The Sword of Commander-in-chief
by Gold Seeker
About This Novel
The new book "The Lost Ring" has begun to be serialized in the science fiction category. Interested book friends please support it. Thank you all. The competitive salty fish Hua Shang was reborn in a new world where martial arts was king. Blessed by the God of Love with an arrow, he fell in love with... The sword! With his love for kendo, he became the "version hero" on the field of winning the championship. This is a happy story. Sword of Commander-in-Chief reader group number: 805118205
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Official(8)Scraped 20d ago
A bit like a dialogue
There is nothing wrong with the creativity, but the description and rhythm are a bit flawed. It looks like a dialogue. The first few chapters are all narration explaining the background and a lot of dialogue, which is a bit tiring to read. For a new book, readers will subconsciously bring into the world view of the previous book, so it is difficult for the new book to rise. The previous chapters can be streamlined. Give me more description, something a little more rustic. Make some gentle rhythm, otherwise it will look really tiring. There are also some words that feel too casual, and it is easy to feel that the protagonist is a middle school student. This impression is not very good, especially when the author does not have a certain degree of popularity, readers will not have too much patience to discover the advantages. What attracts me to this book is that beauties act handsome and fight each other. I came in thinking about killing the beauties on the opposite side, but the beginning felt a bit too complicated and I was too lazy to read on...
Is it a murderous sword or a pretentious sword?
To be honest, this novel is suitable for beginners. Old bookworms will definitely not read it. It's too pretentious. Brother swords are for killing people, not for looking cool with their equipment.
It's time to show real technology
It's obviously about time travel, martial arts, and cultivating immortality.
ruined
The front is pretty good, there are flaws, but they don't cover up the flaws. But after that Sha Chengjing appeared on the scene, he started to become more and more unbearable, it was simply poison!
🤔
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
It's really beautiful. I like it very much.
Anyone?
Go to sleep(＠￣ー￣＠)
Why are there no comments? The book is obviously very good.
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Official(8)Scraped 20d ago
A bit like a dialogue
There is nothing wrong with the creativity, but the description and rhythm are a bit flawed. It looks like a dialogue. The first few chapters are all narration explaining the background and a lot of dialogue, which is a bit tiring to read. For a new book, readers will subconsciously bring into the world view of the previous book, so it is difficult for the new book to rise. The previous chapters can be streamlined. Give me more description, something a little more rustic. Make some gentle rhythm, otherwise it will look really tiring. There are also some words that feel too casual, and it is easy to feel that the protagonist is a middle school student. This impression is not very good, especially when the author does not have a certain degree of popularity, readers will not have too much patience to discover the advantages. What attracts me to this book is that beauties act handsome and fight each other. I came in thinking about killing the beauties on the opposite side, but the beginning felt a bit too complicated and I was too lazy to read on...
Is it a murderous sword or a pretentious sword?
To be honest, this novel is suitable for beginners. Old bookworms will definitely not read it. It's too pretentious. Brother swords are for killing people, not for looking cool with their equipment.
It's time to show real technology
It's obviously about time travel, martial arts, and cultivating immortality.
ruined
The front is pretty good, there are flaws, but they don't cover up the flaws. But after that Sha Chengjing appeared on the scene, he started to become more and more unbearable, it was simply poison!
🤔
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
It's really beautiful. I like it very much.
Anyone?
Go to sleep(＠￣ー￣＠)
Why are there no comments? The book is obviously very good.
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The competitive salty fish Hua Shang was reborn in a new world where martial arts was king. Blessed by the God of Love with an arrow, he fell in love with... The sword! With his love for kendo, he became the "version hero" on the field of winning the championship. This is a happy story.
I have only one question about this book, why is it not popular? I really don't understand
It's a very passionate book, with a sense of young people's vitality revealed between the lines! It makes me feel like I'm watching My Hero Academia, which is great!
Great book
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