
But, for Your Sake
by Mo Zhuo
About This Novel
Before I met you again, I never thought about the future; after meeting you, I began to be afraid that I would lose you.
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 6d ago
In the end, when Nan Xi was about to die, what she said was not quite right. Anyone who is dying speaks so neatly, you should add ellipsis because the speech needs to be choppy.
I feel like the wording is a bit inappropriate. Come on, overall it's pretty good.
Why is it "Bauhinia"? This is too ridiculous. Begonia is better than this.
Very nice, come on
Support! Come on! ! ! ^_^
In your sentence, "throwing a silver needle" is better changed to throwing a few silver needles, and "goodbye, we will be enemies" is not as good as "seeing each other again is like strangers", keep up the good work
Rating
Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 6d ago
In the end, when Nan Xi was about to die, what she said was not quite right. Anyone who is dying speaks so neatly, you should add ellipsis because the speech needs to be choppy.
I feel like the wording is a bit inappropriate. Come on, overall it's pretty good.
Why is it "Bauhinia"? This is too ridiculous. Begonia is better than this.
Very nice, come on
Support! Come on! ! ! ^_^
In your sentence, "throwing a silver needle" is better changed to throwing a few silver needles, and "goodbye, we will be enemies" is not as good as "seeing each other again is like strangers", keep up the good work
