delayed, and the male protagonist's appearance rate is not enough. Maybe the process can be speeded up a little. After all, readers are definitely looking forward to the follow-up plot.
A huge fire destroyed a very prestigious family - the Qiu family, which was famous for its Qingqiu Jueying lantern. Thousands of names were turned into ashes overnight, so prosperity no longer existed. And what is left is the only survivor Qiu Yihan, the regret of autumn or the regret left behind, when all the proud sons of the emperor fall into the mortal world. She lost all her relatives, her confidence, pride and all her happiness. In fact, in a sense, living is also painful. We have to face the fact that all our relatives have disappeared, and we have to live tenaciously at least until the day when the great revenge is avenged. That night, when she was seriously injured, she understood that even with absolute strength, she could not protect herself from the insidious villain. Her muscles and veins were completely destroyed, and for a cultivator, life would be better than death, but she had to take revenge, and take revenge with this ruined body. Fortunately, Yan Qing, the number one person in the world of cultivation, became her master, saving her from wandering around and keeping her safe. So people are amazed as to why such a genius is like this. Maybe they are the only ones who understand each other well. Yanqing repaired her serious injuries and dragged her back from hell. From a crumbling paper person to a person who can live a normal life, she is still a useless person, but only Yanqing regards her as a treasure and does not give up on her. When everyone is challenging her, she is not willing to fight. In the past, she might have been enthusiastic, but now she seems to have forged a will in the powerlessness of the fire. Her lifelong obsession is revenge, not her own honor. And the master's love allowed her to escape unscathed, and she needed some tricks to intimidate these people. The person who caused everything, Shen Ke, was a ruthless man. He was her betrothed and the sworn enemy she wanted to kill in her life. If it weren't for his selfishness, they would get married for the sake of Qingqiu Jueying Lantern. Now that the king has returned, it is also a battle of fire and Shen Ke's wedding partner. He treats Shen Ke in his own way. But as luck would have it, he managed to escape. It's just that her identity can no longer be shown openly. This time she needs to keep it secret. She re-entered the Xuan sect under the disguise of Yao Yu, and got acquainted with Liu Yanjue and others, but more importantly, everyone was dissatisfied with her for being useless and always taking the back door, which made her appear to be too bright. However, when those who thought they were superior could not defeat her, the stronger people couldn't help but have doubts. The inheritance from ancestors was clearly pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. They battled wits and courage, and fought several times, but in the end they could only suffer the loss. They couldn't help but be afraid of this seemingly useless girl. She is the best at strategy. She can predict other people's behavior. Because she takes revenge step by step and kills anyone who comes to her door. It's just that her behavior is too abnormal and some people are still suspicious... I don't know how she can defuse the situation and save the day.
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That's the best autumn chill!
"The cold autumn wind makes me feel discouraged." _ Her name is Qiu Yihan, and she is the most beloved little princess of the Qiu clan. She was born with a gift of intelligence, but she grew up under the pampering of her father and brother! But fate likes to play tricks on people. On that day, wildfires broke out, and the Qiu family, which was at the peak of cultivation and had top repair resources, was wiped out. _ And Qiu Yihan, who was once the proud son of heaven, has become the only bloodline left of the Qiu clan. Her meridians all over her body were completely disabled, and she was basically no more than a disabled person. The huge gap and the blood feud she carried on her body made it impossible for her to return to the pampered and wanton little princess she was before. _ Who would have guessed that the culprit who caused her to fall into hell and reach this stage was none other than Shen Ke, a direct descendant of the Shen family who was engaged to Qiu Yihan. His wolfish ambition was not seen through at first, and Qiu Yihan hated having such a wolf and leopard enter his house. The living ones are the ones who suffer the most. Whenever she thinks of her past and those relatives, her heart breaks. The memories of Qiu Yuan, Qiu Yao and those people are engraved in Qiu Yihan's bone marrow. Even if she falls into Hell forever, she will still make Shen Ke and the Shen family suffer eternal disaster and pay for their debt with blood. _ In those endless darkness, there was someone who understood her pain and pulled her forward. He would make an exception to accept a disciple for her, and would use all the mysterious treasures and precious elixirs on her. Try every means to make her happy because of her sorrow, and wish her to achieve her wish. He would also be helpless and angry, because his disciple always refused to let him worry, and it was even more distressing to see her already riddled body repeatedly injured. But what else can I do, just pamper her. _ He is the best master - Yanqing. His apprentice can be pampered and willful His disciples can act boldly He will always be her solid support A friend lamented that he had changed, and he knew that he had indeed changed. From the moment he fell in love with that woman, he would never be the same again. He would become stronger just to protect her better. In the name of the master, I will protect her from worries throughout her life. _ Qiu Yihan's road to revenge was difficult. When her identity was exposed, she had to change her name and go to a strange place. Starting from being an outer disciple step by step, I thought it was just to temporarily avoid enemies, and I didn't care about other people. But after all, she still has a soft heart, and she does everything based on her heart. Isn't it also based on her kindness? Along the way, there were Yanqing, Senior Sister, Qi Yuheng, Liu Yan... Slowly her closed heart was opened, and her life gained other brightness and color besides revenge. _ Personally, I prefer watching emotional dramas, so please try to update more.
