Hang up and Get Rich

Since the new year. After being removed from the new book list, the increase in collections has decreased a lot, and the number of recommendation votes has also decreased. This makes the author depressed, frightened, reflective, and introspective. Is it because the plot of the offline party is too long and the progress in the villa is too slow? Or is the protagonist too useless, not promiscuous enough, and not bulldozer enough? Or maybe the plot lacks tension and is not exciting enough. Before the villa plot, the collection naturally increased by more than 100 every day, and the results were exciting. However, in time for the Chinese New Year, there have been no contracts or recommendations. In addition, I have no experience, I am too upright, and I update too quickly, which leads to the newcomer list quickly. As a result, the current collection increase has dropped to only twenty or thirty per day. On reflection, is it the plot reason or the reason why it is off the list and no one can see it. Reflect on yourself, is the plot too bland and not relaxed enough? Is the character possible to be natural? Looking forward to it, how much increase will there be if the recommendation comes? I'm worried. Among the students who have already collected it, how many are still following it? I had a dream last night. I dreamed that I wrote an excerpt and there were nine comments there. I woke up excited. It seems to be a plot about a certain character, or the double-sided personality of Min Ting or Zheng Xue, I forgot the details... The feeling of writing a book is amazing. When someone likes it, money and royalties are secondary, and you will be full of motivation to update and save the manuscript. When no one likes it and no one reads it, I don't even want to write down the three-digit guarantee of a thousand words. So, my friends who are here, asking for book reviews and opinions. There is something to see in each one, and each one is precious. It's best to criticize it, such as: it doesn't look good, it's not exciting enough, the protagonist is useless, the plot is not smooth, I don't like the setting, Fairyland is too weird, and Marvel is too weird. There are many and mixed characters, there is no main plot, the car speed is too slow, the movie is young, not heroic enough, too bland, there is no slap in the face... Etc. Ask for a poisonous snake, ask for a ruthless hand. Every time I see a hot work. There are a lot of comments below saying that it is poisonous, cliché, disgusting, a noob, has incorrect views... Etc., And they are all very envious. But for that kind of thing, you usually see more than you spray, a lot more. Fiction is not reality. It must be exaggerated enough, bloody and clichéd enough to have tension. But there is a degree, which is difficult to grasp, and readers' comments can correct the author's degree. I feel that the plots I write are too realistic. Realism is to put it nicely, and straightforwardness is called blandness. However, some people say that the author should not panic and keep the rhythm. I like this kind of light flow of life. Follow the established outline step by step and wait until the first recommendation comes. On February 15th, at one o'clock at night, I typed these words on my mobile phone. I am not decadent or miserable. I sincerely look forward to feedback from everyone who reads the book. You can like it or hate it, but please don't ignore it... I wish you all a happy Lantern Festival in advance!

Since she has been reborn and has a golden finger, this girl is also devoted to pig's feet, so why should she still treat others? People gave him the first time, but I really can't understand this person like this, ugh~

If you neglect me, I will neglect you, and our relationship will gradually fade away. I can get used to being with you, and I can also get used to being alone without you. Slowly, it will fade away. This is how things in the world are. 'Don't be sad when someone ignores you. Everyone has their own life, and no one can stay with you all the time. The most embarrassing thing is to overestimate your place in other people's hearts. You have worked hard, cherished it, and had a clear conscience. The rest, leave it to fate. There is love and destiny between people. If you cherish me, I will repay you twice as much. If you don't care, why should I cherish it...

Why didn't the author reply to my question? As someone who has read novels for more than ten years, I really think there should be a female protagonist in the middle period. Has the author set up a female protagonist in the outline?

It felt like I was reading a short novel, one sentence after another, without much coherence. I just wrote what came to my mind. Now if I want to make money through live broadcasting, I will reborn and write a few chapters about live broadcasting. If I want to make money from professional games, I will write a few chapters to make a career. Being reborn and still being so mentally ill really brings with it an aura of wisdom. When you are rich, you are arrogant and rude, and you think that everyone you interact with is just for money, and everyone will give up their boyfriend and dignity and integrity just for tens of thousands of dollars. Reading the first few chapters of this book I thought it was a state of leisure and contentment. Who would have thought that the whole thing behind it would be to swipe money, slap women in the face, and throw money at them.

Does this kind of God-oriented theme need a main line or something? Need to write about a reality star? Do you need to write a business line about investing in Douyin, Pinduoduo, etc.? Is there no need to do anything serious, just continue to have fun and be done with it? Do you want to see a heart-warming pure love story, or a harem party? Comments are welcome, I will read them and consider them

I think the author's writing is quite good. The plot is very important when reading the book. The author's plot connection is still okay.

I want to sleep when I see a girl! ! ! ! !

I have read books for so many years. I have never disliked the protagonist of any book. But this book succeeded in making me hate the protagonist, scumbag

The character of the protagonist is so disgusting. He just makes fun of others when he has some money. Is that interesting? Too poisonous, typical loser plus nouveau riche mentality