The Alchemist in Death

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I've only read Chapter 8 and it seems quite comfortable. One of the uncomfortable things to watch is that people are directly named actor A and actor B, which looks very outlandish. Others look quite comfortable. ̮ Crimin I will continue to update my thoughts on the book below until I finish reading it, or I will be poisoned to death.

I know why the rating is low, so I write a Bleach fanfic. What is the highlight of Death? It's a Zanpakutō, Zanpakutō. Hey, it turns out that the protagonist doesn't even have a Zanpakutō. This is very embarrassing. Author like this, why else would you write a Shinigami fanfic? If you write a Zanpakutō ability that complements the protagonist's alchemy ability, people will look at it, and the result will be no Zanpakutō. . . . . What kind of Bleach fanfic are you writing?

The protagonist always faces things with a contemptuous attitude, always emphasizes that he has been a human being for two generations, etc., Which is a low level of writing.

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I can only say that the author did not consider the market public and just followed his own ideas, but he didn't write it well. In fact, if he wrote according to your ideas, it would be better to write a new book instead of a fanfic. The original fanfic of Death God is very small, so this will eliminate some parts and make no money!

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I don't know if the author has seen that in the later stages, the Kidō is just a auxiliary and cannot kill enemies at all. The Shinigami is the Zanpakutō as the main character and the Kidō as a auxiliary.

Is Kamui's mother a fictional spiritual king?