She is cold in autumn, born noble and unwilling to be mediocre.
Everyone in the world called her a "waste", but they never thought about the rough fate and injustice this woman had to bear. She is the most noble little princess of the Qiu family, willful and domineering. The Qiu family is the number one family in the world of cultivating immortals. They are the Nine Heavens God Clan and bear the bloodline of Kunpeng. With such a noble status, how could he be willing to become a so-called "trash"? / The whole world thought she was dead. But she decided to survive, and she lived better than anyone else! Qiu Yihan carries the indomitable spirit of the Qiu family in her bones. Have you ever heard of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger? The world can deceive her, but they just want to take her most precious thing, no! / A bloody feud that wiped out a family triggered a conspiracy that shocked the world of immortality. Ten years have been enough for them to forget the existence of the Qiu family. All the major families want to sit on the top throne. Isn't it ridiculous? Shen family, Shen Ke, these two words are engraved in her bones. The memory of hatred is blood red, and the heart-gnawing pain is the hatred that Qiu Yihan will never forget in her life. / At the wedding banquet, the five-hundred-year-old cold wine had already formed a sharp contrast with the thousand-year-old cold wine that had been used to help people advance on Yunmeng Mountain. Ten years ago, all you wanted was this Qingqiu Jueying lamp. Ten years later, I will give it to you and it will be up to you whether you want it or not. Blood debts can only be repaid with blood. So what if she needs to sacrifice? When Yunmeng Mountain is extinguished, the lamp remains on. When the Shen family is alive, the lamp is extinguished. What she did in Qiu Yihan was just to give everything back to his Shen family. The only blame is that he shouldn't have provoked her ten years ago, and he shouldn't have let the Qiu family end up like this. What did Shen Ke get in exchange for her trust in him? The Qiu family is extinct, and there will be no blood from now on? A fire extinguished the first half of her life, and the only one who survived was Qiu Yihan with revenge. / "My Yanqing's disciple, what's wrong with being a little pampered?" After all, he wanted to protect her. Perhaps the fate between them started from that apprenticeship ceremony. From then on, the blue spring went up to the yellow spring, and the master and the disciples were of the same mind and never gave up on each other. Therefore, Yanqing would always appear in Qiu Yihan's life-or-death moments, and he would always protect her! He thought, "Even if she kills someone to take revenge, and the fire and blood flow like a river, he will protect her after all." Even though every time she hurt herself, Yanqing always said that he would not save her next time. But when? Didn't he go? Master × Disciple! I'm dead set! The author must write an emotional line! Such a good master must be left to our Qiuqiu! Otherwise, it will definitely be difficult to calm down! Although I have to focus on my career, I can also talk about sweet love in my spare time! Mainly, we love to watch hehe. / Not all decent people are good people. They are just for the so-called "right path", and each of them wants Qiu Yihan to die. Thanks to the master, he gave his disciple enough treasures, otherwise they would not be enough for her to make. Generally speaking, Qiu Yihan is not an ordinary heroine, she is very strong and a completely independent strong woman. She manages everything, buying people who treat her well and useful people to do things for her. Qiuqiu, who is so focused on her career, is really charming. The writing is excellent, the author just follows his own ideas when writing! It's been a long time since I've updated. Please update me! / Perhaps her former identity was too shining and nourishing, and fate dictated that the fairy descended to earth to experience calamity. Only years of pampering can produce such a temperament, as if you were born to be aloof and have never fallen into the dust. Qiuqiu always has a temperament that makes people want to get close to her. If others treat her well, she will treat them better. Rusu is an upright person, completely different from her master, and is a person worthy of her close friendship. Qi Yuheng and Liu Yanjue will be her right-hand assistants later. Shen Ke, Yunmeng Mountain, is just the first step. Over the years, she has also been secretly cultivating power. This time she changed her name and appearance just to better penetrate the inside and prevent the Shen family from noticing. Wait... The moment she wakes up, everyone who owes her will have to pay the price! 1331 Words That's all
✨I have never changed, I just buried my former self with my own hands...🌈
