Wasteland: Unlimited Upgrades for My Items

The plots are exactly the same. Their initial equipment is a nail launcher, and you get a police gun. They eat the bird, and you eat the bird too. The most important thing is that they are still updating it. Dude, you have to wait until they finish it. Isn't it unethical?

The other plots are good, but around Chapter 100, the protagonist's efforts and rewards are completely out of proportion. The protagonist's team developed a toxin that can capture and even tame first-order rock-footed horses alive, breaking the Li family's monopoly in this area. What did you get in exchange for giving it to the church? In exchange for a piece of evolved meat from a late-stage first-order rock-footed horse, this kind of meat is just low-end daily food for second-order evolvers, barely able to supplement their own consumption. As a result, the protagonist even promised to continue to research and give to the church a toxin that is effective against late-stage first-order and even second-order horses. I looked fine from the front, but when I got here I was hit with a big wave of poison. This is equivalent to a large company in modern society. It is being continuously eroded by another company taking advantage of its monopoly advantage. At this time, someone came to the company and said, I have developed a technology of the same level as theirs, which can break the monopoly, and I am ready to sell it to you. Then the boss of the company held a glass of wine worth 100,000 yuan. While drinking, he looked at the technology and expressed satisfaction. Then he said, "Okay, I will reward you with 10,000 yuan."

Chen Shanshan has 2,000 kilograms of strength and is still small, but her speed is much faster. When you go out hunting and just carry the prey on your back, do you still need to get a rickshaw? Wasteland world. Without a unified political power, who will build the roads and who will maintain them? Without good roads, vehicles are a joke. The Queen Mother of Cixi even had a car at that time. It's only open in the city of Beijing. The dirt roads outside are narrow and small. It's muddy after it rains. Do you think it can be driven? They have already written about extraordinary powers, but they still use realistic three-dimensional perspective. Don't the current authors know their brains?

It has appeared many times that "the steel behemoth can accommodate tens of thousands, but there are only a few thousand residents who live in the behemoth." The protagonist of the desert frowned when he saw the fanatical worship. Maya, who do you think you are, with so many idle thoughts? You yourself are just a survivor in a changing situation. Moreover, it was said at the beginning that the protagonist's status should not be low before going to bed. You are a person with status yourself and you are still trying to add trouble. You are not being mean.

No one is reading it because it is too ink-filled. Every time in the plot, for example, when two people are chatting, I have to explain to you back and forth why it is said so in one or two chapters, etc., Or the psychological activities of the previous chapter and a half. Just two or three sentences are enough to cover these points, just show the character's state at that time. Other readers will read it and guess why the protagonist said this, and they will understand it themselves. It will be discussed through comments. The author should pay more attention to the comments and give some answers in the comment area so as not to misunderstand. The main thing is to quickly move forward with the plot, the thrill of leveling up, etc. Everyone knows that there is a saying that after deleting a lot of content in what you write, it will not delay the development of the plot. If so, it's nonsense, delete it immediately. I skipped the whole thing while I was watching it. I fast-forwarded through it at least twice. I didn't read half of it, but I still understood the background, power, and why the protagonist did what he did. So I said it was too ink-tabulous. I've probably been grinding away since I went to the underground and dungeons. But at that time, fortunately, I was able to upgrade quickly and be able to hold on, and there was always Baiye's resource transaction. After that, it's over, it's a background introduction! What kind of holy book is it? It's like a character's autobiography. It needs to be included, but it doesn't need to be written in full. How many words have been written about An Oasis Incident? The author probably didn't have a detailed outline, or the outline didn't pay attention to the approximate number of words to write about the plot. For example, the Oasis Incident must be resolved in how many words. It can't be hundreds of thousands of words (it's just a metaphor, it's not worth it! After thinking about the approximate number of words or chapters, you can know where the events are progressing every day, delete the useless ones, and simply pass them by. This is the rhythm, the rhythm mentioned in the novel. Some great authors have said, If it's as detailed as three thousand battles or foreshadowing, then at least three thousand to ten thousand words should be used to count the gains or pretend to be cool. The specifics may vary, depending on the author's skill, as long as it doesn't make readers feel awkward. I say so because the author has good ideas and talent, but the rhythm is something that can be improved. Unlike us who have ideas but don't have the talent to write, it's like gourmets and cooks, authors and editors. If the editor can be a god, there is no need to be an editor. The author's rhythm is as small as the number of words to advance the plot, and the proportion of words to the plot is good. I also understand that during the writing process, the author has more and more things in his mind, such as background, foreshadowing, character mood, etc. He wants to explain it, or he has to write it out after checking so many things. But it is worth the hard work. This is the hard work behind it, they are just the invisible structure of the book, the hidden reasons for the character. For example, if you say a greedy character, you cannot always write about why he wants to be greedy. It is enough to write about what he did because of this desire, and then just mention a few of the greedy things he did. There is no need to explain the psychology of him, because once or twice is enough. It mainly depends on whether he is a supporting role or a protagonist. In short, the book should be driven by the plot, not filled with explanations and narrations, and cannot be boring. The best persuasion is for the readers to buy in. If it doesn't work, just imitate the master's rhythm and look at books in similar categories to see how tight and loose they are, and how loose the plots are.

Is this a new update? Why is there only one picture?

I saw that if you can't eat horsemeat of the same level, you will become weak, downgraded, and unable to stand it any longer. This setting is too stupid. After all, when you are hungry, you can eat shit. Now it is installed again.

Don't learn from the previous books to increase the range. That's boring. You can increase the power.

Download QQ and read for free. The result is very misleading and very bad.

I want to ask, if a man is not smart, he listens to the sky with his left ear. Are negative entropy increases all your vests? It should be said that if a man is not chic, he is too big. You are all vests.