Take Space to Roam
by The Book Of Blooming Flowers
About This Novel
On a certain day of a certain year, a certain month, a girl got a jade pendant in the SDIC market and after she dripped blood, she got a huge and infinite space. Such a good thing made him very happy, but what followed was endless wandering. When he woke up in the morning, he found that the room had changed, his body had changed, the only thing that remained unchanged was his space and his soul. It was like a wandering traveler wandering in every time and space, watching one story after another.
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Official(47)Scraped 21d ago
The writing is pretty good, but I can't tell the difference between her and him. It's too confusing.
The writing is pretty good, but I can't tell the difference between her and him. It's too confusing.
There is no distinction between him and her, one is him and the other is her.
obsessive-compulsive disorder
She can't figure out whether it's possible not to have a boy and a girl.
"He" and "she" are a mess. It makes people dizzy.
The idea is relatively good and the connection is OK, but there are some details that need to be paid attention to. "She" is always written as "he" Also, there are no quotation marks when speaking, which is not something I'm used to.
It's okay, but there are too many typos, I can't tell the difference between men and women, and the commas and periods are also used inappropriately.
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Nice. However, sometimes it becomes confusing. Can't tell the difference between men and women. Is the writing okay?
Why does the heroine have to be called him as a boy, shouldn't she be called a girl as she? It's so bad that I sometimes think it's a boy's novel
I want to ask if this is a man or a woman?
The book is still good, much better than others, much better than others.
The front is good, the back is a bit messy
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Community(0)
Official(47)Scraped 21d ago
The writing is pretty good, but I can't tell the difference between her and him. It's too confusing.
The writing is pretty good, but I can't tell the difference between her and him. It's too confusing.
There is no distinction between him and her, one is him and the other is her.
obsessive-compulsive disorder
She can't figure out whether it's possible not to have a boy and a girl.
"He" and "she" are a mess. It makes people dizzy.
The idea is relatively good and the connection is OK, but there are some details that need to be paid attention to. "She" is always written as "he" Also, there are no quotation marks when speaking, which is not something I'm used to.
It's okay, but there are too many typos, I can't tell the difference between men and women, and the commas and periods are also used inappropriately.
,
Nice. However, sometimes it becomes confusing. Can't tell the difference between men and women. Is the writing okay?
Why does the heroine have to be called him as a boy, shouldn't she be called a girl as she? It's so bad that I sometimes think it's a boy's novel
I want to ask if this is a man or a woman?
The book is still good, much better than others, much better than others.
The front is good, the back is a bit messy