✨I completely thought that I would never be able to rely on you ✨There is only one person in the world ✨Everyone in front of the courtyard is indifferent ✨I don't know the hatred in her heart ✨It's not easy to survive in this world ✨To avenge the family ✨I would like to live a humble life ✨The death is not yet over, Jin Hantan enters ✨So calm and thoughtful 🍃/A blood feud turned a willful girl who was held in the palm of her hand since she was a child into a girl who was indifferent to everything. What happened during this period? The whole world thought she was dead, but she survived in the end. When the Qiu family was exterminated, it seemed that she was the only one in the world. At that moment, she seemed to understand something, and she gradually became indifferent and ignored everything. This may be because she wanted to hide the pain in her heart. This time she would get back everything she owed her, but after all, the girl's heart was as pure as white paper. No one who hurt her would be let go, everyone who helped her would remember it, and no one who loved her would be let down. A disaster forced her to understand so much... 🍃/The girl took the letter and said, "I agreed to the Li family's request." Everything seemed so natural, so calm and unconcerned, but there was so much pain hidden behind the seeming indifference. The hatred of genocide was irreconcilable. This time she would take back what she had suffered and what she owed... One by one. These should not belong to them, they all belong to Qiu Yihan! The whole world thought she was dead, and the whole world didn't care about her. After all, she was a homeless person whose clan had been wiped out. But who would have thought that there was still Yanqing in the world, and who would have thought that there would be someone who could be so kind to her? But in this world, she had to put her life aside. Even if he hides it and buries it deeply, "It doesn't matter if my Yanqing's disciple is more pampered!" Between the lines, the words are true, but in order to get revenge in this life, she can no longer indulge in it, and must start with indifference. The unruly and willful Qiu Yihan deep in her heart seems to be drifting away. 🍃/When I went down the mountain, I met a young man named Yun Luo. It seemed that I saw her in the past. She was proud and willful and didn't take anyone seriously. But after all, that one only existed in the past. There was a dull pain in her chest. 🍃/The barrier was broken, and she felt the first pain. She couldn't help but think of the fire that night. Everything she had that night was gone and lost... She would definitely live well! And live better than everyone else! 🍃/The meridians are completely destroyed and fall into the cold pool. Who would have thought that the most dignified person in the world of cultivation would beg for help because his disciple couldn't get up early! "A person like you is not worthy of being bullied by me", knowing that it would be spread by others, but she didn't care from then on, she didn't care about these, she didn't care about anything... Autumn blood grass, a grass watered with the blood of the Qiu family, disappeared with the demise of the Qiu family. However, I still felt a vague pain in my heart when I mentioned it. The superficial injury could be healed, but the inner injury could not be healed after all. The world owed her Qiu Yihan. 🍃/Inexplicable disappearance, who knew she would appear completely fine, but in the end she fell into Yan Qing's cold arms. After all, this master was somewhat special to her. The thousand-year-old lava thorn that penetrated her heart, the muscles and veins all over her body were destroyed, everything was just like her entire Qiu family... 🍃/When they met again, Shen Ke was shocked but didn't seem surprised. Shen Ke sneered at her, and she said, "Everything was ruined by you." Ten years ago, autumn lanterns. Ten years later, send the lamp. Shen Ke, I will definitely make you regret it! 🍃/After falling into the mortal world, when he mentioned his family again, he said calmly, "It's just a small, downtrodden family, and she's the only one left." Thousands of thoughts could not withstand the hatred accumulated in her heart. 🍃/After a few sips of wine, she said, "How long can I live? Now I'm just lingering." He picked her up and smelled a smell of blood. It turned out to be a murderer. If he can't find out, forget it... ... 🍀A fire destroyed a girl. The willful, proud and indulgent Qiu Yihan seems to have become a thing of the past. Now she is indifferent and indifferent to everything, not for anything else but revenge! She will personally collect everything she owes! The thousand-year-old lava thorn that penetrated her heart, the meridians all over her body were destroyed, and her family was wiped out overnight... All of this made Qiu Yihan have to change her former self into the past and bury it deeply. Now she is only indifferent. For revenge, she wants to live! My brother said that she should live and live well. But she will never survive in this world! She must take revenge! You must live better than everyone else! 