Starting from the First Brother Deyun to Dominate

Starting from the First Brother Deyun to Dominate

by Love Eating Pomelo

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409Kwords190chapters
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Ch. 190响彻南北【终章】
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About This Novel

When he woke up, Su Ming found that he had traveled to a parallel city and became the lonely former brother of Deyun Society. Fortunately, he awakened the cross talk system and came back with the song "Exploring Qingshui River", which caused a huge sensation and thus began his road to cross talk dominance! Ps: The introduction is weak, please read the text. Ps2: Su Yunming: I see you are dry and lazy, you don't know how to vote at all, I'm going to ask you! Ps: Book Club-Deyun Headquarters: 829718061, let's drive together! Ps3: New book released "From Jinyiwei to Martial Arts Supreme", please support me.

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Deyun is Not Empty80mo ago

I hope the author can see me

There are too many typos, and if you want to use this joke, just write it all, don't use a little bit, it's not a cross talk at all (it's just a personal statement, don't criticize if you don't like it)

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Sweet75mo ago

Not bad

I feel like I changed Brother Braid's name to Che Su Yunming. The content is almost the same as Brother Braid's. I don't think it's necessary.

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End Point82mo ago

Please update

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Qu Xi74mo ago

It feels like it's not a cross talk at all.

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Cyx80mo ago

Although it is a novel, can you roughly respect the actual situation?

Not to mention anything else, just seal the few chapters and seal them. Lao Guo himself said at the front that they would be sealed today. . . Can you go and watch Deyun Club's boxed performance? From the beginning, all the members will be on stage together. Also, the joke uttered by the protagonist when sealing the box, firstly, the original version of this joke is short. After all, it was said by Xiao Yueyue in the spring evening. It is not long enough. Generally, the cross talk of Deyun Society takes at least twenty or thirty minutes, and the cross talk of the characters lasts longer. Secondly, this joke is already short, but you cut half of it out without even mentioning it for fun. I'm actually very tolerant of this novel, and I don't mean to be sarcastic or anything bad. I just want the author to watch Deyun Club's cross talk, go to Youku, and if you don't have a member, go to Station B. Go watch Lao Guo's cross talk in the theater, don't watch it on TV.

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Light Ink and Fleeting Time·su Ying Qingyun72mo ago

I just want to know who the heroine is.

I just want to know who the heroine is.

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Reader 2022092714325509689314180mo ago

Too ordinary

The writing is really not good, there are many typos, and I don't even know the basic knowledge of cross talk. It's bullshit. It's called digging out the baggage. I dig out the baggage with my hands. I continue to say, can the author listen to the cross talk carefully and understand the cross talk before writing the article? What the protagonist and Sun Yue said at the beginning does not sound like a serious cross talk. They are basically using the cross talk of several popular partners. The donkey's lips in the vivid writing are not the same as the horse's mouth, and the upper part is not the same as the lower part. What do you think? Ah?

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Two O'clock on the Line82mo ago

Quietly

Taking advantage of the fact that the author is not popular now, I guess no one will notice if I give him a five-star review.

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Lao Qin, My Boyfriend80mo ago

Too ordinary

Some places have not been changed and it feels very awkward. There are places where the terminology that should be used doesn't work. In some places, people who do not understand cross talk may think it is true and then confuse it.

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User 0158520955562mo ago

Sorry, there are points in the first chapter that I really want to complain about.

When you become an apprentice in cross talk, you should be called "Master", not "Master"! Compared with the master, the sense of respect for the master is much lighter. If you see a bicycle repairman on the street, you can call him "Master," but it is different. You can't just call him Master, nor can you be called "Master" casually. Generally speaking, a person can only call one person a master in a profession, but basically anyone with a certain skill can be called a master. Before writing a novel, I would like to ask you to read the background. Otherwise, it will be like the Qing Dynasty costumes appearing in a novel about the Ming Dynasty. People who don't understand will be fooled, and people who understand will not be able to stand it at all.

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