A Mortal's Story of Immortality: God's Hand Gu Seeks Immortality
About This Novel
Lin Fan, a time traveler, became Dr. Mo's "experiment". In the desperate place of Shenshou Valley, with his foresight of the plot, he started a thrilling intellectual game with Dr. Mo and Yu Zitong, snatching food from the tiger's mouth and seeking immortality.
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Official(4)Scraped 25d ago
Just looking at the table of contents, I have no desire to read at all. Chapter 50 or 60 is still in Qixuanmen.
No, buddy, your progress is too slow! It's so slow that no one will read it. The original work is much faster than yours. Why don't you cut it and open a new one? It's impossible to finish writing at this pace anyway, so it's better to end it as soon as possible. A new beginning. As long as the subject matter is novel, follows the original work, and the price is reasonable, someone will definitely watch it. Anime is very popular now, so why not take advantage of it? !
The writing is good, but the plot is too childish. In other words, if you copy the original text, you won't be able to understand it. It's very different from the original text. Logically speaking, with this writing style, this plot would not have been written. Was it written by AI?
A good fanfic about cultivating immortals, but you turned it into a conspiracy.
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Official(4)Scraped 25d ago
Just looking at the table of contents, I have no desire to read at all. Chapter 50 or 60 is still in Qixuanmen.
No, buddy, your progress is too slow! It's so slow that no one will read it. The original work is much faster than yours. Why don't you cut it and open a new one? It's impossible to finish writing at this pace anyway, so it's better to end it as soon as possible. A new beginning. As long as the subject matter is novel, follows the original work, and the price is reasonable, someone will definitely watch it. Anime is very popular now, so why not take advantage of it? !
The writing is good, but the plot is too childish. In other words, if you copy the original text, you won't be able to understand it. It's very different from the original text. Logically speaking, with this writing style, this plot would not have been written. Was it written by AI?
A good fanfic about cultivating immortals, but you turned it into a conspiracy.
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