Super Evil Boy

I have read a novel before, but I have forgotten the name. The plot of the first hundred chapters is almost a replica of that novel. This is normal. Today's urban fantasy novels are basically the same. In the first few dozen chapters, the protagonist pretends to be stupid to show his low profile, which feels a bit childish and makes us readers uncomfortable. Sigh~ Basically, the common problem in all novels is that they weaken the power of firearms. How can you not die after being hit by many bullets? Or your arm can still move after being hit by a sniper rifle. It always feels funny. Is it a toy gun? But as for novels, it's boring to be more realistic. Generally speaking, the layout of the opening chapter of this novel is okay, but the details need to be improved.

I stayed up late to read Chapter 88, and my overall feeling was just one word - aggrieved. ①. It's understandable that he was a big casual cultivator before his rebirth. After his rebirth, he didn't have the strength to pretend to be crazy, but why is he so aggrieved? ②. Tell me! How many times have I written about the various misfortunes of the protagonist's wife! There's no need for water numbers to be so watery! Just write, but why do you have such a cowardly reaction in the follow-up? ③. What's even more amazing is that it's Chapter 88! It's been months since I was reborn! The main character doesn't even have a cell phone! ④. The protagonist takes Han Daqian as his apprentice, and the apprentice arranges a job for the master as the deputy director of a canning factory! ! Master was bullied in various ways in the factory? ! ⑤. Currently, the main character's source of income is entirely dependent on chance. He saved the head of the big family, and later the entire Han family, but the main character still has no money. Summary: The setting of the protagonist makes me feel that he is still in a psychotic state, which is very confusing anyway. Big casual cultivator! How come you have to live a new life so miserable? ? ? It felt okay at the beginning, but became more and more vicious later on. Sorry, gave up ps: personal evaluation, no criticism will be accepted

This is a good novel no matter how you write it, but you completely ruined it by making the protagonist pretend to be a fool. Goodbye

Even those who practice martial arts can fight ten or eight people at the first level. It has completely embarrassed the cultivators.

After reading more than 100 chapters, I felt a little disinterested and many parts could not withstand scrutiny. For example, when Pig's Feet went to a cannery to take up a position, he had a conflict with the security guard and secretary at the door. Why did he know that a big shot was coming to the factory today, and he mentioned it several times that the big shot was coming. But if the security guard and the secretary want to expand the minor conflict of just a little water splashing on the secretary's pants, an adult with normal thinking should be able to distinguish whether a small incident of splashing water on the secretary's pants is less serious than welcoming a big shot. What's more, both parties to the conflict are people from the cannery. Even if one party is a temporary worker, it is difficult for such a big conflict to intensify. From this point of view, the author is obviously creating contradictions for the sake of contradiction, which is far-fetched and cannot withstand scrutiny.

The protagonist is an old monster of cultivation, but he still foolishly thinks that after divorce, others will not seek revenge from Xia Xiwan. Regarding revenge, will the person seeking revenge care about the people around you and your attitude? Even if that Xia Xiwan puts a hat on the protagonist and the two are at odds with each other, as long as the person seeking revenge feels that he has hurt Xia Xiwan and he can get the satisfaction of his ambition, will he care about the relationship between the protagonist and Xia Xiwan? ? ? So Xia Xiwan encountered a conspiracy. As the protagonist of an old monster who has been cultivating for thousands of years, could he not know that people seeking revenge would let Xia Xiwan go just because of their divorce? Moreover, Xia Xiwan is a person whose grandmother does not love her and does not care about her. She is a helpless and weak woman, a bargaining chip for money and power in the family. The protagonist knows that, and her Xia Xiwan The purpose of the divorce is to let her die, so the subsequent plot should be that the protagonist appears after Xia Xiwan dies, or is brought here after being rescued by others. If the protagonist cares about Xia Xiwan, according to Xia Xiwan's situation, the only way to be safe is to stay with the protagonist, so the plot of Xia Xiwan's plot is just a few words.

Personally, I think it is the best of rubbish. It does not write what readers want to see. I hope that people who come in will not be influenced by my personal publication.

What kind of rubbish novel is this? Every chapter is rubbish. Everyone has a lot of nonsense. Every woman in this novel is wanted by someone, and the protagonist meets her every time.

She had just come out of prison. In 2007, she was in a bar. Someone at the table opposite me whistled at her and invited her to drink with me. I drank too much, so I pulled out the dagger I brought with me and stabbed me. This stab lasted fifteen years. I remember that when I entered, there were people all over the street. It's about praying to Buddha, it's cold on a lonely sandbank, etc. It's been fifteen years, things have changed. She came to see me once last year and told me she was getting married. I didn't tell her about commutation of her sentence. After a brief chat, I turned around and left. In the past 15 years, I have farmed, raised pigs and made clothes. , My heart has long been calm. After I came out, I went to see her downstairs once. She was very happy. I was also very happy. It was time for me to think about my life. I had a dream last night. The problem was 15 years ago. Familiar streets and familiar scenes, but I just couldn't find the familiar one. Man, I woke up crying in the dream. The past cannot be taken back. Now all that is left is nostalgia. I am almost 30 and suddenly feel confused. I often can't sleep at night. I sit on the road, drinking wine and smoking alone. I don't know how to take the road ahead. The night before her wedding, I secretly came downstairs to her house. I saw the words "Happy" on the window at the door and the lights in the house were on. I didn't dare to disturb her, so I squatted downstairs and smoked cigarettes one after another. Soon it was daybreak, and there was the sound of car horns and firecrackers in the distance. I knew that the wedding car was coming to pick her up. She was going to be someone else's bride today. She looked very beautiful today. I watched her get into the wedding car. The firecrackers went off and the car drove away. I was still following behind the convoy. Suddenly my phone rang. It was a text message from her. Don't send it. I will be yours in the next life, okay? Forget me, I cried heartbreakingly that day. Not long after, her best friend told me that she saw me squatting downstairs and smoking non-stop that day. She also cried all night and stayed up all night. I have no regrets anymore. Whether I succeed or fail, everything will be in vain when I turn around. Life or death, life only lasts a hundred years, so why should I be obsessed with one result. The only thing I want to do now is to go home and charge my phone. The phone is out of battery and I can't continue editing.

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