Ningshu
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The plot is good, but the sentences don't make sense
There are too many "although, but", the sentences are not smooth, and there are grammatical errors everywhere. I suggest that the author read it through again after finishing writing. In the article, I feel that the author is too obsessed with literate speech and does not use certain words and phrases well, making the whole paragraph awkward to understand. I hope the author can improve it. If it is not possible, it can be written in vernacular.
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Official(2)Scraped 6d ago
When will you update? Online reminder
The plot is good, but the sentences don't make sense
There are too many "although, but", the sentences are not smooth, and there are grammatical errors everywhere. I suggest that the author read it through again after finishing writing. In the article, I feel that the author is too obsessed with literate speech and does not use certain words and phrases well, making the whole paragraph awkward to understand. I hope the author can improve it. If it is not possible, it can be written in vernacular.