🦄🦄🎉General: The author's writing style is good, the wording of the article is appropriate, there are not too many typos, the article depicts vivid images, is meticulous, and has a strong sense of substitution. The article is to the point, the ideas are novel, and the suspense is high, making people want to stop and get deeply involved. The plot of the article is natural, the storyline is vivid, the relationship between the characters is clear, and the writing is beautiful. It is a very well-written article that I have ever seen! Worth chasing after! 🌈
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The large-scale novel Shu Zi and Jian Qi are super attractive. The beginning also leaves enough suspense to attract attention. Let's catch the bug first. In some places in the article, I feel that the description is a bit too strong. For example, in the first chapter, "The pale gold eyes slowly painted an iceberg, and the corners of her bloody lips... It seemed like nothing had happened." It would be better if it were replaced with: there was a little coldness in the pale gold eyes. The corners of her lips were slightly raised, and the smile flashed away, as if nothing had happened." Some sentences really don't need much modification. It's better to use some words to encapsulate the entire meaning and briefly describe it. This will be better and not appear so complicated. Of course, the opening description of the characters is also very important. I thought Xiaoqiu and Xiao Shen were in a relationship, falling in love and killing each other. But... It's true that I'm still too young. Another point is that it is actually not good to use dividing lines to switch between plots. It is better to express it in words. I think it is better to change this habit. It is best to switch when using person narration. Don't always use one person, which is uncomfortable and rushed, which brings some negative effects to the article but does not add much beauty. (I know what you want to express is that kind of effect, but it seems to be counterproductive.) I used to describe it this way, and then I discovered this problem after reading other people's articles. Now I am not good enough to switch freely, but I always feel that it is much worse in terms of description. (In the past, characters could not be described, just like painting, which could only be copied, not created.) Writing skills are slowly accumulated bit by bit, and this cannot be rushed, just like the practice in writing. There is genius, but genius also needs to be polished, right? Seeing that there is a place in the article that is directly derived from a psychological description, I suggest that it is better to divide it into paragraphs, and do not divide it into too few parts. Also, I found that the heroine is a little cute👀, when she is with senior sister Rusu. Is that Senior Sister Rusu the CP of another peak disciple? That man is very nice😣. He is worried that his senior sister will be taken advantage of and has been silently cleaning up her social circle. I have been wondering who the male protagonist of our Xiaoqiu is? Mr. Shen No. 1 Was locked up in a dark room within a few minutes of his appearance. Master No. 2 Was very warm, but um... Something didn't seem right there. The blood-sucking place made me think😗... I was excited for a long time🤗. As for the boy No. 3, I feel that this boy may fall in love with the heroine in the future, or he may be very kind to the heroine and repay his kindness. In terms of setting up the plot, it is really unexpected that the master did not join the Xuan Sect! I thought he wanted to cede territory and pay compensation to save the heroine! I thought glass shards were going to be scattered, so I was nervous for a long time😕. I don't know if the heroine can still practice in the future, and I look forward to her return😷. Now I understand what the big title of the book means. When I first saw it, I thought it was the Qiu family that had lost that point. Who knows, something could happen~🤡 This point has to mention the Jueying Lantern. When I mentioned the Jueying Lantern, I suddenly wanted to see the prototype. If the lamp comes out again in the future, I can give a close-up! Ah! I want to watch it, and I'm really looking forward to it, because in the video I saw so many young ladies wearing Hanfu and holding lanterns that look so beautiful! 😈 Actually, I quite like Number Two paired with the female lead, mainly because I still don't understand who the male lead is... The chances of Number Two being matched up are very high. After entering the main plot, I felt very happy, and the plot was also very attractive! Looking forward to the next chapter~ Come on ^0^~!
