My Girlfriend Ran Away Again

If you write in a way that makes people feel more comfortable and happy, your grades won't be so bad. What's important in reading novels is the sense of immersion. The protagonist's life is really too frustrating and unsatisfactory, and everyone looks down on him (i. E. The loser-like beginning). It's not easy for him to have a rich biological mother. As a result, even his own son has to rely on others to tell him how he has been doing these years. And have you forgotten the green tea girl at the beginning? She bullied the protagonist twice, and in the end, she has not been revenged even after it was published. Is she still a main character? This novel is a slow-burning novel? It will take a long time for Wen Liang to return to normal, a long time for Lin Yiren to know that the protagonist is his first love, a long time for the protagonist to know that he is Xiaomi's father, a long time for the protagonist to understand the warmth of his heart, and there are also other heroines' feelings to be written. Except for a few of them, no one really cares about the protagonist. But! Are you sure there will be many readers who can persist in reading? Judging from the content of the chapters you posted, it's a bit difficult. The protagonist himself is so uncomfortable that he almost cried. It's not satisfactory at all. It's the same as the book My Ex-Girlfriend Is a Big Star. It starts off in a difficult mode, then suddenly gets rich (Xia Tian's biological mother) makes life comfortable, and then collects the harem. ----The dividing line I guess someone must have said: "Then go and read the cool novels, what a waste of time." I just want to say: Can't you add some sugar to the novel?

This Brother Cheng was really harmful to people, and he died miserably in the end. I heard that there is endless retribution for the cycle of cause and effect.

How should I put it? I think this novel is generally average. Although the subject matter is very novel, there are also many unreasonable things (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it) First of all, Xiyan, who has always liked the protagonist, told you that you didn't like her and it was normal for her to refuse. However, when she said she would jump off the building, the protagonist did not take it seriously, and he was so heartbroken that she was not sad at all after being rejected. She was too heartbroken. No matter whether she was joking or not, you should go and see it. After all, human life is at stake. Secondly, Wen Liang, whom the protagonist likes, doesn't like the protagonist much. In this case, why should he keep chasing her so hard? This makes everyone unhappy. There are so many beauties who love him, why don't they know how to cherish them? The protagonist's emotional nerves are too rough. Third, I think the protagonist is a person who simply relies on the protagonist's aura. Putting aside the protagonist's aura, the protagonist is not much different from ordinary people like us. Whether it is appearance, temperament or ability, he is just an ordinary person like us. Although it is easy to substitute, he is the protagonist after all. Not necessarily top level, he must be a little outstanding. Writing the protagonist is a bit too weak. Even some supporting characters are better than the protagonist. After all, the protagonist should have some better advantages. Fourth, the relationship line is too tortuous. The woman who likes the protagonist is sad because the protagonist has someone he likes, and never takes the initiative to express her feelings. The woman Wen Liang likes does not have much affection for the protagonist, and she knows that those women like her, but always chooses to escape. She almost never thinks about how to solve the problem, which ultimately leads to many tragedies. This situation is really much worse than a love triangle. Fifth, the protagonist's personal strength has not improved much from the beginning to dozens of chapters, and some women around the protagonist, such as the protagonist's boss Ye Qingcheng, do not have a particularly good opinion of him, especially Shen Ningxue, who hates the protagonist very much. The protagonist is not very powerful yet. In this case, if they want to Pay the protagonist, the protagonist has no power to fight back at all. I personally suggest that the author greatly improves the strength of the protagonist. After all, the protagonist should look like a protagonist. Even if he is not top-notch, he should not be such a mediocre ordinary person. The comprehensive strength of some supporting characters with little plot cannot exceed the protagonist. The above is purely my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it, thank you

I have been reading Captain's books for four or five years. I started chasing CC, Pocket, Captain, Coke, and No. 4 From Bodyguard. From the beginning to now, I really like the book written by it. I feel uncomfortable if I don't read it for a day. I read it every day to see if there are any updates. I can read it more than ten times a day. Emmm, I hope CC, Pocket, Captain, and Coke can get back to their original health. Exercise more. Your body is better than anything else. Pay attention to your health, brother! Finally, I also know the captain's old routine, and I would like to write a follow-up... I just don't know if the captain agrees or not. If he doesn't let me write a follow-up, I can write a side story. ('▿')

I have read all the books, who wants to have sex with my sister? Below is a picture of my sister. If you don't have a car or a house, you don't have to come to me.

The golden finger given to the protagonist is very awkward and embarrassing. It is better to have a system to make the protagonist stronger. The protagonist is too weak and feels aggrieved. This kind of daily stationery should be warm and sweet. I have a sign-in system. Who would believe a rumor in the city? It's unreasonable to believe that the protagonist's girlfriend will have good luck. Once the novel starts and so many female characters are introduced, it will be difficult to write later. An ordinary-looking person is also an ordinary person. If there are many people like it, the protagonist should be made outstanding and unique. The female should not have a crush on the protagonist and have a childhood relationship. It is too fake. It should be close to reality. Anyway, it seems a bit inconsistent to me. If the protagonist of an urban novel is ordinary, I think it should be sweeter and add a bit of comedy and warmth. The above are my suggestions.

What a real scumbag! He likes his sister and likes her, but he doesn't realize it. He's such a scumbag. He wants to rob his own brother. It's miserable to be a brother with such a person. Maybe you have a beautiful wife, and he might be able to get you a divorce and then rob your wife.

I'm almost sick of watching this. Can you change it to something else? Are these two classics going to be passed down by you time-travelers?

Recently, light novels have almost been submerged by Douluo Dou Po fanfics. Come on, the author, his writing style is good. After all, he has written several books and has experience.

Take advantage of the fact that there are few people. I'm a fool😷. Whee