
Starting from the First Brother Deyun to Dominate
About This Novel
When he woke up, Su Ming found that he had traveled to a parallel city and became the lonely former brother of Deyun Society. Fortunately, he awakened the cross talk system and came back with the song "Exploring Qingshui River", which caused a huge sensation and thus began his road to cross talk dominance! Ps: The introduction is weak, please read the text. Ps2: Su Yunming: I see you are dry and lazy, you don't know how to vote at all, I'm going to ask you! Ps: Book Club-Deyun Headquarters: 829718061, let's drive together! Ps3: New book released "From Jinyiwei to Martial Arts Supreme", please support me.
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I hope the author can see me
There are too many typos, and if you want to use this joke, just write it all, don't use a little bit, it's not a cross talk at all (it's just a personal statement, don't criticize if you don't like it)
Not bad
I feel like I changed Brother Braid's name to Che Su Yunming. The content is almost the same as Brother Braid's. I don't think it's necessary.
Please update
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It feels like it's not a cross talk at all.
Although it is a novel, can you roughly respect the actual situation?
Not to mention anything else, just seal the few chapters and seal them. Lao Guo himself said at the front that they would be sealed today. . . Can you go and watch Deyun Club's boxed performance? From the beginning, all the members will be on stage together. Also, the joke uttered by the protagonist when sealing the box, firstly, the original version of this joke is short. After all, it was said by Xiao Yueyue in the spring evening. It is not long enough. Generally, the cross talk of Deyun Society takes at least twenty or thirty minutes, and the cross talk of the characters lasts longer. Secondly, this joke is already short, but you cut half of it out without even mentioning it for fun. I'm actually very tolerant of this novel, and I don't mean to be sarcastic or anything bad. I just want the author to watch Deyun Club's cross talk, go to Youku, and if you don't have a member, go to Station B. Go watch Lao Guo's cross talk in the theater, don't watch it on TV.
I just want to know who the heroine is.
I just want to know who the heroine is.
Too ordinary
The writing is really not good, there are many typos, and I don't even know the basic knowledge of cross talk. It's bullshit. It's called digging out the baggage. I dig out the baggage with my hands. I continue to say, can the author listen to the cross talk carefully and understand the cross talk before writing the article? What the protagonist and Sun Yue said at the beginning does not sound like a serious cross talk. They are basically using the cross talk of several popular partners. The donkey's lips in the vivid writing are not the same as the horse's mouth, and the upper part is not the same as the lower part. What do you think? Ah?
Quietly
Taking advantage of the fact that the author is not popular now, I guess no one will notice if I give him a five-star review.
Too ordinary
Some places have not been changed and it feels very awkward. There are places where the terminology that should be used doesn't work. In some places, people who do not understand cross talk may think it is true and then confuse it.
Sorry, there are points in the first chapter that I really want to complain about.
When you become an apprentice in cross talk, you should be called "Master", not "Master"! Compared with the master, the sense of respect for the master is much lighter. If you see a bicycle repairman on the street, you can call him "Master," but it is different. You can't just call him Master, nor can you be called "Master" casually. Generally speaking, a person can only call one person a master in a profession, but basically anyone with a certain skill can be called a master. Before writing a novel, I would like to ask you to read the background. Otherwise, it will be like the Qing Dynasty costumes appearing in a novel about the Ming Dynasty. People who don't understand will be fooled, and people who understand will not be able to stand it at all.
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I hope the author can see me
There are too many typos, and if you want to use this joke, just write it all, don't use a little bit, it's not a cross talk at all (it's just a personal statement, don't criticize if you don't like it)
Not bad
I feel like I changed Brother Braid's name to Che Su Yunming. The content is almost the same as Brother Braid's. I don't think it's necessary.
Please update
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It feels like it's not a cross talk at all.
Although it is a novel, can you roughly respect the actual situation?
Not to mention anything else, just seal the few chapters and seal them. Lao Guo himself said at the front that they would be sealed today. . . Can you go and watch Deyun Club's boxed performance? From the beginning, all the members will be on stage together. Also, the joke uttered by the protagonist when sealing the box, firstly, the original version of this joke is short. After all, it was said by Xiao Yueyue in the spring evening. It is not long enough. Generally, the cross talk of Deyun Society takes at least twenty or thirty minutes, and the cross talk of the characters lasts longer. Secondly, this joke is already short, but you cut half of it out without even mentioning it for fun. I'm actually very tolerant of this novel, and I don't mean to be sarcastic or anything bad. I just want the author to watch Deyun Club's cross talk, go to Youku, and if you don't have a member, go to Station B. Go watch Lao Guo's cross talk in the theater, don't watch it on TV.
I just want to know who the heroine is.
I just want to know who the heroine is.
Too ordinary
The writing is really not good, there are many typos, and I don't even know the basic knowledge of cross talk. It's bullshit. It's called digging out the baggage. I dig out the baggage with my hands. I continue to say, can the author listen to the cross talk carefully and understand the cross talk before writing the article? What the protagonist and Sun Yue said at the beginning does not sound like a serious cross talk. They are basically using the cross talk of several popular partners. The donkey's lips in the vivid writing are not the same as the horse's mouth, and the upper part is not the same as the lower part. What do you think? Ah?
Quietly
Taking advantage of the fact that the author is not popular now, I guess no one will notice if I give him a five-star review.
Too ordinary
Some places have not been changed and it feels very awkward. There are places where the terminology that should be used doesn't work. In some places, people who do not understand cross talk may think it is true and then confuse it.
Sorry, there are points in the first chapter that I really want to complain about.
When you become an apprentice in cross talk, you should be called "Master", not "Master"! Compared with the master, the sense of respect for the master is much lighter. If you see a bicycle repairman on the street, you can call him "Master," but it is different. You can't just call him Master, nor can you be called "Master" casually. Generally speaking, a person can only call one person a master in a profession, but basically anyone with a certain skill can be called a master. Before writing a novel, I would like to ask you to read the background. Otherwise, it will be like the Qing Dynasty costumes appearing in a novel about the Ming Dynasty. People who don't understand will be fooled, and people who understand will not be able to stand it at all.
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Yes, there were only two or three cross talk books written by Qidian, and the number of words was very small. This one is now regarded as a masterpiece. Keep updating and it will get better and better. I personally believe that there is a market for writing cross talk + entertainment. Nowadays, those who write entertainment articles are too popular. Stars, singers, writers, and directors are just a few of them, and they are a bit tired of aesthetics. There is a huge market for cross talk entertainment, now let's see who updates it faster. Your update speed and word count make it the best. Write down everything you can think of, so that everyone behind you will be your younger brother. There is a book called Deyun Yijie, which is not threatening at all. He is a bit putting the cart before the horse. He is just doing other things under the guise of cross talk.




