My Wife is Very Cold and Cold

My Wife is Very Cold and Cold

by Gentle Boy

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Ye hope committed suicide and came to the underworld. In a hurry to be reincarnated, she forgot about Meng Po Tang... When Po Meng saw that she was in trouble, she searched for her soul and sealed her memory. As compensation, Ye hope could escape death once. When she woke up, her memories of her previous life were restored, and she thought she had traveled through time. Such a cliche plot, but she is the only one who not only has no memory, but also has no skills. So what to do? The only option is to wander around, pass five levels and kill six generals, pretend to be a beauty and bring disaster to the country, and live in prosperity in the world. While working hard to become a god, he adopted a beautiful little beggar. ... As her memory recovered bit by bit, Ye hope discovered that she was actually reborn, and the little guy next to her was her enemy in her previous life. Jin Xianjun? It's still too late to run! "Where are you going first?" The little beggar, already about 1.8 Meters tall, grabbed Ye hope's collar and pulled her into his arms. The struggle was useless, Ye hope knew that she had capsized.

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- "If you turn your love for a girl into wine, I'm afraid a cat ten miles away will be drunk and say he likes the girl." - Emperor Qianyu × Mo Chi. The meeting of these two people was truly destined by fate. Di Qianyu came here disguised as a man (?). Mochi, who lives next door, became curious about An Yi because of a piece of stuff given to her by Emperor Qianyu. Climbing over the wall to find this person was also the beginning of a successful relationship between the two. The plot descriptions inserted here by the author are more natural and appropriate, flowing smoothly and will not appear harsh. The [Weird Man Inn] is really strange. There are people from different backgrounds inside. However, the owner clearly discovered Di Qianyu's true identity but did not expose her and allowed her to stay in the inn. This owner must also have a secret. And how will the next story of these two people develop? Looking forward to the follow-up articles. Then here are some small comments for the author. First of all, in Chapter 1, did the woman's attitude change a little... Too quickly? One second he was kneeling on the ground begging him for help, and the next second there was coldness in his eyes? Although there are corresponding transitional plots in the middle, it is still recommended that the author make corresponding small changes. Then Chapter 6, "Knowing the couch". It must be a typo. Finally, it is suggested that the author can portray and describe the image of Emperor Qianyu, and then highlight Mochi's identity from the side. This will help to leave a deep impression in the readers' minds and make it easier to continue writing the subsequent plot development. - I hope the author will continue to work hard! Work hard to update the code! I wish this book a huge success! Can be explored and discovered by more people! - Keep the cream.

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