You Can't Afford to Offend the Mad Concubine of the God of War

Just exaggerating, like grass and trees without roots. The plot falls into a cliche, blindly powerful, amnesia-like routine, which looks like chewing wax.

I would like to ask the author if this is his first time writing, or if the author is very young. Although this book is about the domineering heroine returning to the good-for-nothing counterattack, the writing style is still a bit immature. Logically speaking, when the heroine returns, shouldn't she focus more on cultivation and cultivating her power? Lian just mentioned a few words casually, and passed it off like soy sauce. Most of them were about how the female protagonist and the male protagonist bickered, and two powerful people quarreled. It felt that the female protagonist and the male protagonist were not very mature and stable, which was a bit childish. Also, the female protagonist Lan Lan didn't care about the master at all. It felt like the heroine and Lan Lan were two It's like they have swapped identities. Lanlan is the master and the heroine is the follower. I feel that the heroine has no deterrent power at all. Since the heroine is Lanlan's master, she should control Lanlan's things. Otherwise, the former master created Lanlan and wouldn't be afraid of it being disobedient. However, it is clear that the heroine is the master, but Lanlan is completely despised. Master, you are not obedient at all. What's more, after the heroine went into the iron box and ate the elixir for the first time, a lot of black things came out of her body. She was so dirty. She finally cultivated her fighting spirit and fell asleep without taking a shower. Isn't she dirty? Although it's not important to say these things, you should explain it in one sentence, right?

It's really 6 and you deleted my comment. The heroine criticized Lu Yan for taking the prince to visit a brothel. It was very illogical. Didn't she open a brothel herself and invite four princes? No comments yet?

Once again, he was a good-for-nothing from time travel, once again the male protagonist wore a mask, and once again he was thrown into the forest of monsters, it was all the same storyline.

I don't know why, but I feel like if Emperor Hades wasn't Bei Ming Zhan, I'd want to abandon the article. Emperor Ming is very powerful. If the male protagonist is Bei Mingzhan, then there will be no one as awesome as Emperor Ming. Bei Mingzhan ate a lot from the heroine. If the male protagonist was Emperor Ming, then Emperor Ming suffered a big loss, while Bei Mingzhan made a lot of money.

I've noticed that my husband has been acting a little weird lately, and I feel like he's looking at me a little differently. My husband told me at night that I feel better-looking than before, and he also said that we went out alone, which made me feel embarrassed. At night, my husband was still very anxious and wanted... Fortunately, I found the right method, and now my husband sticks to me all day long. I feel like I'm back to the sweet time before marriage.

I feel like the heroine is so weak, she only knows how to talk, she doesn't feel like a special soldier...

How should I put it? The heroine has nothing to do with bloodlust. Are the special forces and the God of War so unstable? Each one of them is so weak that I can't stand it any longer...

Keeping a running account, doing things just by talking, offending this and that all day long, do you think the prince is just a fool? ? Are you so stupid? You have low IQ and EQ. How did you become a special soldier? ? Is it playing a game? Be a middle school boy! !

You're not a novice when it comes to telling stories! ? ? Who made the comment, come here, let's talk... After reading the previous few chapters, the heroine gained a power that defied the will of heaven, and she said she wanted to keep it a secret. However, within a day, she was known by N people she promoted, and she was not careful about her ethics in every conversation. Moreover, the heroine had just escaped from death, and she didn't know who did it. How could she trust the people around her? . This kind of plot and writing can only be said to be super ordinary, right? ? ! !