Clear water river




# It's a bit of a pity for a good book. # The protagonist travels through a parallel world and becomes Lao Guo's stuttering disciple, and counterattacks with the help of the system. Visually, the protagonist is preparing to ascend to the top of the entire entertainment industry. # It is said that the system is a cross talk system, and then a master-level singing skill will be given at the beginning... Why don't you just call the entertainment system? # Cross talk content takes up a bit too much. Because it is a copy of the current Deyun Club cross talk, if you draw so many pages to "literate" the cross talk, it is better to listen to the cross talk directly. # The author did not do enough homework. The protagonist relied on "Exploring Qingshui River" to get his first shot after time travel. The author actually didn't figure out whether it was a Taiping lyrics or a folk song... It can be seen that the preparation is not very sufficient. # I recommend this book mainly because I usually like to listen to cross talk, and when I see some cross talk, I am always quite interested. # As an aside, "Crosstalk Master" is also good, but I don't know why I can't watch it. Maybe when it comes to cross talk masters, I only agree with Lao Guo. # What's going on with this book? No matter what novels I read, it's still included in my similar recommendations? ?




A book that Shan Zhujun likes very much. It is different from the rebirth of copying songs. The protagonist of copying books has a rich identity, such as a singer or a street author. This book can be said to be very innovative in this regard. In addition, the writing is not bad, and the plot and story are not bad... Boy, why don't you click on it and take a look?