/ rustling like autumn and knowing the chill /
Hello, this is Tangli. The fire is raging and the bones are piled up. Qiu Yihan was originally the apple of the Qiu family's eye, and the one her brother Qiu Yao cherished and loved. However, due to a conspiracy, everything she cherished was destroyed by her trust in her fiancé Shen Ke. Just when everyone thought she was dead, she miraculously survived, although her meridians were completely destroyed and she was no different from a disabled person. It's a pity that such willful and proud Qiu Yihan is gone forever. She shouldered the mission of avenging the Qiu family, and that scene of blood and blood appeared many times late at night, becoming a nightmare that made it difficult for her to sleep, but it also supported her firm belief to continue moving forward. Fortunately, she has Yanqing, a master who loves her, protects her and lets her do whatever she wants, and pulls her from endless darkness to light. Yanqing didn't allow anyone to say anything bad about her or hurt her, giving her an upright sense of security and preference. Maybe Yanqing is the strong support for Yihan to survive. So she joined forces with Li Shujun of the Li family to give Shen Ke a wonderful surprise at his wedding banquet. The last ray of light in the sky reflected the fire all over the mountains and plains. Except for Shen Ke who escaped by chance, no one who came to the wedding banquet survived. The Shen family that caused her to be wiped out was also beyond redemption. With her identity almost exposed, Qiu Yihan had to change her name, change her appearance, use a new identity to embark on the road of revenge, and had to leave Yanqing temporarily. This time she was goal-oriented and determined. She knew exactly what she wanted and how to do it. Maybe she was facing the pain of surviving alone when all her relatives died, maybe her heart ached a little every time she thought of the beautiful memories with Qiu Yao Qiuyuan, but she was not afraid or flinched, after all, there were still many beautiful people in the world waiting for her-- Ru Su is the top disciple of the Xuan Sect, and can also be said to be Yi Han's senior sister. She is sincere and kind to others, and takes care of Yihan like the paper man in every possible way. She treats her as her own sister and has her own principles and principles in her heart. While embarking on the road to enter the Xuan Sect under the pseudonym Yaoyu, Yihan also met Liu Yanjue and Qi Yuheng. Although he didn't know how much of this was true and how of use, he still hoped that Yihan could turn danger into safety and do what he wanted. The author's writing style is very immersive, and it can be seen that a certain amount of effort has been spent on setting up the background of cultivation. The environment and character descriptions are deeply rooted in people's hearts, and the characters are vivid and vivid on the page. I personally think that the plot progress is a bit delayed, and the male protagonist's appearance rate is not enough. Maybe the process can be speeded up a little. After all, readers are definitely looking forward to the follow-up plot.
A huge fire destroyed a very prestigious family - the Qiu family, which was famous for its Qingqiu Jueying lantern. Thousands of names were turned into ashes overnight, so prosperity no longer existed. And what is left is the only survivor Qiu Yihan, the regret of autumn or the regret left behind, when all the proud sons of the emperor fall into the mortal world. She lost all her relatives, her confidence, pride and all her happiness. In fact, in a sense, living is also painful. We have to face the fact that all our relatives have disappeared, and we have to live tenaciously at least until the day when the great revenge is avenged. That night, when she was seriously injured, she understood that even with absolute strength, she could not protect herself from the insidious villain. Her muscles and veins were completely destroyed, and for a cultivator, life would be better than death, but she had to take revenge, and take revenge with this ruined body. Fortunately, Yan Qing, the number one person in the world of cultivation, became her master, saving her from wandering around and keeping her safe. So people are amazed as to why such a genius is like this. Maybe they are the only ones who understand each other well. Yanqing repaired her serious injuries and dragged her back from hell. From a crumbling paper person to a person who can live a normal life, she is still a useless person, but only Yanqing regards her as a treasure and does not give up on her. When everyone is challenging her, she is not willing to fight. In the past, she might have been enthusiastic, but now she seems to have forged a will in the powerlessness of the fire. Her lifelong obsession is revenge, not her own honor. And the master's love allowed her to escape unscathed, and she needed some tricks to intimidate these people. The person who caused everything, Shen Ke, was a ruthless man. He was her betrothed and the sworn enemy she wanted to kill in her life. If it weren't for his selfishness, they would get married for the sake of Qingqiu Jueying Lantern. Now that the king has returned, it is also a battle of fire and Shen Ke's wedding partner. He treats Shen Ke in his own way. But as luck would have it, he managed to escape. It's just that her identity can no longer be shown openly. This time she needs to keep it secret. She re-entered the Xuan sect under the disguise of Yao Yu, and got acquainted with Liu Yanjue and others, but more importantly, everyone was dissatisfied with her for being useless and always taking the back door, which made her appear to be too bright. However, when those who thought they were superior could not defeat her, the stronger people couldn't help but have doubts. The inheritance from ancestors was clearly pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. They battled wits and courage, and fought several times, but in the end they could only suffer the loss. They couldn't help but be afraid of this seemingly useless girl. She is the best at strategy. She can predict other people's behavior. Because she takes revenge step by step and kills anyone who comes to her door. It's just that her behavior is too abnormal and some people are still suspicious... I don't know how she can defuse the situation and save the day.

