But, for Your Sake

But, for Your Sake

by Mo Zhuo

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About This Novel

Before I met you again, I never thought about the future; after meeting you, I began to be afraid that I would lose you.

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风眠
风眠93mo ago

In the end, when Nan Xi was about to die, what she said was not quite right. Anyone who is dying speaks so neatly, you should add ellipsis because the speech needs to be choppy.

风眠
风眠96mo ago

I feel like the wording is a bit inappropriate. Come on, overall it's pretty good.

风眠
风眠96mo ago

Why is it "Bauhinia"? This is too ridiculous. Begonia is better than this.

困觉
困觉大王96mo ago

Very nice, come on

QI
Qian Xiyao96mo ago

Support! Come on! ! ! ^_^

风眠
风眠96mo ago

In your sentence, "throwing a silver needle" is better changed to throwing a few silver needles, and "goodbye, we will be enemies" is not as good as "seeing each other again is like strangers", keep up the good work

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