My Enemies Have Become My Companions

I can still read the first few chapters, but I don't know what to say about the later ones. Pig's feet have no ability to grow. There is no outline of the writing, the relationship with the heroine jumps over and over again, why I love and why I hate, and there is no transformation process, including a change of face, right? It's a bit like a girl's novel. No one here will read this writing.

This book is truly one of the best of its kind. What I'm talking about is not the author's plot setting, but his characterization of the characters, which is really something. What impressed me most was the little fox Yin Tingxue inside. Oddly enough, the author's writing is relatively rough when describing other heroines, but once he writes about the little fox, there will be a fresh and delicate beauty, like the breeze blowing on the face, or the moistening and silent spring rain. Compared to the flat female protagonists in other books, this is a breath of fresh air. Even though I am a grown man, I often smile like an aunt. As for the details, you can go and see for yourself. Anyway, it won't be too disappointing.

There is a strange smell, but as long as I think about being a female channel, it suddenly becomes clear.

The back part is too long-winded, water, whether the concubine will give birth to a child or not, there are several pictures of water, coaxing the concubine to return the water, the more you look at it, the more you lick the dog.

When I suddenly write an rq after seeing it well, I feel as uncomfortable as eating a fly. Two people love each other and live together every day. Because of the practice, at most they didn't reach the last step. You didn't touch it at all in writing. At least it would be possible if the two people didn't love each other. Your logic is illogical and it is completely forced qcqs. It seems that the qcqs you wrote at the beginning are not poisonous. I thought about it, but it turns out that you have tricked people into being poisonous. After reading the beginning of your book and reading it, I think most of it is pure love. I don't understand why I wrote this kind of character plot. Anyway, it persuaded me to give up, and I won't dare to read other books by the author in the future.

First of all, it is well written. I personally feel that it is very good. I also like this type of writing. Then there are the plot characters. In terms of plot, I think it is a bit biased towards Little Fox and Da Yin (not that I don't like these two characters, just the plot). Many characters become invisible after the first paragraph, and then they are all Little Fox and Da Yin. I can understand that the characters are very popular, so I write more , but if there are multiple female leads like this, I still think it is better to watch a single female lead, just like Zhou Yitang, who has always said that he feels guilty about his wife in the previous life, and that position has been reserved for you, but the master has appeared in many appearances, neither salty nor indifferent, and it has always been like this () I hope the author can give more plots to other female protagonists in the future. For example, Min Ming, the concubine of Winter, feels very marginalized. I don't expect a bowl of water to be equal. I only hope that other characters can also have their own stories with Chen Yi. Having said all this, I actually hope that this book will be better. I like this book very much. I also like characters like Zhou Yitang, Qin Qingluo, and Dong Guifei. If you can write a good plot like Da Yin, I believe you can also write a good plot for other characters, so that they can have a story with Chen Yi. I really have nothing to say about the plot of Da Yin. I like it very much, but I have never liked people who are self-righteous, so I like this character sometimes and dislike it. It's almost the same as Chen Yi at the beginning hahaha Finally, I hope the author will give you a lot of support, meow. By the way, I was also distorted when reading this book. Hahaha. Sometimes I don't want to read it during the day, and then at night I feel very eager to read it. I can't stop. I want to know how long the other characters' plots will last. Isn't it really going to drag hundreds of chapters to the end? It's really not good. () If the author can read it, I hope to read it. Meow

The writing is very delicate, but as a commercial novel, it is not a good decision to deliberately use some words that are rarely used by modern people (such as "杌駧"). After all, you are still wearing a martial arts skin, and you have to consider the readers' perceptions. It can be seen that the author, as a girl, pays great attention to the details of description, and the pace of the novel is also good. However, the above-mentioned habits are not good. First, it reduces the readability of the work. Second, it seems to be showing off, and it feels very like a Kong Yiji-style poor scholar. Also: I personally like the camera changes in this novel. Although it is a bit deliberate, it is rare in online novels. Another comment: I saw this post of yours. How should I put it? You feel that you are not writing a female channel. The problem is that your narrative rhythm and atmosphere shaping are not the methods of a female channel abuse article. It is equivalent to using the routine of a female channel abuse article to try to write a male channel (I don't know if it can be counted).

The main selling point of this book should be the characters, but as the so-called "first heroine", the master's portrayal is a bit too poor. There is too little ink to make it difficult to feel the relationship with the protagonist. The subjective feeling is that she is a tool like a nanny, and the character image is a bit unclear. In contrast, the other female protagonists are indeed written with flesh and blood, and the characters are indeed unique and interesting. The problem is that the changes in emotions are a bit confusing. Except for Minning's emotional process, which can be said to be logical, the emotional changes of Da and Yin do not stand up to scrutiny. The author tried his best to use some very literary and vague words to fool them, but the shortcomings in the plot are really difficult to cover up. In terms of writing, many plots seem a bit too long-winded, especially the handling of the Hehuan Sect. The writing skills are indeed a bit poor. But this did improve significantly after that. The writing style of this article is a very important feature, so it cannot be completely ignored. The author used some "literary youth" writing methods very well in later emotional descriptions. It can be said that it has improved significantly compared to the previous muddy plot. I think the author should clearly understand what the core selling point of the novel is, and write more about the three best-drawn heroines, Da Yin and Minning, and stop writing too many chaotic scene descriptions and battle descriptions. Then, he needs to think about what else the male protagonist can grow, progress, and change, and try to combine it with the growth of these three female protagonists. Among the characters, I like Xiao Yin the most, so my personal hope is that Xiao Yin can have more emotions and plots. However, one thing is that Xiao Yin's emotions change too quickly, which makes it difficult to explore the personality of many subsequent characters about Xiao Yin. I hope the author can work hard and I will continue to follow it.

I originally wanted to write a review after reading the latest chapter, but halfway through I was so angry that I couldn't sleep, so I got up in the middle of the night to write some reviews. First of all, the book is indeed a good book. The characters are three-dimensional, each heroine has her own characteristics, the plot is full of twists and turns, and the foreshadowing is cleverly arranged. The story is full of twists and turns. It is the most exciting novel I have read recently. Then comes the part where the flaws are not concealed. Da Yin's two mysterious operations made me sick. In the first part, he took over the body of the East Palace and refused to reveal his identity in a crisis-ridden environment. The plot still needs to explain it; in the second part, he forced the Lin family's young lady to get pregnant. I didn't understand what she wanted to do at all. Did I really think that this kind of thing would not be exposed? Even if it won't be revealed, is this act of forcing someone to get pregnant too vicious? After going through the underworld, Da Yin returned to her heart. I thought I had witnessed her growth, but later I realized that she had not made any progress in more than 600 chapters. It's nice for the heroines to link up with each other's characters. If I remember correctly, Da Yin's character is "desire" and not "stupid". I'm used to seeing authors forcefully de-intellect villains, but it's really rare to forcefully de-intelligent the heroine. How many times is enough for the plot of "Death-seeking-Mugwort"? A poorly developed heroine can really ruin a good impression of a book. At least until now, the character of Da Yin is very disappointing.

What a mess, no beginning or end